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PostPosted: Thu Feb 24, 2011 4:35 am    Post subject: Another chapter? You're kidding me! Reply with quote

Okay, so it took a full month but . . .

Chapter 06 of "Redemption" has been posted for your reading pleasure.

Will this one ever open your eyes!

Enjoy!

Kel

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PostPosted: Thu Feb 24, 2011 4:53 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Heehee ... that's why the barn will have a basement.

That got a giggle out of me Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy

Good chapter, but damned, I wouldn't like that kind of homecoming.
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PostPosted: Thu Feb 24, 2011 9:43 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

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... and our next contestent is ...


... or should that be 'combatant'
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PostPosted: Thu Feb 24, 2011 11:00 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Aslaug wrote:
Heehee ... that's why the barn will have a basement.

That got a giggle out of me Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy

Good chapter, but damned, I wouldn't like that kind of homecoming.


Yeah, that's not exactly how one would want to return home; all scuffed and scraped, not able to tend to your own needs, your husband too sick to see about you and your poor ranch house badly damaged.

At least things are looking up for them . . . or are they?

Twisted Evil

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PostPosted: Thu Feb 24, 2011 1:15 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I also rather liked the idea of Aslaug as "entrenched" in her log cabin. I can just see her there, sitting on the floor with her axes while the Real World is hammering on her door.

"COME OOOOOUT!"

"Shaddap"

"EXPEEEERIENCE MEEEEE!"

"I'll chop something vital off, if ya come in!"

"I'M EXCIIIITIIIIING!"

"You're starting to sound like a bad advert for a blue movie!"
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PostPosted: Fri Feb 25, 2011 10:50 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

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"I'M EXCIIIITIIIIING!"

"You're starting to sound like a bad advert for a blue movie!"


Why do I have a vision of Wanda for some reason???
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 11, 2011 2:18 am    Post subject: Chapter 07 Reply with quote

Well, I'm not sure how well this chapter will be received, so without further adieu, I offer up Chapter 07 of "Redemption"

There will be some twists and a few revelations to be discovered in this chapter. There will also be a chance to understand a few of the players a little better, too. To be precise, one scruffy canid of indeterminate origin and one very aggressive badger. I hope you all enjoy the read.

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PostPosted: Fri Mar 11, 2011 6:12 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Geez, Kellan, now that's just mean on a couple of levels. Not sure who I feel more for, Tor or Victoria, or thier new visitors.


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PostPosted: Sat Mar 12, 2011 10:39 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

(*blink, blink*)

Aaahhh, Wha happen...??

(*blink, blink*)

[reboot in progress, bad sectors found]
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 12, 2011 9:39 pm    Post subject: Glad you're enjoying the read! Reply with quote

Tigermark wrote:
Geez, Kellan, now that's just mean on a couple of levels. Not sure who I feel more for, Tor or Victoria, or thier new visitors.


TM


Well what did youexpect from Zagam? He already learned not to confront Torvald and Victoria directly, so, using what seemed like a good tactic, he indirectly took a shot at the Immortal Couple.

This new complication brings forth an issue that will be covered in Chapter 08. One that might have some very nasty repercussions for Tor. Can you guess what?

Stay tuned!

Shocked Twisted Evil Very Happy

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PostPosted: Sun Mar 13, 2011 2:31 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Frazikar wrote:
(*blink, blink*)

Aaahhh, Wha happen...??

(*blink, blink*)

[reboot in progress, bad sectors found]


Hey there, Frazikar!

I'm glad to see you're enjoying the story!

*notes no response*

Hello? Frazikar? Hello?!? Anyone home???

*notes eyes appear to be small BSOD screens* *waves paw in front of Frazikar's face, still no response*

Dang, he went Blue Screen on me . . . Confused

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PostPosted: Sun Mar 13, 2011 3:35 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Ouch, this is going to be one major headache... scratch that, it already is. If Aslaug ever gets wind of what is happening to Tor and Vicki, she is going to go berzerker on all the lessor gods involved with this.
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PostPosted: Sun Mar 13, 2011 3:40 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I would love to see that happening.

I really ... really would love to see that happening!
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 14, 2011 7:59 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

(*blink, blink*)

Huh, wha??

[reboot in progress, restoring last ... ]

Who...??

Ow, my head hurts...is there a doctor in the house? (brain surgeon needed?)
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 15, 2011 7:06 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I've been seriously neglecting these forums for a while now. Just started reading Redemption today and got up to chapter 4. May be done through 7 tonight.

On the 5th wheel camper, in many cases you don't level the camper before pulling the truck out, in fact for some you can't, as the front of the trailer has to go down quitew a bit from where it's sitting on the truck. We always pull the truck out from under the trailer before the initial leveling, though normally leave the cable connected to share the load with the charging system until it's set up.
And most (cheaper) corner jacks I've seen (if not mounted) use a simple bar, not a wrench to adjust.

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