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Nameless Site Owner
Joined: 06 Sep 2002 Posts: 1368 Location: Vienna, Austria
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Posted: Wed Dec 31, 2003 12:42 pm Post subject: Part 4 |
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Finally some answers...
Part 4 "I got my money doing... WHAT?!?" of The Visitors has finally been posted. (On the adult side of my site.)
Have fun.
And a happy new year! _________________ I'm a nut, but there are those who appreciate me for it. |
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StormKitty Registered User
Joined: 18 Nov 2003 Posts: 15
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Posted: Wed Dec 31, 2003 2:09 pm Post subject: |
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Hmmm... Can't seem to get to that part of your site today. It looks like I'm getting to a several months old version of it (restored from a several months old backup, perhaps? The posts that used to be on the afterdark forums that had the URL aren't available anymore). _________________ StormKitty |
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Styx Site Owner
Joined: 25 Dec 2002 Posts: 3176 Location: West Covina, California
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Posted: Thu Jan 01, 2004 1:16 pm Post subject: |
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Interesting chapter I think Stan slipped his foot into his mouth a little past his knee more like up to his upper thigh. I think he played it wrong to in my opinion he has every right to be angry but if he had kept his cool and said the right things he could have been the one kicking back waiting for the femmes to come crawling back they'll have him wrapped around their fingers now. But still Good work on this one Nameless can't wait to see what happens next. _________________ "Political Correctness is tyranny with manners." Charlton Heston
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Shadu Registered User
Joined: 21 May 2003 Posts: 336 Location: Barranquilla
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Posted: Fri Jan 02, 2004 2:41 pm Post subject: |
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nice one. i really would like to know what those two are going to ask of him now for i have a feeling a gift is not going to be enough. _________________ __________________
New Dog In Town! |
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Nameless Site Owner
Joined: 06 Sep 2002 Posts: 1368 Location: Vienna, Austria
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Posted: Mon Oct 04, 2004 12:56 pm Post subject: |
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Chapter 5 has been posted. _________________ I'm a nut, but there are those who appreciate me for it. |
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Styx Site Owner
Joined: 25 Dec 2002 Posts: 3176 Location: West Covina, California
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Posted: Mon Oct 04, 2004 1:34 pm Post subject: |
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AWWW NUTS!!! I have to wait till I get home to read it, why the heck couldn't you have posted this yesterday? .... j/k _________________ "Political Correctness is tyranny with manners." Charlton Heston
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Nameless Site Owner
Joined: 06 Sep 2002 Posts: 1368 Location: Vienna, Austria
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Posted: Mon Oct 04, 2004 1:44 pm Post subject: |
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Sorry. I posted it as soon as I finished proofreading it. _________________ I'm a nut, but there are those who appreciate me for it. |
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Styx Site Owner
Joined: 25 Dec 2002 Posts: 3176 Location: West Covina, California
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Posted: Mon Oct 04, 2004 4:12 pm Post subject: |
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No big thing at least now I have something to look forward too this day is turning out to be the mother of all Monday's _________________ "Political Correctness is tyranny with manners." Charlton Heston
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Paladin Registered User
Joined: 01 Jun 2004 Posts: 47 Location: Pittsburgh, Pensyltucky
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Posted: Mon Oct 04, 2004 6:46 pm Post subject: |
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That twist at the end has thrown me for a loop!
Since I like loops, Keep up the romance...err intrigue...err just keep up the good writing! :turn-l:
Secret agent man...<ponders> nope
Secret agent wolf! <ponders> Ya that sounds better!
Is our miscreant hero a fighter?
Is he one to panic?
Is he one to give as good as he gets?
Or is he a coward?
Only the Nameless knows!
Hopfully we will all soon know as well!
Had me going! _________________ Even during our darkest times,
THE LIGHT SHINES!
We got a long way to go,
and a short timt to get there... |
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vladspellbinder Registered User
Joined: 16 Nov 2003 Posts: 58 Location: In the gutter..ohh my location not my minds...
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Posted: Mon Oct 04, 2004 11:59 pm Post subject: |
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About time you got around to this chapter! I had been waiting and waiting…But it was worth it!
Now I just have to wait to see what happens yet again…you are one evil son of a gun Nameless…that’s why I like you so much >:)
(::can't help himself from the 5th smiley in Paladin's post:: "Ow whyd you cut off my hand" "Luke, tell me about your father, what do you know about your Father" "He told me enough, he told me you killed him" "Then there is something I must reveal then..Luke I'm your father, I'm your father, I'm your father <repeat till fade>” “Knock him out the box Luke, knock him out <repeat till end>”) _________________ Crazy Black Panther, obscur and strange as always
Don't mind the horns, they are only there to hold up the halo
Fiendly bloodsucker signing off for now 0>:)
P: retteb elttil a emit ruoy dneps |
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Nameless Site Owner
Joined: 06 Sep 2002 Posts: 1368 Location: Vienna, Austria
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Posted: Tue Oct 05, 2004 1:17 am Post subject: |
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Any speculation who the two furs are?
The MIB (or FIB "Furs In Black") ?
Mafia?
Overzealous fans?
Salesman?
Yehova's wittnesses (or the local equivalent)
Or something completely different...
Anyone who guesses correctly can have a cameo in chapter 6b or 6c. _________________ I'm a nut, but there are those who appreciate me for it. |
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Styx Site Owner
Joined: 25 Dec 2002 Posts: 3176 Location: West Covina, California
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Posted: Tue Oct 05, 2004 2:04 am Post subject: |
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Umm how bout time-share sales furs? Great chapter there oh anonymous one, can't wait to read more. _________________ "Political Correctness is tyranny with manners." Charlton Heston
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Tommy Fox Stone Post Master
Joined: 02 May 2003 Posts: 8694 Location: Angier North Carolina.
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Posted: Tue Oct 05, 2004 2:06 am Post subject: |
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Nameless wrote: | Any speculation who the two furs are?
The MIB (or FIB "Furs In Black") ?
Mafia?
Overzealous fans?
Salesman?
Yehova's wittnesses (or the local equivalent)
Or something completely different...
Anyone who guesses correctly can have a cameo in chapter 6b or 6c. |
He was all ready in the hands of the government when he arrived, I'd have too go with the salesman, after all they do have slavery there... _________________ Due Too Budget Cuts The Light At The End Of The Tunnel Has Been Turned Off.
Doctor Of PF
CSA.
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StormKitty Registered User
Joined: 18 Nov 2003 Posts: 15
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Posted: Tue Oct 05, 2004 11:19 am Post subject: |
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Nameless wrote: | Any speculation who the two furs are?
The MIB (or FIB "Furs In Black") ?
Mafia?
Overzealous fans?
Salesman?
Yehova's wittnesses (or the local equivalent)
Or something completely different...
Anyone who guesses correctly can have a cameo in chapter 6b or 6c. |
Perhaps they were hired by Melanie and Nicolle for some sort of "surprise" they have set up. It's also possible they're out to steal the expensive jewelry he is carrying, but that seems unlikely. _________________ StormKitty |
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vladspellbinder Registered User
Joined: 16 Nov 2003 Posts: 58 Location: In the gutter..ohh my location not my minds...
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Posted: Tue Oct 05, 2004 11:25 am Post subject: |
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Well if they where the Mafia it would to easy since you said they ‘looked painfully like the Mafia’ in your story…
Darn you StormKitty! It was going to be my guess they where there as a scare tactic from the two femmys…I got distracted on my posting though…
So I have no other idea…
:P, mean kitty, no cookie _________________ Crazy Black Panther, obscur and strange as always
Don't mind the horns, they are only there to hold up the halo
Fiendly bloodsucker signing off for now 0>:)
P: retteb elttil a emit ruoy dneps |
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