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Cirrel
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 03, 2009 6:45 pm    Post subject: Darien's Gap - A Nohni Wabanda Story. Reply with quote

My regular story posting forum is down temporarily, so this time, the PF crowd gets first look at chapter 15 of Darien's Gap. The entire Darien's Gap story so far - including the new chapter 15 at the bottom - can be found on my website at:

http://www.wilderhom.com/dariensgap/dariensgapFULL.html

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PostPosted: Fri Dec 04, 2009 10:41 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Go golden jackel, keep'em jumping....
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 04, 2009 2:00 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I really begin to wonder when Nohni will beat Pedro into Puphood.
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 04, 2009 11:35 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

*menacing grin* Pedro=dead Fur walking. (I think, I don't know any more that y'all about what's coming next.)

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PostPosted: Sat Dec 05, 2009 10:32 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

#Popcornsmile Oh yeah
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 06, 2009 2:46 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I'll just keep waiting for the next chapter. I've given up trying to predict what's gonna happen next. Although Pedro being beaten to a pulp is a definite possibility.
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 06, 2009 9:04 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Pedro won't be surviving but will it be by a golden jackel or not is the question...
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 07, 2009 6:38 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Chapter 16 of Darien's Gap is now up on my site. Heheh. This be a classic 'cliff-hanger'. Razz
http://www.wilderhom.com/dariensgap/dariensgapFULL.html
Again, this file is the full story all the way up to the new chapter on the bottom.

Thanks everyone for your comments. Very Happy

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PostPosted: Mon Dec 07, 2009 10:11 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

hmmmm... wow, another cliffhanger. XP
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 08, 2009 1:29 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

That's a pretty narrow (and somewhat 4-walled?) cliff. Wink

As soon as the last lackey was being tossed, I had the idea that there may be a net or something a short distance down. We shall see when the story continues.

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"Please try to be more careful," said Pedro - the condescending tone in his voice quite evident. "The Goddess of Change needs you whole at our destination."

"It's a little late for that." she said, holding up her mutilated hand.

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PostPosted: Tue Dec 08, 2009 10:40 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

'Course it was a set-up, the question is just how long it's been waiting to be used...

BTW any bets the 'deceased' underling was in contact with DEA or something similar?
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 08, 2009 11:34 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Wow, shiver in the end.
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 08, 2009 2:11 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Intensive.
And my suspicion I PMed to you about who is the goddess is now hard as a diamond.
Looking forward to chapter 17

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PostPosted: Tue Dec 08, 2009 8:06 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Chapter 17 of Darien's Gap is up on my site. New chapter at the bottom of the file, as usual.

http://www.wilderhom.com/dariensgap/dariensgapFULL.html

One can hang on the cliff only so long. Razz

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PostPosted: Tue Dec 08, 2009 11:55 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Very Happy
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