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Concolor Registered User
Joined: 19 Nov 2001 Posts: 832 Location: South Carolina
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Posted: Tue May 07, 2002 12:21 pm Post subject: The Path Of A Kitsune |
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And a most disturbing chapter it is. Why is it that some creatures simply can NOT leave other creatures alone? What is it with this power tripping that seems so common among the petty (or not-so-petty in this case) tyrants?
I'm afraid Whitepaw's concept of what constitutes 'aggravation' is about to take a quantum leap. Sheila doesn't sound like a fur who will be denied any little thing she might want. And if she wants Whitepaw, well . . . . .
On the flip side, we have a kitsune, and one that can fight, beside. Not a foe to be easily dismissed, and a dangerous enemy if her ire is aroused. Sheila doesn't sound like the careful type, but she will learn such care quickly if she thinks she can just appropriate Whitepaw as a lacky.
Things are definitely heating up. This waiting-for-the-next-chapter stuff gets old in a big hurry. |
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Shirh Khan Site Owner
Joined: 04 Jul 2001 Posts: 332 Location: In transition/between states
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Posted: Tue Sep 10, 2002 4:11 pm Post subject: |
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As Mike has said- chapter 5 of "Path of a Kitsune" is up, and waiting for speculation. So hop to it!! (Please!!)
-Shirh Khan _________________ "Life is not for the faint of heart. Live a little!!"
-said Shirh to his brother, Elijah |
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Bearion Registered User
Joined: 01 Jun 2002 Posts: 278 Location: Bay Area, California
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Posted: Tue Sep 10, 2002 6:04 pm Post subject: |
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Shirh Khan wrote: | As Mike has said- chapter 5 of "Path of a Kitsune" is up, and waiting for speculation. |
Overall I liked it very much, but when I reached the end I couldn't help but think: (warning, sexist comment)
1) Female
2) Trained Killer
3) On the edge or already into PMS
Her Majesty Sheila is in more danger than she knows...
Bearion (who will go back to lurking mode now) |
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Nameless Site Owner
Joined: 06 Sep 2002 Posts: 1368 Location: Vienna, Austria
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Posted: Wed Sep 11, 2002 12:08 am Post subject: |
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Sheila is a cat allright.
Considering the "NC-17" rating, I'd say Kit is in for a ride.
Sheila now has a hostage to keep her in line and they caught her when she is very vulnerable, too. |
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Pat The Fox Moderator
Joined: 06 Jun 2002 Posts: 734 Location: Great White North
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Posted: Tue Sep 17, 2002 3:23 pm Post subject: |
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A good overall story. It looks very promising in it's future. _________________ Pat The Fox
fuzzy? |
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Fishburne Administrator
Joined: 23 Jul 2002 Posts: 596 Location: Plano, Texas
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Posted: Tue Sep 17, 2002 9:23 pm Post subject: OOOH! |
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Is the proto-ceasar gonna be surprised!!!!
Great chapter!!!! _________________ "Do not Taunt Happy Fun God" -Cthulhu |
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Shirh Khan Site Owner
Joined: 04 Jul 2001 Posts: 332 Location: In transition/between states
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Posted: Mon Nov 25, 2002 2:03 am Post subject: The Moment You've Been Waiting For..... |
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The next installment has been posted!!
Path of a Kitsune, chapter six, is ready for your viewing pleasure!
Things get quite... warm, for Kit and Logan- have a read! And don't forget to speculate!
-Shirh Khan _________________ "Life is not for the faint of heart. Live a little!!"
-said Shirh to his brother, Elijah |
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Nameless Site Owner
Joined: 06 Sep 2002 Posts: 1368 Location: Vienna, Austria
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Posted: Mon Nov 25, 2002 12:06 pm Post subject: |
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Things are getting hot, so to speak... _________________ I'm a nut, but there are those who appreciate me for it. |
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Shirh Khan Site Owner
Joined: 04 Jul 2001 Posts: 332 Location: In transition/between states
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Posted: Mon Nov 25, 2002 1:01 pm Post subject: |
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Sorry about the missing link, folks
Yahurl Geosh*#ties is apparently not doing what I'd commanded it to. I'll go back and fix it late today.
-Shirh Khan _________________ "Life is not for the faint of heart. Live a little!!"
-said Shirh to his brother, Elijah |
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Shirh Khan Site Owner
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Posted: Mon Nov 25, 2002 1:16 pm Post subject: |
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Mike Regan wrote: | And poor Logan has to live through this for 5 days.
Too, he must control himself. I am sure her scent is affecting him as well.
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And you do remember what was mentioned back in chapter three? about fox-kin Heats coming on generally all around the same time? Think of what might do to Logan, being confined with a more than willing femme in Heat, for five days.....it might be more than a simple test of control.....
It could be fodder for a KAB story, ne?
-Shirh Khan _________________ "Life is not for the faint of heart. Live a little!!"
-said Shirh to his brother, Elijah |
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Shirh Khan Site Owner
Joined: 04 Jul 2001 Posts: 332 Location: In transition/between states
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Posted: Mon Nov 25, 2002 5:39 pm Post subject: |
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Talk about one missing thing....
Anyway, the link to chapter 6 is finished. Also, some minor editing changes have been put into the chapters, too, as well as some behind-the-scenes HTML editing and streamlining. All in all, it's all better, now.
-Shirh Khan _________________ "Life is not for the faint of heart. Live a little!!"
-said Shirh to his brother, Elijah |
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Pat The Fox Moderator
Joined: 06 Jun 2002 Posts: 734 Location: Great White North
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Posted: Wed Nov 27, 2002 1:11 am Post subject: |
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Quite an interesting chapter.
I am amazed at Logan's self control and restraint in that type of situation. I bet if it were any other fur they would have been upon Kit in a second.
The chapter advances the plot nicely, showing that Kit is a bit more perceptive to Shelia's wants than expected as well as leaving some very interesting problems for the next few days while Kit is in heat.
What shelia has planned exactly is still a mystery but we at least get a glimpse of what may be instore.
All in all it was a very informative chapter, written quite nicely. _________________ Pat The Fox
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Shirh Khan Site Owner
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Posted: Wed Nov 27, 2002 10:32 am Post subject: |
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Pat The Fox wrote: | Quite an interesting chapter.
I am amazed at Logan's self control and restraint in that type of situation. I bet if it were any other fur they would have been upon Kit in a second.
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His self-control isn't for a lack of wanting. It's evident by now that Logan wants to mate with Kit (not necessarily be her Mate) in a bad way, but he knows well the problems of being in Heat-- namely, that one's thinking is done largely by the genitals. Kit has denied him in the cool winds of coherent thought, and he won't look past that now, just because she's in Heat and begging him to do the deed. He doesn't want to lose Kit as a friend, and taking advantage of her in her state would likely sever their friendship. Or, at least, it's his reasoning, and he's sticking to it.
And as for Kit.... well, Pat- you stay away from that room until she's through with her Heat; you don't wanna get molested by a wanton vixen, do you?
-Shirh Khan _________________ "Life is not for the faint of heart. Live a little!!"
-said Shirh to his brother, Elijah |
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Pat The Fox Moderator
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Posted: Wed Nov 27, 2002 5:09 pm Post subject: |
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Quote: | And as for Kit.... well, Pat- you stay away from that room until she's through with her Heat; you don't wanna get molested by a wanton vixen, do you? |
Aww can't a todd have a little fun? _________________ Pat The Fox
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Nameless Site Owner
Joined: 06 Sep 2002 Posts: 1368 Location: Vienna, Austria
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Posted: Wed Nov 27, 2002 5:11 pm Post subject: |
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Well as long as she is safely tied up... _________________ I'm a nut, but there are those who appreciate me for it. |
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