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PostPosted: Mon Jan 04, 2010 1:48 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

looks can be very deceiving
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 04, 2010 9:40 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Definately, mirror shattering...
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 04, 2010 9:51 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

to chapter 19
Thank god not an invisible bridge. Otherwise really interresting

to chapter 20
Mirror, Mirror on the wall Very Happy
Well some answers she got but not all.

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PostPosted: Mon Jan 04, 2010 10:18 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

tobi3B wrote:
to chapter 19
Thank god not an invisible bridge. Otherwise really interresting

to chapter 20
Mirror, Mirror on the wall Very Happy
Well some answers she got but not all.


Heheh. I was wondering if someone would make that 'bridge' connection - but yes - no violations of the laws of physics here.

At least not where the chasm is concerned.

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PostPosted: Mon Jan 04, 2010 10:24 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thatīs why I like your stories. They are logic.
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 06, 2010 1:14 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Took me a while to get around to saying...

When I see "Daeom'acal", one of my first thoughts is a southern accent exclaiming "dayamn". Laughing

Now back to catching up on the last couple chapters...

EDIT:
...done. I suppose you could call that a suicide shot, except for the survival.

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 07, 2010 4:43 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Cirrel, sometimes I want to hate you for writing such addictive stories. They end too soon. Thankfully, this one hasn't, yet. Wink
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 09, 2010 12:21 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

All I know is that once I start to read one of his stories I can't stop!
This can be a problem at times, like when I need to sleep so I can go to work and stay off the public dole. Laughing
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 10, 2010 12:51 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Chapter 21 of Darien's Gap is now posted to my website.

http://www.wilderhom.com/dariensgap/dariensgapFULL.html

Again, the new material is at the bottom of the full story file.

I didn't get a chance to have Mike go over this for typos, but I'm heading out on the road in a few minutes and can't post to my own website from my laptop (for lack of software). If you guys see any loose ends not tied up by this first version, let me know. I can change things easily enough. Also, an epilogue will be coming.

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PostPosted: Sun Jan 10, 2010 1:13 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I found it when I got on this morning and sent my edits back to you.
So you will have them when you get the chance to make them.

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PostPosted: Mon Jan 11, 2010 12:20 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Time travel. Ouch, always makes my head hurt at the possible ramifications and multiple dimensions and timelines.

Great finish, C. The Epilogue will be interesting.

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PostPosted: Mon Jan 11, 2010 2:36 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Ha I know it. Great ending Cirrel
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 11, 2010 9:07 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Oh, come-on there TM, the clue-by-fours practicallty screamed time-travel, especially the poem lines -

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Gaps are crossed between the Two, Golden Siblings, interchange.
Heros of the Future Past. Know we not, who's first or last.


I mean, 'Future Past' and 'interchange' plus the phone messages...

(either that or I've been reading tooo many of these things)
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 11, 2010 5:42 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

owwwie... time paradoxes kinda throw my mind into a large loop that hurts my brain of the endless probability
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 12, 2010 2:59 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Frazikar wrote:
Oh, come-on there TM, the clue-by-fours practicallty screamed time-travel, especially the poem lines -

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Gaps are crossed between the Two, Golden Siblings, interchange.
Heros of the Future Past. Know we not, who's first or last.


I mean, 'Future Past' and 'interchange' plus the phone messages...

(either that or I've been reading tooo many of these things)


Heh, Frazikar, I was being a bit facetious. TM deals with time and dimension travel on a regular basis in the ALN multiverse. Sometimes it does become a bit muddled at to when you are and where time it is.

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