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PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2010 7:23 am    Post subject: Defiance Reply with quote

Hello folks.

Seeing as I've just sent off the fourteenth chapter of this story to my proofers, and seeing as I am nowhere near the end of it all yet, I think it's time to start a new topic for this one.

Comments for chapters 1-3 can still be found in the ALN/ALS string, but this storyline stands on its own by now and should have its own string.

BEAR IN MIND that this is still a collaborative effort, insofar as Kellan Meig'h's story, "End Game" is fully canon to "Defiance", and vice versa. I urge you all to read his story, which you can find on his site. Victoria and Torvald Svensen's side of the tale is told in that story. I'm telling Aslaug's and Joe Latrans' tale in mine.

Oh, and Varghöss. Let's not forget my new favorite, slightly psychotic 750 lbs war-wolf ...
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2010 7:42 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

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Varghöss. Let's not forget my new favorite, slightly psychotic 750 lbs war-wolf ...


Hmmm, think he's just a touch underfed...should be 775 to 800...
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2010 11:20 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hey, he's LEAN! Do you think Aslaug would ride around a phat wolf? Very Happy
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2010 3:00 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Chapter 4 is up!
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2010 9:59 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Ah, chapter 4 ... Wink A very good chapter indeed.

(no spoilers given out, though)

Even though this is a parallel/canon story to my "End Game", I still feel like Aslaug is the lead writer. Very Happy

Anyway, I'm glad this was posted so I can insert a small bit into "End Game" Chapter 8 to tie them together. The filly knows what I'm talking about.

If you think writing is tough, try doing a duo-story! I have to admit, because it's stretching my boundaries and my beliefs, I'm enjoying every single minute of it. Very Happy

And Varghöss; what would a story be without a huge wolf for the ...

*feels a large wet nose 'sniffing' at his leg*

"Oh, Hi, Varghöss. Good wolf ..."

*backs away, only to have the huge canid follow, growling*

"Um, Aslaug? A little help?"

*keeps moving back, trying to dodge the huge tongue licking at him*

"Aslaug! Help!!"

*Attempts to keep from being a 'new' chew toy for the wolf*

"Help!!"

*Sounds of hooves on pavement followed closely by the clicking of canid claws*

Shocked

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PostPosted: Fri Apr 16, 2010 2:47 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

why did I just get a picture of a game of Tetherball when the filly did that swing-around kick? *chuckles softly*
Good story Filly. And a bit twisty. I think we're all in for a wild ride.

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You have to admit, that is funny....and puts soooo many pictures in your head.
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PostPosted: Fri Apr 16, 2010 2:51 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Why do you think I expressedly described her as swinging like a tetherball after a good whack? Very Happy

Still, I remember whincing when I tried to imagine what that kind of force would do to a face.
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PostPosted: Fri Apr 16, 2010 3:01 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Large rotational force + over 6 1/2' Filly + Iron Shod Hooves + ...not even going to guess the weight = hamburger.
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PostPosted: Fri Apr 16, 2010 9:20 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Many a hunter became the hunted by following too close...

BTW, the HMTL doubled back to the Filly's salvation Army joke at the end...
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 29, 2010 7:57 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Now there's an image to think about, the filly going through the halls of the Vatican, with various members of the Swiss Guard behind her (Pike vs Axe!!)...
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 29, 2010 2:03 pm    Post subject: Comments Reply with quote

Chapter 5 of "Defiance" is one of my favorites in this series. Once you read it, you'll know why.

Very Happy

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PostPosted: Mon May 03, 2010 4:08 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks Kellan Smile I have others that I like better, though, but with the twist that the story is taking in the chapters I'm working on now ... I think I can safely promise some serious changes to the "universe".
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PostPosted: Fri May 14, 2010 9:51 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hmm, so the Vatican's haunted, who would have believed that??
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PostPosted: Tue May 18, 2010 7:46 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Frazikar wrote:
Hmm, so the Vatican's haunted, who would have believed that??


*snort* Who wouldn't?

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PostPosted: Wed May 19, 2010 6:56 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Saying I need heavier sarcasm there TM?
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