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The BioCobra
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PostPosted: Wed Apr 10, 2013 11:55 am    Post subject: Lux Aeterna Reply with quote

Hello all. Aslaug has yet again, and very kindly, allowed me to use this forum space to post another of my stories, since they tie in crucially to what she and Kellan have written in the ALN/ALS universe.

Therefore, I will be posting a four-part short story set after the events of Test of Time and Redemption, entitled Lux Aeterna. It deals with some of the effects and psychological scars the events of the prior stories have had on the filly and Constantine, and will later include what Aslaug herself described as "a fight sequence that would make John Woo proud". That said, I hope everyone who reads it gets a kick out of it. Very Happy

I will post one part every week, to give everyone who wants to time to read it properly and comment if they feel so inclined. Part one is included at the bottom of this post.

Hope you all enjoy it. Wink

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PostPosted: Wed Apr 10, 2013 5:51 pm    Post subject: Oh No! Reply with quote

ˇAy, caramba!

Here we go! Bumpy ride ahead, The BioCobra style!

Mr. Green

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PostPosted: Thu Apr 11, 2013 8:49 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Ow...

Just remember, this is just a preliminary, they do get ... better ... later on...
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 15, 2013 2:31 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Well, for the few people that have so far shown an interest in this story (my thanks go out to them for taking the time to read it and comment), here is part 2 of Lux Aeterna. More shenanigans abound, and the build-up reaches an interesting cliffhanger. Enjoy. Very Happy

Cobra out.

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 15, 2013 3:12 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

It's just that the forum is a bit quiet these days, but I am glad you are posting this ...

...

*said the filly and got started on the 10th chapter of Gunsmoke*
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PostPosted: Wed Apr 17, 2013 8:29 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

[*ears perk, eyebrow raises*] (* An-tic-i-pa-tion *)

Hmmmmm, some if says 'Kids' [(S)He started it!] and some it say 'Next Gen' but watch out for that hairpin (or is it a sharp spiral??)
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PostPosted: Wed Apr 17, 2013 10:07 am    Post subject: o_O? Reply with quote

Hmm . . . methinks things just went into the excrement disposal device.

Look out, Aslaug and Kester!

Shocked

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 22, 2013 3:22 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

And now we come to the crescendo of this four-part story. Part 3 of Lux Aeterna is essentially one continuous fight sequence, with various degrees of trust issues, banter, and a huge dose of ultra-violence. Twisted Evil

And if the style of the fight reminds you of something, try reading it again while listening to this:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=L91OqOyPjMw

Enjoy. Wink

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 22, 2013 8:27 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yep, good music to fight by, but, it ain't never that easy...
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 29, 2013 1:07 pm    Post subject: Final part Reply with quote

And here it is. Part 4 of Lux Aeterna. The final section, and a suitable climb down from the frantic nature of the last part. This one took me a while to refine and finish, but I'm glad I was able to get this one ready for viewing.

I can't express how pleased I am to have these posted. Even if only a few will see it, it's nice to think that I can continue to contribute to a universe so dear to the likes of the filly and myself. But I'm prattling on. Enjoy. Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 29, 2013 10:52 pm    Post subject: Re: Final part Reply with quote

The BioCobra wrote:
And here it is. Part 4 of Lux Aeterna. The final section, and a suitable climb down from the frantic nature of the last part. This one took me a while to refine and finish, but I'm glad I was able to get this one ready for viewing.

I can't express how pleased I am to have these posted. Even if only a few will see it, it's nice to think that I can continue to contribute to a universe so dear to the likes of the filly and myself. But I'm prattling on. Enjoy. Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy


Very well wrapped up, yet leaving an opening for a continuance.

Bravo!

*bows to the BioCobra*

Mr. Green

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PostPosted: Tue Apr 30, 2013 8:26 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

(*pause, rewind*) [LOL!!!]

“Sounds like you want to talk about your non-existent sex life again!”

(*pause, rewind*) [LOL!!!]

[*looks around for lupine, equine, aquilan (serpentine?) presence*]

two bags of microwave popcorn later, relaxes to the classical sound...

(*aahhh, memories...*)
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