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PostPosted: Thu Jul 15, 2010 3:49 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Good to see Tor back in one piece again And indeed, we now see exactly where the two stories meld.

One quick note about another plotline. In a previous chapter, where Nancy was raped while on their mission, her reaction didn't quite jibe with me. She seemed to accept it and shrug it off. This being her first mission, I would have thought it would have been a very, very traumatic event for her, and while she might find a way to put it out of her mind for the moment, I'd think that would be something that would haunt her more.

Just editorializing. It's your character and your story.

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PostPosted: Thu Jul 15, 2010 6:34 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I did point out the same thing, incidentally. A rape is traumatic enough that most women are marked for life. It's not something which is simply ... shrugged off. It leads to emotional problems, to lifelong psychological trauma and right after it happens, there are -very- severe physical effects of it, but again, it's Kellan's story. I just didn't think that part went down right either...
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PostPosted: Thu Jul 15, 2010 10:11 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Aslaug, TM,

Um, you're both jumping the gun here. Just be patient, that issue will be addressed and it will tie up what seems to be a loose end.

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PostPosted: Thu Jul 15, 2010 10:49 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

*paws held up* I'll be awaiting it with interest Wink
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PostPosted: Sat Jul 17, 2010 1:06 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Aslaug wrote:
*paws held up* I'll be awaiting it with interest Wink


Really? What rate, 10% or the going prime?

*Runs away laughing*

J/K Filly!

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PostPosted: Sat Jul 17, 2010 2:21 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Tigermark wrote:
Aslaug wrote:
*paws held up* I'll be awaiting it with interest Wink


Really? What rate, 10% or the going prime?

*Runs away laughing*

J/K Filly!

TM


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PostPosted: Sat Jul 17, 2010 3:03 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Et tu, Marcus Tigris?
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PostPosted: Sun Jul 18, 2010 4:07 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yep, me too.
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 09, 2010 10:11 am    Post subject: New Chapter up! Reply with quote

Hey All!

Well, the old warhorse finally got this latest chapter hammered out.

Enjoy!

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 10, 2010 3:19 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I hope you're already writing on the next one because day-uhmd that's one chapter I want to read Very Happy
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 10, 2010 8:11 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 10, 2010 1:27 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Oh, now this bodes very ill for Nancy. Not fair at all. To my previous note, this is more like the reaction I'd expect from her. To find out what happened to her before makes it all the more tragic.

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 10, 2010 9:48 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Tigermark wrote:
Oh, now this bodes very ill for Nancy. Not fair at all. To my previous note, this is more like the reaction I'd expect from her. To find out what happened to her before makes it all the more tragic.

TM


TM-

Usually, it's the good furs that prevail and come out on top, smelling like a rose. this is one case where the good femme gets a huge ration of [email protected] dropped in her lap, courtesy of The Almighty. It's not like she chose to be immortal, anyway. She would gladly give that all up and be plain old mortal Nancy Corbin, wife, mother, Structural Engineer and Project Manager.

Even though her father had an agreement that should have prevented her from ever being mixed up in this insanity called "Missions for the good of all furkind", The Abrahamic God chose to use a 'perceived' loophole in that agreement to enlist her services.

And you would think Allfather would have stepped in and put his foot down by now, wouldn't you? Especially due to the "Work for me or else" stipulation put forth to her.

And I would think Odin wasn't too busy teaching the berserker a lesson to have it out with The Almighty.

"Some times you're the windshield, some times you're the bug"

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 11, 2010 2:27 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I think it can be boiled down to all the various divine spheres being out for No. 1, and mortal furs (or even immortals) being pawns in a gigantic game of chess, hnefatafl, go or checkers! Pick your poison, really.
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 20, 2010 2:45 am    Post subject: New chapter up! Reply with quote

Well, my proofers were kind to the latest installment so here it is -

Chapter 14 of "End Game'

The end of the chapter is a shocker so don't say I didn't warn you!

Enjoy! (if you can)

Kel

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