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Aslaug Site Owner
Joined: 04 Jan 2005 Posts: 1861 Location: Slagelse, Denmark
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Posted: Fri Dec 10, 2010 6:32 am Post subject: |
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As I told Kellan ... the blood eagle would by much, much too mild a punishment when she gets a hold of him, and I'm glad I'm not the one who has to write it, because I doubt I can think of something vile and gruesome enough to cover what she'll do to him. |
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Frazikar Registered User
Joined: 25 Jan 2008 Posts: 1181 Location: North Coast, USA
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Posted: Fri Dec 10, 2010 10:55 am Post subject: |
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Oh boy, somehow I don't think there's enough Timmies to go round this time...
...and I don't think throwinig Runji out to the wolves (or one big wolf) is gonna help...
Oh yea, Jenna should remember that betrayal (at the right time) is acceptable ... |
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Kellan Meig'h Administrator
Joined: 01 Apr 2007 Posts: 2045 Location: Just East of Indianapolis, Indiana
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Posted: Sat Dec 18, 2010 12:07 am Post subject: Hmm . . . |
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Okay, I'm surprised that no fur has caught on to the pair of hints as to what might be out of whack with things in general in Chapter 2.
As an observation; do y'all think Kenji is toast once the Angelbreaker finds out what's happened? And a 'Thank You' goes out to Aslaug, allowing me write her part in this story. And yes, a Blood Eagle would be a kind alternative to what might happen to the leopard. Remember, he has no powers except immortality so it will take a serious amount of damage to off the feline.
And as an aside; Who should get to Kenji first? Should it be Aslaug or maybe it should be Victoria, after she sees what the clouded leopard has done to her home?
Or should it be a "Tag-Team" effort by Aslaug and Victoria?
Just sayin' . . . _________________ "Старый боевой конь, Кeллан" |
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Frazikar Registered User
Joined: 25 Jan 2008 Posts: 1181 Location: North Coast, USA
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Posted: Sat Dec 18, 2010 11:27 am Post subject: |
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Quote: | I'm surprised that no fur has caught on to the pair of hints |
Somethimes they don't til a later read...
As for Victoria and Aslaug, uh, which one called 'dibs' first? |
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Kellan Meig'h Administrator
Joined: 01 Apr 2007 Posts: 2045 Location: Just East of Indianapolis, Indiana
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Posted: Sat Dec 18, 2010 10:29 pm Post subject: If I Remember Right . . . |
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Frazikar wrote: | Quote: | I'm surprised that no fur has caught on to the pair of hints |
Somethimes they don't til a later read...
As for Victoria and Aslaug, uh, which one called 'dibs' first? |
Without going into detail, I would think that it was Aslaug that has "First Dibs" on the spotted one's hide (literally).
Kel _________________ "Старый боевой конь, Кeллан" |
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Kellan Meig'h Administrator
Joined: 01 Apr 2007 Posts: 2045 Location: Just East of Indianapolis, Indiana
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Posted: Tue Dec 21, 2010 9:22 pm Post subject: Another chapter? |
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An early present from the Old Warhorse;
Chapter 03 of "Redemption"
Enjoy! _________________ "Старый боевой конь, Кeллан" |
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Frazikar Registered User
Joined: 25 Jan 2008 Posts: 1181 Location: North Coast, USA
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Posted: Wed Dec 22, 2010 9:22 am Post subject: |
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Wha ya doin?
Stirrin up an anthill...
Why?
Do get Timmie in, of course...
But he's busy...
Oh...
(*together*) Let's get Mikey!!! |
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Kellan Meig'h Administrator
Joined: 01 Apr 2007 Posts: 2045 Location: Just East of Indianapolis, Indiana
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Posted: Wed Dec 29, 2010 8:43 pm Post subject: Another chapter? |
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Here's another chapter for all of you-
Chapter 04 of "Redemption"
Enjoy! _________________ "Старый боевой конь, Кeллан" |
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Tigermark Site Owner
Joined: 18 Apr 2003 Posts: 855 Location: Hopkinsville, KY
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Posted: Thu Dec 30, 2010 5:11 am Post subject: |
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So they're back on their homeworld. Loved the stab at gas prices.
Now, teh stuff is really gonna hit te fan for the Malefic Council.
TM _________________ Tiger, tiger, burning bright...
http://www.planetfurry.com/~tigermark |
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Kellan Meig'h Administrator
Joined: 01 Apr 2007 Posts: 2045 Location: Just East of Indianapolis, Indiana
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Posted: Tue Jan 25, 2011 3:35 am Post subject: Chapter 05 |
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Well, here it is.
"Redemption" Chapter 05
It's not the best chapter I have ever hacked out but I think it serves well for story progression.
Enjoy! _________________ "Старый боевой конь, Кeллан" |
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Frazikar Registered User
Joined: 25 Jan 2008 Posts: 1181 Location: North Coast, USA
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Posted: Tue Jan 25, 2011 9:56 am Post subject: |
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Ah, nothin like startin with a classic ref to the Three...
As for the story itself - some lose ends tied, one left for pickup ... hmmm, have to wonder if anyone else (at the higher end) has an interest in this... |
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Tigermark Site Owner
Joined: 18 Apr 2003 Posts: 855 Location: Hopkinsville, KY
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Posted: Wed Jan 26, 2011 1:37 am Post subject: |
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*Snicker* I love that last scene with Willie. hehe, "Forgot I could do that?"
TM _________________ Tiger, tiger, burning bright...
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Frazikar Registered User
Joined: 25 Jan 2008 Posts: 1181 Location: North Coast, USA
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Posted: Wed Jan 26, 2011 9:39 am Post subject: |
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Quote: | Transport! We don't need no transport! |
Something like that, eh... |
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Kellan Meig'h Administrator
Joined: 01 Apr 2007 Posts: 2045 Location: Just East of Indianapolis, Indiana
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Posted: Wed Jan 26, 2011 8:31 pm Post subject: Thanks, everyone |
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I'm glad everyone is enjoying this one (so far).
Just a thought; If the FBI keeps it up, their bothering Wilhelmine will be just like some little kid poking at a bee's nest with a stick . . .
Let's see how that red flag removal works out for her.
By the way, did anyone catch the the Three Stooges reference in chapter 4?
Kel _________________ "Старый боевой конь, Кeллан" |
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Frazikar Registered User
Joined: 25 Jan 2008 Posts: 1181 Location: North Coast, USA
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Posted: Thu Jan 27, 2011 9:14 am Post subject: |
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Quote: | Ah, nothin like startin with a classic ref to the Three... |
Wha? Musta missed that one... |
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