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PostPosted: Sat Apr 24, 2010 11:49 am    Post subject: Ship's boy Reply with quote

Hope this isn't censored, but... WTF!?

You're not supposed to bring out this amount of awesome in just one posting.

Not posting more, to avoid spoilers, but yeah, awesome.

Mike; You may want to check your files, as the card catalog entries doesn't work, and I think classing it as 'non-furry' is wrong as the boy is a rabbit, even if it doesn't come up all the time.

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PostPosted: Sun Apr 25, 2010 2:37 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I thought it was pretty awesome so far...Hope to see more...
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 26, 2010 8:07 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

<blush>

Thank you for all the kind words!

I don't tend to post my stuff on forums because this makes it _much_harder to sell to publishers. When I _do_ post, it tends to be my older, weaker work for this same reason. But this time around, I decided to be different. If I end up with something that looks salable, I may hafta ask Mike to take it down.

Phil =:3

(Who plans to begin Part 16 later today...)
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PostPosted: Wed Apr 28, 2010 3:25 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

As for the furry/non-furry part, perhaps a "mixed" classification should be added.

I haven't started reading this one yet but perhaps I will before the weekend update.

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PostPosted: Mon May 03, 2010 7:17 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

WOA.

This is some good stuff! Just read up through part 7. A gripping, exciting read!

And now I just HAVE to know what happens to the three of them as they plummet toward the planet, in a ship bereft of engines and just enough atmosphere to sustain a single room!

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PostPosted: Fri May 07, 2010 10:39 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

The story is starting to shape up very well. It will be interesting to see where the story goes.
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PostPosted: Sat May 08, 2010 8:52 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hmmm, a free lepine who's also a cadet, it won't be good to spread that info out....

Of course, the young Lord knows how to throw some of his new weight around (and will be getting LOTS of practice soon)...
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PostPosted: Sat May 08, 2010 12:51 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thank you all for reading, and even more for taking the time to comment.
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PostPosted: Sat May 08, 2010 5:22 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Wow. Talk about opening up with a bang! That reminds me of some of the better James Bond movies, as far as action sequences are concerned.

David's a really good kid. Excellent characterizations all around, but then history has shown you to be adept at that. Now, though, I worry about how he's going to get along as a free bunny, assuming they get away safely. It seems the zeitgeist isn't set up for that.

Thank you for sharing! Looking forward to the next installment.

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PostPosted: Mon May 10, 2010 4:21 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

So Percy deliberately stepped out of the airlock to let David into the ship. Seems like the rest of the crew on board aren't too fond of rabbits. It's nice to know that David has at least two humans on board that are on his side, but I fear that he has a pretty rough uphill battle ahead of him to earn any respect at all.

I suspect the marines likely would have let him drift off into space if he missed any of his space leaps... Evil or Very Mad

Racism still runs deep, even in the far future.

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PostPosted: Sat May 15, 2010 8:44 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Dang, another ship shot out from under him...
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PostPosted: Sat May 15, 2010 6:25 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I'm glad you guys are enjoying this-- Thanks for all the comments!
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PostPosted: Mon May 17, 2010 5:38 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Aw, crap. Crazy captain that has zero tactical sense, planning to board and take over an imperial cruiser.

Captain Blaine, if you would stop for a second and consider: Your engineering section is completely scrapped. You can't move your ship by conventional means, and your velocity is a complete zero. In all likelihood, the cruiser will exit the jump point headed right up your aft section, leaving you in absolutely no position to board it before the Hummingbird is obliterated.

So, perhaps, you plan to send out your marines in space suits, well enough away from the Hummingbird to avoid getting smashed in the process, and then by some miracle grabbing onto the passing cruiser and then by yet another miracle finding some way to gather enough marines together in one place on the hull to (by yet another miracle) cut through it and mount an effective assault against a crew that outnumbers them ten to one?

Well, Captain, I hope you plan to join those marines out in space, because your precious Hummingbird is doomed unless you can figure out a way to move it without engines.

Move over, idiot. Let those with brains try to figure this out.

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PostPosted: Tue May 18, 2010 12:16 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Sometimes the best defense is an offense with a questionable outcome...
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PostPosted: Tue May 18, 2010 7:27 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Teric, space is big...

Even so, any cruiser enting the system may have to use the same course and speed to collide with Hummingbird. Up to the author...
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