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PostPosted: Sun Dec 15, 2002 8:42 pm    Post subject: Chapter 8 Reply with quote

This is to report that TVDaves story Chapter 8 has been edited and sent to Mike. It should be up on the Racoons books shelf in the next few days Smile

I am pleased to report that Zoie was again in this chapter Smile

Enjoy all Smile

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PostPosted: Mon Dec 16, 2002 12:53 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Interesting... methinks that this tale is headed into some rough waters, and a great deal of intrigue. Plus, Zoie ain't-a gonna give up... Something that Jason needs to keep in mind.
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 16, 2002 1:18 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

And a good read it was. Great job Dave!

--------- WARNING ! ! ! – READ CHAPTER FIRST --------
Zoie doesn't do well when she isn't in charge. She obviously enjoys the feeling of power that, in her mind, she has. If she can’t attain her goal, I don’t see her going away gracefully. I can see trouble from her for a long time to come.

What is interesting is her attitude seems shared with other femmes in that world. Namely Stefi. All in all, a refreshing and interesting view into a different society. Jason is in for a wild ride. Twisted Evil

On a side note: None of my cats ever gave a raspberry...or maybe it was behind my back??? Shocked
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 16, 2002 10:32 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Bearion wrote:
And a good read it was. Great job Dave!


On a side note: None of my cats ever gave a raspberry...or maybe it was behind my back??? Shocked


That is Keblers Speach exersize that sally taught him Smile

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PostPosted: Mon Dec 16, 2002 3:22 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Interesting chapter.

I did not quite see the point of appearing before the Senate, apparenty no vote was needed, Hammond just said Jason could stay and that was it. Did I miss something?

Zoie... Rolling Eyes Twisted Evil

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PostPosted: Mon Dec 16, 2002 3:57 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Surprised Ah ha, and Hi all from the states, yep im back on vacation, Gotta say thanks to casp for fireing this chapter off to mike while I was in flight,, Rolling Eyes


And as for Zoie! She will be back, to pester,


As for the final say, Hammond took Jason there to introduce him , and to heat things up with Senator Becker, who has no love for Hammond, the CDC, and now Jason, who might hold the key to the madness, but thanks for that Nameless, Chapter 9 is in full swing will Jason get hooked up with Tisha Husky Razz we will see ..and Thanks for the comments , I now have to run ....the vixens want to go shopping,,,,,and the mall calls


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PostPosted: Tue Dec 17, 2002 11:16 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

The final say was very important. It was needed to say Jason Could Live in Dera and make him a legitimate citizen. It also had him seen and witnessed by the most important citizens in Dera that Jason is not the monster Becker was claiming him to be.

My thoughts for the moment

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PostPosted: Sat Jan 11, 2003 4:18 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Wink Hi all TVDAVE here in the states on vacation , Chapter 9 is comming along and shold be released before I go back to Saudi , so Stand By

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PostPosted: Thu Feb 06, 2003 7:28 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Razz Gopod news all, Chapter 9 is done and in the paws of Casp, Sorry its late, but due to RL deals in the states and here in Saudi Arabia, it was rough, but its done and chapter 10 is started , so in a few it should be in Mikes paws for the shelf..........be good all
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PostPosted: Fri Feb 07, 2003 1:15 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I really want to read your story but I can't seem to get to your page Sad when I click on the link it says I am not autherized is there a different link I need to go to first?
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PostPosted: Mon Feb 10, 2003 7:44 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Surprised OK all Chapter 9 is up on the bookshelf go get it

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