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caspian Registered User
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Posted: Wed Sep 24, 2003 12:14 pm Post subject: Coments on "To Sing His Own Praises" |
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Well I have finally finished catching up on “To Sing His Own Praises” it is at 10 Pages at the time of me starting this topic.
I like that it has not had any Idiots add any thing completly off the wall in this and every one is doing things with nice subtle hints not trying all at once to steal the entire sorry line.
I like the respect being given by pat and Shirh Khan to not interrupt Josh and Fluffybun's story line till they are given hints to do so.
I like the hints Pat and Shirh Khan have given each other and look forward to seeing how they run into each other a ranger and a druid usually go nicely together.
I am enjoying immensely the interaction between Rob and Ellani
One other reason I set this up separately is so those of who read it can add comments with out them also distracting from the story at the time.
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Posted: Thu Sep 25, 2003 9:57 am Post subject: |
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Heh... Caspian, thanks for the positive evaluation of this *ahem* little RP.
As for foolish interruptions, that's easily dealt with.
- Take the offending fur, and place Ellani before him, her war hammers in her paws.
- Let Ellani swing her hammers, one to each side of the fur's head.
- Voilà, the offending fur is taught that it wasn't nice of him to interrupt, and other potential foolish interruptions are too terrified to even come up.
I'm kidding of course, she'd just throw her hatchet...
All the rest is a matter of very careful planning ahead... about 15 seconds of it.
And thank you for placing this comment into a separate thread.
Ellani T'gano (or her player at least)
PS: Any other reactions are greatly appreciated. I'm constantly striving to improve on my (RPing) style. _________________ Lt. Stacey 'Target, lock, KILL' Fluffybun reporting.
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caspian Registered User
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Posted: Sun Sep 28, 2003 9:03 pm Post subject: |
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O'boy poor Rob he has to learn Ellina does not seem to hace a half measures point. It is all or nothing with her.
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Fluffybun Site Owner
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Posted: Mon Sep 29, 2003 7:24 am Post subject: |
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caspian wrote: | O'boy poor Rob he has to learn Ellina does not seem to hace a half measures point. It is all or nothing with her. |
He's learning it pretty well, methinks. Granted, he should have phrased his first command more carefully, but everyone has to start somewhere.
Ellani T'gano (or her player at least) _________________ Lt. Stacey 'Target, lock, KILL' Fluffybun reporting.
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Posted: Tue Sep 30, 2003 3:37 pm Post subject: |
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That was a surprisingly good read. _________________ I'm a nut, but there are those who appreciate me for it. |
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Posted: Wed Oct 01, 2003 9:11 am Post subject: |
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What! No bananas? TVDave would be so disapointed
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Posted: Wed Oct 01, 2003 12:43 pm Post subject: |
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Jugs, Oh boy! Like we did not see that coming _________________ Caspian
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Posted: Thu Oct 02, 2003 9:58 am Post subject: |
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Well that bear sure was full of himself _________________ Caspian
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Posted: Fri Oct 03, 2003 12:45 pm Post subject: |
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Soon to be showing " Rob of the living Dead"
LOL
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Posted: Tue Oct 07, 2003 7:40 pm Post subject: |
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Poor poor Pat so close to a kinder spirit and does not know what he wants. Poor poor Pat _________________ Caspian
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Posted: Sat Oct 11, 2003 4:01 pm Post subject: |
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What no story up dates in a day +? Ack suffering withdrawal Ack _________________ Caspian
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Posted: Mon Oct 13, 2003 3:41 am Post subject: |
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Greetings to thee, noble bear,
there's no more reason to despair.
The story has been resumed as thou canst see,
and it shall be continued, I promise to thee.
I know, this rhyme s****, but I'm a mathematician, not a poet.
Apologies to Dr. Leonard 'Bones' H. McCoy, AKA Kelley DeForest in RL, for massacring one of his lines.
Signed,
Stacey 'Fluffybun' (or her player at least) _________________ Lt. Stacey 'Target, lock, KILL' Fluffybun reporting.
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Posted: Tue Oct 14, 2003 2:28 pm Post subject: |
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Now that is going to be one really pissed necromancer. _________________ I'm a nut, but there are those who appreciate me for it. |
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Posted: Fri Oct 17, 2003 10:27 am Post subject: |
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It would appear that Thad could use some losening up and Rob is just the fur for the job. Now if Thad could just relax and enjoy the fun. Thad could call the entire addience fools and they would think it a joke. _________________ Caspian
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Posted: Sat Oct 18, 2003 12:23 pm Post subject: |
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and so the weave thickens. Where we once had 4 strands we now have a four string Braid. Now to see how tight the weave.
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