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DragonWolf_keny
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PostPosted: Sun Jul 26, 2009 12:48 am    Post subject: Dragon Empire Saga: Rise of the Slaves Reply with quote

Dragon Empire Saga: Rise of the Slaves

My science fiction story called Dragon Empire Saga: Rise of the Slaves will soon be made available on the raccoon bookshelf. so to make it simple, I started a thread just for discussing it.

I decided to post all my new works on my deviantart account
http://kenywolf.deviantart.com/

it wit be easier to update them and download from there, at least till I get around to arranging having it put on the bookshelf.

This new thread will be for discussing the story itself. So feel free to read it and tell me what you think of it. for those that have read up to the now, it has since been rewritten so feel free to read it again.

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PostPosted: Tue Oct 27, 2009 12:21 am    Post subject: Updates: what is going on with the bookshelf version Reply with quote

well, I am finally working on getting this Dragon Empire Saga, posted on the bookshelf here at planet furry. Mr. Regan is in the process of editing, and has been given the most recent copies. As soon as I review the changes and OK the final drafts with him, I will give the permission to go ahead with posting it on the shelf.

I apologize to any readers about the lack of progress on this work so far, but I promise I will at least, put up chapters 1-5 as soon as it is ready for the site. I am also working on chapters 6-10. I cant make any promises on when they will be ready, as that is entirely up to Mike. Also, I have yet to even work on any chapters after chapter 5 yet. Rolling Eyes

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PostPosted: Tue Nov 17, 2009 1:20 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Well its been a while, and no posts have been made by any others yet so, I'm sorry for all the double posts.

Things are going somewhat well in terms of my real world life, but as far as the story goes, it is done up to chapter five.

I have finalized some drafts to mike. This weekend he will be posting the story up one chapter every week in the bookshelf. So feel free to check them out whenever you find the time to do so.

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PostPosted: Wed Nov 25, 2009 12:53 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

OK just read it. Itīs interresting and makes lust for more.
Looks like she is in trouble or not. What I can see so far is that she has the job as a slave/butler/lifeguard.

Keep going.Looks good so far.

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PostPosted: Thu Nov 26, 2009 2:42 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I had commented quite a bit while you were posting in the writers area. I am now waiting for it to catch up and I am wanting to see what you come up with for the later chapters. Just putting it down so you know it is not due to lack of interest Wink
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 28, 2009 10:48 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Is that a light at the end of this tunnel or just an oncoming vessel?
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 28, 2009 1:04 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Is it luck or Murphy that she got rescued by friendly humans.
I really like to know why everything exploded at the base.

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PostPosted: Sun Nov 29, 2009 2:32 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

tobi3B wrote:
Is it luck or Murphy that she got rescued by friendly humans.


I like to call it divine providence. Laughing

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PostPosted: Mon Nov 30, 2009 6:34 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I think its pretty good so far, looking forward to further installments. I thought the character descriptions were pretty neat. Interesting plot...
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 08, 2009 11:56 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I'm so glad for all the wonderful responses. To be honest, I feared it might be met with scrutiny of being too similar to star wars.

I was hoping to get more done before I had posted it, but of late, well things hadn't been too well this year. My brother died and this is the first Christmas without him so its been really hard on my mother.

Well, anyway looking forwards to when it does catch up to chapter five. I wanted to get chapter six done by Christmas, but that seems to be getting a bit harder than I had originally thought.

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PostPosted: Wed Dec 09, 2009 12:26 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

My condolences Dragonwolf
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 12, 2009 11:45 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Ooohhhh, shiny new world....
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 13, 2009 2:23 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Naw, we all know that star wars was a long long time ago in a galaxy far far away...
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 16, 2009 7:10 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Frazikar wrote:
Ooohhhh, shiny new world....


I think the context you were looking for was,
"Ooohhh, Shiny new Universe...."

Chapter five will be coming soon. Chapter five is really what I like to call a filler chapter, not to say it isn't interesting but it really calms things down and slows the action, but draws out the new directions of the plot. It mostly is about posturing and character development. The next chapter I promise will get more action but for now I have really needed a break in action.

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PostPosted: Sun Dec 27, 2009 9:21 pm    Post subject: updates and belated happy holidays Reply with quote

well, Christmas is over with, but I can still wish you all a happy and safe new year. hope you all got what you really wanted for Christmas, I did and it wasn't anything you can buy in a store, it was finally getting all our happy wonderful family together. Smile

I felt adoring fans deserved an update. Firstly I will be getting back to regularly scheduled chapter additions, but unfortunately my old and busted computer busted for the last time. Sad Don't sweat it though, I got a brand new Dell for Christmas! so as soon as I can get all my files restored, I hope?

I will be getting it all back up but it may be hard, because the hard drive was literally on fire! Not a fun surprise I assure you. So I'm having to retrieve it through the backup one and hope they survived on the backup drive by some slight miracle.

Anyways that whats going on! Laughing
again happy new year and good night!
Keny

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