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PostPosted: Fri Dec 10, 2010 6:32 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

As I told Kellan ... the blood eagle would by much, much too mild a punishment when she gets a hold of him, and I'm glad I'm not the one who has to write it, because I doubt I can think of something vile and gruesome enough to cover what she'll do to him.
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 10, 2010 10:55 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Oh boy, somehow I don't think there's enough Timmies to go round this time...

...and I don't think throwinig Runji out to the wolves (or one big wolf) is gonna help...

Oh yea, Jenna should remember that betrayal (at the right time) is acceptable ...
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 18, 2010 12:07 am    Post subject: Hmm . . . Reply with quote

Okay, I'm surprised that no fur has caught on to the pair of hints as to what might be out of whack with things in general in Chapter 2.

As an observation; do y'all think Kenji is toast once the Angelbreaker finds out what's happened? And a 'Thank You' goes out to Aslaug, allowing me write her part in this story. And yes, a Blood Eagle would be a kind alternative to what might happen to the leopard. Remember, he has no powers except immortality so it will take a serious amount of damage to off the feline.

And as an aside; Who should get to Kenji first? Should it be Aslaug or maybe it should be Victoria, after she sees what the clouded leopard has done to her home?

Or should it be a "Tag-Team" effort by Aslaug and Victoria? Shocked

Just sayin' . . .

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PostPosted: Sat Dec 18, 2010 11:27 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

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I'm surprised that no fur has caught on to the pair of hints


Somethimes they don't til a later read...

As for Victoria and Aslaug, uh, which one called 'dibs' first?
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 18, 2010 10:29 pm    Post subject: If I Remember Right . . . Reply with quote

Frazikar wrote:
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I'm surprised that no fur has caught on to the pair of hints


Somethimes they don't til a later read...

As for Victoria and Aslaug, uh, which one called 'dibs' first?


Without going into detail, I would think that it was Aslaug that has "First Dibs" on the spotted one's hide (literally).

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PostPosted: Tue Dec 21, 2010 9:22 pm    Post subject: Another chapter? Reply with quote

An early present from the Old Warhorse;

Chapter 03 of "Redemption"

Enjoy!

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PostPosted: Wed Dec 22, 2010 9:22 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Wha ya doin?

Stirrin up an anthill...

Why?

Do get Timmie in, of course...

But he's busy...

Oh...

(*together*) Let's get Mikey!!!
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 29, 2010 8:43 pm    Post subject: Another chapter? Reply with quote

Here's another chapter for all of you-

Chapter 04 of "Redemption"

Enjoy! Cool

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PostPosted: Thu Dec 30, 2010 5:11 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

So they're back on their homeworld. Loved the stab at gas prices.

Now, teh stuff is really gonna hit te fan for the Malefic Council.

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PostPosted: Tue Jan 25, 2011 3:35 am    Post subject: Chapter 05 Reply with quote

Well, here it is.

"Redemption" Chapter 05

It's not the best chapter I have ever hacked out but I think it serves well for story progression.

Enjoy!

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PostPosted: Tue Jan 25, 2011 9:56 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Ah, nothin like startin with a classic ref to the Three...

As for the story itself - some lose ends tied, one left for pickup ... hmmm, have to wonder if anyone else (at the higher end) has an interest in this...
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 26, 2011 1:37 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

*Snicker* I love that last scene with Willie. hehe, "Forgot I could do that?"



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PostPosted: Wed Jan 26, 2011 9:39 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

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Transport! We don't need no transport!


Something like that, eh...
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 26, 2011 8:31 pm    Post subject: Thanks, everyone Reply with quote

I'm glad everyone is enjoying this one (so far).

Just a thought; If the FBI keeps it up, their bothering Wilhelmine will be just like some little kid poking at a bee's nest with a stick . . . Shocked

Let's see how that red flag removal works out for her.

By the way, did anyone catch the the Three Stooges reference in chapter 4?

Kel

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 27, 2011 9:14 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

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Ah, nothin like startin with a classic ref to the Three...


Wha? Musta missed that one...
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