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Kit Fox
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 10, 2003 11:07 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Lol, very nice ending there Chris Laughing
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 10, 2003 11:14 pm    Post subject: potty humor -- SPOILER Reply with quote

I about fell out of my seat laughing while reading the latest chapter!

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“Listen,” he growled in a low voice, “we had a complaint about the men’s room. Clean and flush the Smekklo out of it and give it a good sanitizing.”


Laughing Laughing

Nothing like a little subtlety, eh, Chris???

Maginificent chapter! Well worth the wait!

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PostPosted: Thu Apr 10, 2003 11:24 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I only have one question: Since when did I become swiss? *laughs*
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PostPosted: Fri Apr 11, 2003 12:05 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hikaru wrote:
I only have one question: Since when did I become swiss? *laughs*

Does it make a difference from which of those tiny european countries you come from? Rolling Eyes

(So speaks one who lives in one such tiny country.) Laughing

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PostPosted: Sat Apr 12, 2003 11:50 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Kit Fox wrote:
Lol, very nice ending there Chris Laughing


Thank yew very much! Smile

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PostPosted: Sat Apr 12, 2003 11:51 am    Post subject: Re: potty humor -- SPOILER Reply with quote

Hortmage wrote:
I about fell out of my seat laughing while reading the latest chapter!

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“Listen,” he growled in a low voice, “we had a complaint about the men’s room. Clean and flush the Smekklo out of it and give it a good sanitizing.”


Laughing Laughing

Nothing like a little subtlety, eh, Chris???


Subtle as a broken leg, man Very Happy

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Maginificent chapter! Well worth the wait!


Thanks!
Yes, 48 is already being pieced together!

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PostPosted: Sat Apr 12, 2003 11:55 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hikaru wrote:
I only have one question: Since when did I become swiss? *laughs*


How else could we stay neutral? Cool

For those of you playing at home: that was a running gag in an old Stan Freberg radio show. Someone would be asked their nationality, and the answer was always "Swiss; that way we don't offend anybody" Very Happy

Eric got it, much to my surprise! Looks like he and I are more alike than unalike Smile And it's probably one of my greatest compliments when someone gets the most obscure gag I put in The Story Smile

I could've written for Mystery Science Theatre 3000!

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PostPosted: Sat Apr 12, 2003 1:04 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

ChrisFoxx wrote:
Hikaru wrote:
I only have one question: Since when did I become swiss? *laughs*


How else could we stay neutral? Cool

For those of you playing at home: that was a running gag in an old Stan Freberg radio show. Someone would be asked their nationality, and the answer was always "Swiss; that way we don't offend anybody" Very Happy


Oh my GOD! I can't believe I forgot that. And I was SUCH a big fan of Stan too. *shakes his head*

Cheers.

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PostPosted: Sat Apr 12, 2003 3:51 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

ChrisFoxx wrote:
I could've written for Mystery Science Theatre 3000!

Haha, I loved that show. I miss it so much now that they don't make it anymore.
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 12, 2003 9:58 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Wonderful chapter!!!

Let me guess: you actually accompanied a young lady on quest for a wedding gown, yes? That sequence was a real gem!

"... clean the Smekklo out ..." Laughing Laughing Laughing Just about fell off my seat! The one-two punch of introducing Hikaru and then gouging Smekky-boy was perfect! Subtlety, thy name is Chris!

I was waiting nervously to see whether Sabrina would have a ... "reaction" when she put the gown on. Evidently she did not. She's still heading for the wedding. Wink

Multiple, deep, and sincere thanks for sharing your talent, sir! Mr. Green

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PostPosted: Sat Apr 12, 2003 10:24 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

JamesPI wrote:
ChrisFoxx wrote:
I could've written for Mystery Science Theatre 3000!

Haha, I loved that show. I miss it so much now that they don't make it anymore.


See, I was smart -- I taped a bunchload of 'em! Smile

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PostPosted: Sat Apr 12, 2003 10:34 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Concolor wrote:
Wonderful chapter!!!


Thank you!

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Let me guess: you actually accompanied a young lady on quest for a wedding gown, yes? That sequence was a real gem!


Thank you, but believe it or don't, I didn't!

I just kinda, y'know, worked it out, based on vague recollection from my then-fiancee shopping for her wedding gown 21 years ago (that many years of marriage next month!), which you'll see more of in a later chapter.

The research came largely from one Tina Amberg who does gowns and wedding planning for a living. On her website (http://tina.pirate-king.com/my_wedding_thoughts.htm) she has what appears to be a web-based reprint of a wedding-gown book I'd checked out of the library some months ago when I began researching 'em. She gave me a good bit of help, and I paid her back by making her Sabrina's salesfur Smile

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"... clean the Smekklo out ..." Laughing Laughing Laughing Just about fell off my seat! The one-two punch of introducing Hikaru and then gouging Smekky-boy was perfect! Subtlety, thy name is Chris!


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I was waiting nervously to see whether Sabrina would have a ... "reaction" when she put the gown on. Evidently she did not. She's still heading for the wedding. Wink


Oh yeah; so far, all systems go! But we'll keep watching ..... Wink

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Multiple, deep, and sincere thanks for sharing your talent, sir! Mr. Green


Thank you for being there to share it with me ... all of yunz!


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PostPosted: Tue Apr 15, 2003 2:22 am    Post subject: Re: potty humor -- SPOILER Reply with quote

Hi all!

I've been lurking for the last several weeks, having discovered Chris' amazing story and having had my life changed by it as a result (with many thanks from my wife!).

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“Listen,” he growled in a low voice, “we had a complaint about the men’s room. Clean and flush the Smekklo out of it and give it a good sanitizing.”

I'm afraid that I am missing the cultural referent here. Anyone care to explain the above?

Many thanks.

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PostPosted: Tue Apr 15, 2003 2:39 am    Post subject: Re: potty humor -- SPOILER Reply with quote

Greetings!

Simcha wrote:
I've been lurking for the last several weeks, having discovered Chris' amazing story and having had my life changed by it as a result (with many thanks from my wife!).


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“Listen,” he growled in a low voice, “we had a complaint about the men’s room. Clean and flush the Smekklo out of it and give it a good sanitizing.”

I'm afraid that I am missing the cultural referent here. Anyone care to explain the above?


Smekklo was a creep who sent Chris hatemails...

And yes, he REALLY deserved being flushed...

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PostPosted: Tue Apr 15, 2003 12:00 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I really have to agree chris is some of your best work yet. Im just hoping my little piece of fan fiction can measure up to it. the dress is a great choice. And the hint dropping about clarence and cindy was a good touch off. I liked the smecklo joke too. But the best part had to be the wassabi.

I give cindy about a year tell they follow in Sabs foot steps Wink . The wheels have been set in motion for greet things too come. For thoughts that dont know, in about a month or so im going to be putting out the first chapeter of a clarence and cindy fan fiction. The ideas are coming to togather in my little canine brain. Mainly I count on the first chapter being only about 10 pages and ill be sending the first copy to chiris. If its okay with him to check it. Im thinking im going to put it on old racoons book shelf since I cant really afford my own site yet.

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PS: is there a spell checker in the audince
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