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PostPosted: Fri Jun 06, 2003 7:35 am    Post subject: Chapter 3a is Up! Reply with quote

go read - lemme know whatcha like and whatcha dont.

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PostPosted: Fri Jun 06, 2003 10:11 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hmmm... interesting... so the members of SFO aren't the only augmented furs... by far not as it seems. Very interesting.

Great work on the last part, this in action scene. I especially like the technological explanations.

Great work! I'm curious to find out what happened at the end.

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PostPosted: Fri Jun 06, 2003 3:10 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I'd thought as much! Elijah couldn't be the only one, and I am sure most of them did not "slip through the cracks" and escape the long arm of the APO.

Extremely well-written! Format, action, and characterization are all tight ..... and just as complete as they need to be. I need to take notes! Rolling Eyes

There is a sizable blow-up looming on the horizon. I'll bet Prosyonni isn't going to be at ALL happy with how it turns out, either. Evil or Very Mad

< Eagerly awaiting the rest of the chapter!!!!!!!!! >

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PostPosted: Fri Jun 06, 2003 3:30 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I can't add anything to that other than I liked it as well. Great action. Very Happy
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 06, 2003 3:56 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Tygon wrote:
Hmmm... interesting... so the members of SFO aren't the only augmented furs... by far not as it seems. Very interesting.


Not in the slightest... Twisted Evil

Tygon wrote:
Great work on the last part, this in action scene. I especially like the technological explanations.


Glad you enjoyed it!
The second half will be out this upcoming week.

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PostPosted: Fri Jun 06, 2003 3:58 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Concolor wrote:
I'd thought as much! Elijah couldn't be the only one, and I am sure most of them did not "slip through the cracks" and escape the long arm of the APO.

Extremely well-written! Format, action, and characterization are all tight ..... and just as complete as they need to be. I need to take notes! Rolling Eyes

There is a sizable blow-up looming on the horizon. I'll bet Prosyonni isn't going to be at ALL happy with how it turns out, either. Evil or Very Mad

< Eagerly awaiting the rest of the chapter!!!!!!!!! >


And you'd be right. But just who is this elijah you are talking about? Rolling Eyes

Thanks for the kind comments, sir, I only aim to emulate the greats.

As for the next one...lets say you are right as well as wrong. Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil

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PostPosted: Fri Jun 06, 2003 3:59 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Xaqtly wrote:
I can't add anything to that other than I liked it as well. Great action. Very Happy


Thank you! any speculation on the next chapter?

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PostPosted: Fri Jun 06, 2003 4:16 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

A good read my friend, the action scenes have very good flow. It'll be interesting (!) to see what/who dumped the intense white noise into their commo system.

I suspect that the long-term results of that meeting may not be what either party expected from the meeting.

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PostPosted: Fri Jun 06, 2003 10:15 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Concolor wrote:
I'd thought as much! Elijah couldn't be the only one, and I am sure most of them did not "slip through the cracks" and escape the long arm of the APO.


Elijah? Who is that? I guess I again missed something Confused

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It'll be interesting (!) to see what/who dumped the intense white noise into their commo system.


What white noise? The squeak? I've heard white noise before and it didn't make squeak sounds.

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Thank you! any speculation on the next chapter?


Oh yes! But I'll keep them to myself for now. You'll see Twisted Evil

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PostPosted: Sat Jun 07, 2003 3:30 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I, too enjoyed it Fish! ...But everything has already been said. Rolling Eyes

Waiting on "B"...

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