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Tigermark Site Owner
Joined: 18 Apr 2003 Posts: 855 Location: Hopkinsville, KY
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Posted: Wed Oct 06, 2010 4:00 am Post subject: |
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Ah, yeah, note to self....
Add Victoria to my list of femmes to stay the heck away from when they are having a hissy fit!!!!
Great ending, Kel.
TM _________________ Tiger, tiger, burning bright...
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Frazikar Registered User
Joined: 25 Jan 2008 Posts: 1181 Location: North Coast, USA
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Posted: Wed Oct 06, 2010 8:11 am Post subject: |
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It's over folks, even though it was an error-filled game that went into extra innings, it had its moments. In fact, during the bottom of the inning a line coach really gave to one of the umpires for a blown call (some of the front row fans really got an earful)! Still the home team came through in the end... |
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Kellan Meig'h Administrator
Joined: 01 Apr 2007 Posts: 2044 Location: Just East of Indianapolis, Indiana
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Posted: Wed Oct 06, 2010 9:57 pm Post subject: |
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Tigermark wrote: | Ah, yeah, note to self....
Add Victoria to my list of femmes to stay the heck away from when they are having a hissy fit!!!!
Great ending, Kel.
TM |
Um, yeah . . .
Did I mention the fact that there's a lot of my tigress in Victoria?
And by the way, the story isn't quite over with. Still a bit left to write before the next story involving Torvald and Victoria, currently known as "Redemption".
There will be a break for bit between the two. I'm getting the feeling I'm burning out right now. Not that there isn't a great story line involving the new venture for Tor and Vicki, the "At-Risk Teen" Diversion program they're setting up. I also think I heard Cami asking if they had a position for her at the ranch.
Anyway, glad y'all have enjoyed "Defiance" and "End Game".
Kel _________________ "Старый боевой конь, Кeллан" |
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Kellan Meig'h Administrator
Joined: 01 Apr 2007 Posts: 2044 Location: Just East of Indianapolis, Indiana
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Posted: Sat Nov 20, 2010 8:18 pm Post subject: The final chapter. |
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Well, after a long struggle, here it is in its entirety.
"End Game" Chapter 18
I'm sure the ending will shock everyone.
In the next few days, I will finish up putting the "Defiance" links into the parent page for "End Game" so the read is continuous.
thanks for reading my meager scribblings,
Kellan, the old warhorse _________________ "Старый боевой конь, Кeллан" |
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Tigermark Site Owner
Joined: 18 Apr 2003 Posts: 855 Location: Hopkinsville, KY
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Aslaug Site Owner
Joined: 04 Jan 2005 Posts: 1861 Location: Slagelse, Denmark
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Posted: Sun Nov 21, 2010 2:37 am Post subject: |
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I can't believe you did that to them. I just ... can't ... believe it! |
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Frazikar Registered User
Joined: 25 Jan 2008 Posts: 1181 Location: North Coast, USA
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Posted: Sun Nov 21, 2010 10:33 am Post subject: |
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Hmmmm, must say it was a very explosive ending... |
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Benleopard Registered User
Joined: 28 Jan 2009 Posts: 390 Location: Finally free from D-land
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Posted: Sun Nov 21, 2010 2:55 pm Post subject: |
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we are forgetting that they are still Immortal until the god's can find a way to remove it without them dieing within a few minutes. _________________ Fortune Cookie that I keep in my walet say's "Knowledge is the only good and Ignorance is the only evil."
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Kellan Meig'h Administrator
Joined: 01 Apr 2007 Posts: 2044 Location: Just East of Indianapolis, Indiana
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Posted: Mon Nov 22, 2010 1:09 am Post subject: Aha! |
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Benleopard wrote: | we are forgetting that they are still Immortal until the god's can find a way to remove it without them dieing within a few minutes. |
Give the fur some catnip! You are quite observant! But are you right?
Yes they are/were immortal (can't say right now) but you have to remember, 160 kilos of explosives, made into IED's, makes a strong argument for the side of "They're gone".
But, the Celestial Court is keeping track of them, as evidenced by Judge Talmadge knowing where Victoria was when she 'transported' herself to Christopher's realm. But if they're not in the rubble of the barn, what little there is, where are they?
So, for your reading pleasure, I have started "Redemption", which I think will be a departure from the norm as far as "The Immortal Warrior" series is concerned.
Stay tuned,
Kel _________________ "Старый боевой конь, Кeллан" |
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