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Cyril / The Human Factor
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PostPosted: Sat May 08, 2010 8:55 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Young human is going to be very surprised 'bout his 'striped lady'...
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PostPosted: Tue May 11, 2010 11:27 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

The Greg fellow is a little obsessive to say the least....and kinda crazy?
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PostPosted: Wed May 12, 2010 9:21 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Interrested in reading it you bet.
But I read at the moment 2 Books part one and two.
And my time to read is a little bit small at the moment.
So yeah will take me some time to get to it

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PostPosted: Wed May 12, 2010 9:52 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hawke wrote:
The Greg fellow is a little obsessive to say the least....and kinda crazy?


Seconded.

All in agreement, show of paws?

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PostPosted: Fri May 14, 2010 4:17 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hm. I get a 404 when I click on it.

EDIT: Actually, I'm getting a 404 on quite a few stories.

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PostPosted: Fri May 14, 2010 12:41 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

In case of typos, it can be useful to give both the bad URL and the page it was clicked from (could be multiple pages linking to it). Sometimes it's as simple as a difference in caps. URLs are case sensitive after the .com/ .net/ .org/ etc.
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PostPosted: Fri May 14, 2010 1:01 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I noticed that almost a full 1/3 of the pages in this first section were title and bios, much more than most stories give. Hopefully the next segment won't have to include them, when I see 21 pages, I want at least 19 pages of actual story.

That said, looking forward to more.

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PostPosted: Fri May 14, 2010 8:41 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Okay, it was the ".com" site. And yes, it is working now. So, all's good. Next time I'll be sure to say the site. Very Happy
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PostPosted: Fri May 14, 2010 10:00 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Read parts 8 - 10 . . .

Gah! Leave me hanging like that!

Good story, though.

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PostPosted: Sat May 15, 2010 8:43 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

The author is really going for the title of "Hang'em high"... decent job of it so far...
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PostPosted: Sat May 15, 2010 10:22 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thank you all for the comments!
Actually, I simply don't know what to say to that.

Note that this story will not have the pace you find in Ship's Boy... I have been accused of getting sidetracked more than once.
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PostPosted: Sat May 22, 2010 4:47 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Benny I can understand since his job is security, but how did Greg sneak a gun into the premises for his journey? Don't they have security points around such a lab as this?
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PostPosted: Sat May 22, 2010 8:19 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Greg knows how to bypass whatever security was in place...

Of course, Maria has a few new problems to deal with...
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PostPosted: Sat May 22, 2010 10:22 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

AmigaDragon wrote:
...but how did Greg sneak a gun into the premises for his journey? Don't they have security points around such a lab as this?


No. It's located in a university (normally means no checkpoints) and the goal of the setup has nothing to do with animate matter passing through.
The only checkpoint Greg passed was the guard at the entrance of the building. He'd think 'ah, Greg' and nothing else. Compare to the average physics setup you'd find in a university today. Walk around confidently, say 'hi' from time to time, and if you're without scruple you can get your hands on many items.
Imagine Cally's setup, a riff-raff of old/new materials, cables everywhere, inaccessible, would not pass any safety board. Lean to the wrong part and you get zapped with current, that sort of thing. A token yellow 'Gefahr / Caution' page pasted here and there. I'm sorry I can't get the image across better Sad

Cyril's situation is entirely different though. His setup is in the basement of the highly secretive temporal core building. Bought and defined safety first.

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PostPosted: Sat May 22, 2010 11:16 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Just finished the next installment and I have to say, maybe Greg isn't the total @**-wipe I thought he was.

I do hope Maria fares better.

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