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kcmack Registered User
Joined: 07 Apr 2007 Posts: 142 Location: S.W. Missouri, US
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Posted: Fri Aug 14, 2009 10:19 pm Post subject: Healing Hearts |
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Good to see your story up on the bookshelf Alexi. And I see you have chosen your title for the story. I am looking forward to reading the rest of the story. _________________ "'Do you know, I always thought Unicorns were fabulous monsters, too? I never saw one alive before!'
'Well, now that we have seen each other,' said the Unicorn, 'if you believe in me, I'll believe in you.'"
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Alexi Registered User
Joined: 08 Feb 2009 Posts: 426 Location: Virginia Beach
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Posted: Sat Aug 15, 2009 8:53 am Post subject: |
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Thanks, I've been wagging my tail since I got out of bed a couple of hours ago and saw it on the shelf. After a tense week over here, it really made my day.
Chapter three is done and at the editors. I should see it in a day or two. four is already written and will go to edits soon. Two is already in Mikes hands and awaiting his final look over. Now I just have to look at my notes and organize a few more events and I will be happily on track.
I'm glad you like it so far. I will try not to disappoint. |
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Hawke Registered User
Joined: 17 Jun 2009 Posts: 175 Location: Hickory Hills, IL (Near Chicago)
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Posted: Sat Aug 15, 2009 9:17 am Post subject: |
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The Fly-Leaf sounded pretty awesome to me so I'll read it and post here. yay, new books to read! _________________ "It's kind of like if you combined The Wizard of Oz and Reign of Fire...and Jonathan Livingston Seagull."
"^HuK'D aWN FoNYCs WuRKD 4 MEEEEEE!!!!" |
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Hawke Registered User
Joined: 17 Jun 2009 Posts: 175 Location: Hickory Hills, IL (Near Chicago)
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Posted: Sat Aug 15, 2009 9:36 am Post subject: |
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k.. I read it and I thought it was great so far, no disappointment. I am looking forward to the next chapters being posted. _________________ "It's kind of like if you combined The Wizard of Oz and Reign of Fire...and Jonathan Livingston Seagull."
"^HuK'D aWN FoNYCs WuRKD 4 MEEEEEE!!!!" |
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Alexi Registered User
Joined: 08 Feb 2009 Posts: 426 Location: Virginia Beach
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Posted: Sat Aug 15, 2009 10:00 am Post subject: |
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Ch.2 will go up when mike is ready. Three, I'm waiting on from Nicolai. |
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Hawke Registered User
Joined: 17 Jun 2009 Posts: 175 Location: Hickory Hills, IL (Near Chicago)
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Posted: Sat Aug 15, 2009 10:03 am Post subject: |
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Excellent _________________ "It's kind of like if you combined The Wizard of Oz and Reign of Fire...and Jonathan Livingston Seagull."
"^HuK'D aWN FoNYCs WuRKD 4 MEEEEEE!!!!" |
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tobi3B Registered User
Joined: 07 Jan 2008 Posts: 645 Location: Germany Siegen
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Posted: Sat Aug 15, 2009 10:49 am Post subject: |
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Good work Alexi. I enjoyed the read a lot. _________________ Whether a black cat brings misfortune or not, depends on whether one is a fur or a mouse.
[br]Feed Me![br]Adopted from Valenth |
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Karou WindStalker Registered User
Joined: 17 Nov 2006 Posts: 631 Location: Highland lakes, NJ, USA
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Posted: Mon Aug 17, 2009 7:51 am Post subject: |
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Hrm .. reading it again .. very good story..
One thing strikes me : Kerosene Heater in parent's room ... carbon monoxide poisoning ... coupled with the cold in the house. Things don't look good for Molly's folks. _________________ Independent Business Owner ... Ask me, if interested in learning more.
Everything in its Own Season <- Current Story! |
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Alexi Registered User
Joined: 08 Feb 2009 Posts: 426 Location: Virginia Beach
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Posted: Mon Aug 17, 2009 9:10 am Post subject: |
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Well... Chapter 2 is up in the writers guild. It will be up on the bookshelf as soon as Mike is done glancing it over for the final run. Three goes up as soon as Nicolai gets it back to me.
Hey Nic.
hint hint. |
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Alexi Registered User
Joined: 08 Feb 2009 Posts: 426 Location: Virginia Beach
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Posted: Mon Aug 17, 2009 11:12 am Post subject: |
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Cool. Thank you oh master librarian.
I will call in fire su.. er I mean light Nicolai on fi.... er I mean lite a fire under Nicolai. Yeah, that's it. |
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ghostcat Registered User
Joined: 01 Aug 2009 Posts: 18 Location: N C
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Posted: Fri Aug 21, 2009 10:56 pm Post subject: |
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Alexi, I just finished reading chapter 2, the story seems to have a way to go, but is progressing very well. PTS can be a bear to deal with and I hope he works it out.
Later,
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Alexi Registered User
Joined: 08 Feb 2009 Posts: 426 Location: Virginia Beach
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Posted: Fri Aug 21, 2009 11:18 pm Post subject: |
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Yes it is.
Several parts of Frank's personality, the PTSD and a few other key parts are taken from someone I know quite well.
As with most writers, I have drawn off of things from my real life for parts of my stories. |
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tobi3B Registered User
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Posted: Sun Aug 23, 2009 3:42 am Post subject: |
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And it shows I enjoyed chapter 2. Itīs hard what happened to Molly.
You realistically portrayed what a child does in such a situation.
Seek a guardian.
Well keep it up. _________________ Whether a black cat brings misfortune or not, depends on whether one is a fur or a mouse.
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Hawke Registered User
Joined: 17 Jun 2009 Posts: 175 Location: Hickory Hills, IL (Near Chicago)
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Posted: Wed Aug 26, 2009 5:44 pm Post subject: |
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I agree with tobi, chapter 2 was as excellent as the first, keep it up! _________________ "It's kind of like if you combined The Wizard of Oz and Reign of Fire...and Jonathan Livingston Seagull."
"^HuK'D aWN FoNYCs WuRKD 4 MEEEEEE!!!!" |
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Karou WindStalker Registered User
Joined: 17 Nov 2006 Posts: 631 Location: Highland lakes, NJ, USA
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Posted: Sat Aug 29, 2009 11:28 pm Post subject: |
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Mike Regan wrote: | I have chapters 3 & 4.
3 will go up this next weekend and 4 the week after. |
I look forward to reading them. ^_^ _________________ Independent Business Owner ... Ask me, if interested in learning more.
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