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Fishburne Administrator
Joined: 23 Jul 2002 Posts: 596 Location: Plano, Texas
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Posted: Fri Jun 06, 2003 7:35 am Post subject: Chapter 3a is Up! |
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go read - lemme know whatcha like and whatcha dont.
Fish _________________ "Do not Taunt Happy Fun God" -Cthulhu |
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Tygon Site Owner
Joined: 03 Apr 2001 Posts: 2497 Location: Isernhagen, Lowersaxony, Germany
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Posted: Fri Jun 06, 2003 10:11 am Post subject: |
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Hmmm... interesting... so the members of SFO aren't the only augmented furs... by far not as it seems. Very interesting.
Great work on the last part, this in action scene. I especially like the technological explanations.
Great work! I'm curious to find out what happened at the end. _________________ Tygon Panthera - name and species
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Concolor Registered User
Joined: 19 Nov 2001 Posts: 832 Location: South Carolina
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Posted: Fri Jun 06, 2003 3:10 pm Post subject: |
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I'd thought as much! Elijah couldn't be the only one, and I am sure most of them did not "slip through the cracks" and escape the long arm of the APO.
Extremely well-written! Format, action, and characterization are all tight ..... and just as complete as they need to be. I need to take notes!
There is a sizable blow-up looming on the horizon. I'll bet Prosyonni isn't going to be at ALL happy with how it turns out, either.
< Eagerly awaiting the rest of the chapter!!!!!!!!! > _________________ Oddly enough, my life is based on a true story. (Ashleigh Brilliant) |
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Xaqtly Registered User
Joined: 07 Mar 2003 Posts: 442 Location: Las Vegas
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Posted: Fri Jun 06, 2003 3:30 pm Post subject: |
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I can't add anything to that other than I liked it as well. Great action. _________________ Changed my name to Kantaro. |
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Fishburne Administrator
Joined: 23 Jul 2002 Posts: 596 Location: Plano, Texas
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Posted: Fri Jun 06, 2003 3:56 pm Post subject: |
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Tygon wrote: | Hmmm... interesting... so the members of SFO aren't the only augmented furs... by far not as it seems. Very interesting. |
Not in the slightest...
Tygon wrote: | Great work on the last part, this in action scene. I especially like the technological explanations. |
Glad you enjoyed it!
The second half will be out this upcoming week. _________________ "Do not Taunt Happy Fun God" -Cthulhu |
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Fishburne Administrator
Joined: 23 Jul 2002 Posts: 596 Location: Plano, Texas
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Posted: Fri Jun 06, 2003 3:58 pm Post subject: |
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Concolor wrote: | I'd thought as much! Elijah couldn't be the only one, and I am sure most of them did not "slip through the cracks" and escape the long arm of the APO.
Extremely well-written! Format, action, and characterization are all tight ..... and just as complete as they need to be. I need to take notes!
There is a sizable blow-up looming on the horizon. I'll bet Prosyonni isn't going to be at ALL happy with how it turns out, either.
< Eagerly awaiting the rest of the chapter!!!!!!!!! > |
And you'd be right. But just who is this elijah you are talking about?
Thanks for the kind comments, sir, I only aim to emulate the greats.
As for the next one...lets say you are right as well as wrong. _________________ "Do not Taunt Happy Fun God" -Cthulhu |
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Fishburne Administrator
Joined: 23 Jul 2002 Posts: 596 Location: Plano, Texas
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Posted: Fri Jun 06, 2003 3:59 pm Post subject: |
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Xaqtly wrote: | I can't add anything to that other than I liked it as well. Great action. |
Thank you! any speculation on the next chapter? _________________ "Do not Taunt Happy Fun God" -Cthulhu |
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Cateagle Site Owner
Joined: 20 Nov 2000 Posts: 1004 Location: Ft. Worth, TX
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Posted: Fri Jun 06, 2003 4:16 pm Post subject: |
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A good read my friend, the action scenes have very good flow. It'll be interesting (!) to see what/who dumped the intense white noise into their commo system.
I suspect that the long-term results of that meeting may not be what either party expected from the meeting.
Thoughtfully,
Cateagle _________________ "But the wildest of all the wild animals was the Cateagle. He walked by himself and all places were alike to him."
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Tygon Site Owner
Joined: 03 Apr 2001 Posts: 2497 Location: Isernhagen, Lowersaxony, Germany
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Posted: Fri Jun 06, 2003 10:15 pm Post subject: |
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Concolor wrote: | I'd thought as much! Elijah couldn't be the only one, and I am sure most of them did not "slip through the cracks" and escape the long arm of the APO. |
Elijah? Who is that? I guess I again missed something
Cateagle wrote: | It'll be interesting (!) to see what/who dumped the intense white noise into their commo system. |
What white noise? The squeak? I've heard white noise before and it didn't make squeak sounds.
Fishburne wrote: | Thank you! any speculation on the next chapter? |
Oh yes! But I'll keep them to myself for now. You'll see _________________ Tygon Panthera - name and species
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Bearion Registered User
Joined: 01 Jun 2002 Posts: 278 Location: Bay Area, California
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Posted: Sat Jun 07, 2003 3:30 am Post subject: |
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I, too enjoyed it Fish! ...But everything has already been said.
Waiting on "B"... _________________ I'm out of my mind right now, but feel free to leave a message... |
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