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Tigermark Site Owner
Joined: 18 Apr 2003 Posts: 855 Location: Hopkinsville, KY
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Posted: Thu Jul 15, 2010 3:49 am Post subject: |
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Good to see Tor back in one piece again And indeed, we now see exactly where the two stories meld.
One quick note about another plotline. In a previous chapter, where Nancy was raped while on their mission, her reaction didn't quite jibe with me. She seemed to accept it and shrug it off. This being her first mission, I would have thought it would have been a very, very traumatic event for her, and while she might find a way to put it out of her mind for the moment, I'd think that would be something that would haunt her more.
Just editorializing. It's your character and your story.
TM _________________ Tiger, tiger, burning bright...
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Aslaug Site Owner
Joined: 04 Jan 2005 Posts: 1861 Location: Slagelse, Denmark
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Posted: Thu Jul 15, 2010 6:34 am Post subject: |
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I did point out the same thing, incidentally. A rape is traumatic enough that most women are marked for life. It's not something which is simply ... shrugged off. It leads to emotional problems, to lifelong psychological trauma and right after it happens, there are -very- severe physical effects of it, but again, it's Kellan's story. I just didn't think that part went down right either... |
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Kellan Meig'h Administrator
Joined: 01 Apr 2007 Posts: 2045 Location: Just East of Indianapolis, Indiana
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Posted: Thu Jul 15, 2010 10:11 am Post subject: |
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Aslaug, TM,
Um, you're both jumping the gun here. Just be patient, that issue will be addressed and it will tie up what seems to be a loose end.
Kel _________________ "Старый боевой конь, Кeллан" |
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Aslaug Site Owner
Joined: 04 Jan 2005 Posts: 1861 Location: Slagelse, Denmark
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Posted: Thu Jul 15, 2010 10:49 am Post subject: |
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*paws held up* I'll be awaiting it with interest |
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Tigermark Site Owner
Joined: 18 Apr 2003 Posts: 855 Location: Hopkinsville, KY
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Posted: Sat Jul 17, 2010 1:06 pm Post subject: |
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Aslaug wrote: | *paws held up* I'll be awaiting it with interest |
Really? What rate, 10% or the going prime?
*Runs away laughing*
J/K Filly!
TM _________________ Tiger, tiger, burning bright...
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Kellan Meig'h Administrator
Joined: 01 Apr 2007 Posts: 2045 Location: Just East of Indianapolis, Indiana
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Posted: Sat Jul 17, 2010 2:21 pm Post subject: |
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Tigermark wrote: | Aslaug wrote: | *paws held up* I'll be awaiting it with interest |
Really? What rate, 10% or the going prime?
*Runs away laughing*
J/K Filly!
TM |
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Aslaug Site Owner
Joined: 04 Jan 2005 Posts: 1861 Location: Slagelse, Denmark
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Posted: Sat Jul 17, 2010 3:03 pm Post subject: |
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Et tu, Marcus Tigris? |
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Tigermark Site Owner
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Kellan Meig'h Administrator
Joined: 01 Apr 2007 Posts: 2045 Location: Just East of Indianapolis, Indiana
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Posted: Mon Aug 09, 2010 10:11 am Post subject: New Chapter up! |
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Hey All!
Well, the old warhorse finally got this latest chapter hammered out.
Enjoy!
Kel _________________ "Старый боевой конь, Кeллан" |
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Aslaug Site Owner
Joined: 04 Jan 2005 Posts: 1861 Location: Slagelse, Denmark
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Posted: Tue Aug 10, 2010 3:19 am Post subject: |
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I hope you're already writing on the next one because day-uhmd that's one chapter I want to read |
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Frazikar Registered User
Joined: 25 Jan 2008 Posts: 1181 Location: North Coast, USA
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Posted: Tue Aug 10, 2010 8:11 am Post subject: |
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...and now this message from our sponsors....
[Which L&O series?] |
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Tigermark Site Owner
Joined: 18 Apr 2003 Posts: 855 Location: Hopkinsville, KY
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Posted: Tue Aug 10, 2010 1:27 pm Post subject: |
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Oh, now this bodes very ill for Nancy. Not fair at all. To my previous note, this is more like the reaction I'd expect from her. To find out what happened to her before makes it all the more tragic.
TM _________________ Tiger, tiger, burning bright...
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Kellan Meig'h Administrator
Joined: 01 Apr 2007 Posts: 2045 Location: Just East of Indianapolis, Indiana
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Posted: Tue Aug 10, 2010 9:48 pm Post subject: |
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Tigermark wrote: | Oh, now this bodes very ill for Nancy. Not fair at all. To my previous note, this is more like the reaction I'd expect from her. To find out what happened to her before makes it all the more tragic.
TM |
TM-
Usually, it's the good furs that prevail and come out on top, smelling like a rose. this is one case where the good femme gets a huge ration of cr@p dropped in her lap, courtesy of The Almighty. It's not like she chose to be immortal, anyway. She would gladly give that all up and be plain old mortal Nancy Corbin, wife, mother, Structural Engineer and Project Manager.
Even though her father had an agreement that should have prevented her from ever being mixed up in this insanity called "Missions for the good of all furkind", The Abrahamic God chose to use a 'perceived' loophole in that agreement to enlist her services.
And you would think Allfather would have stepped in and put his foot down by now, wouldn't you? Especially due to the "Work for me or else" stipulation put forth to her.
And I would think Odin wasn't too busy teaching the berserker a lesson to have it out with The Almighty.
"Some times you're the windshield, some times you're the bug"
Kel _________________ "Старый боевой конь, Кeллан" |
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Aslaug Site Owner
Joined: 04 Jan 2005 Posts: 1861 Location: Slagelse, Denmark
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Posted: Wed Aug 11, 2010 2:27 am Post subject: |
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I think it can be boiled down to all the various divine spheres being out for No. 1, and mortal furs (or even immortals) being pawns in a gigantic game of chess, hnefatafl, go or checkers! Pick your poison, really. |
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Kellan Meig'h Administrator
Joined: 01 Apr 2007 Posts: 2045 Location: Just East of Indianapolis, Indiana
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Posted: Fri Aug 20, 2010 2:45 am Post subject: New chapter up! |
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Well, my proofers were kind to the latest installment so here it is -
Chapter 14 of "End Game'
The end of the chapter is a shocker so don't say I didn't warn you!
Enjoy! (if you can)
Kel _________________ "Старый боевой конь, Кeллан" |
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