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Alexi Registered User
Joined: 08 Feb 2009 Posts: 426 Location: Virginia Beach
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Posted: Sat Aug 29, 2009 11:49 pm Post subject: |
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I actually dred getting chapter five out. I know people are going to go places with a couple of parts and I'm not sure if I know how to respond.
Oh well.
For the sake of the story...this is gonna hurt. |
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Hawke Registered User
Joined: 17 Jun 2009 Posts: 175 Location: Hickory Hills, IL (Near Chicago)
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Posted: Sun Aug 30, 2009 8:34 pm Post subject: |
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No pain no gain.....right? Well that's what I've been told. Well I certainly hope you DO gain something from it. And I look forward to reading chapter 3 _________________ "It's kind of like if you combined The Wizard of Oz and Reign of Fire...and Jonathan Livingston Seagull."
"^HuK'D aWN FoNYCs WuRKD 4 MEEEEEE!!!!" |
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kcmack Registered User
Joined: 07 Apr 2007 Posts: 142 Location: S.W. Missouri, US
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Posted: Sat Sep 05, 2009 2:53 am Post subject: |
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Good chapter Alexi. Keep the story coming! I imagine that Molly will be getting some lessons in gun safety at some point. _________________ "'Do you know, I always thought Unicorns were fabulous monsters, too? I never saw one alive before!'
'Well, now that we have seen each other,' said the Unicorn, 'if you believe in me, I'll believe in you.'"
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Alexi Registered User
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Posted: Sat Sep 05, 2009 3:23 am Post subject: |
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I've actually debatted this. I think that'll be in a much later chapter. Probably sometime around a girlscout camp or something. Poor doe's only a brownie right now. Give the kid time. Besides this next arc is gonna be a paw full for me. |
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Frazikar Registered User
Joined: 25 Jan 2008 Posts: 1181 Location: North Coast, USA
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Posted: Sat Sep 05, 2009 7:44 am Post subject: |
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"....life goes on..." |
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tobi3B Registered User
Joined: 07 Jan 2008 Posts: 645 Location: Germany Siegen
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Posted: Sat Sep 05, 2009 8:29 am Post subject: |
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Interesting. Nice to see Franks life changing. _________________ Whether a black cat brings misfortune or not, depends on whether one is a fur or a mouse.
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Alexi Registered User
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Posted: Sat Sep 05, 2009 9:33 am Post subject: |
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Oh, it's just starting for poor Frank.
Ever here the old adage about things going around and coming back around... |
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Karou WindStalker Registered User
Joined: 17 Nov 2006 Posts: 631 Location: Highland lakes, NJ, USA
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Posted: Sat Sep 05, 2009 12:46 pm Post subject: |
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Interesting chapter ^_^
I look forward to the next installment...
I wonder .. is the old rabbi going to be sending a femme to help Frank with the kit? And if so, do I smell a romance? _________________ Independent Business Owner ... Ask me, if interested in learning more.
Everything in its Own Season <- Current Story! |
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Alexi Registered User
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Posted: Sat Sep 05, 2009 1:01 pm Post subject: |
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Interesting theories. We shall see.
I'm begining to enjoy where people go with my ideas. It's like looking at the ripples in a mirror.
All I can say is the next chapters will tell more. This and nothing more |
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tobi3B Registered User
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Posted: Sat Sep 05, 2009 4:06 pm Post subject: |
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One thought I had.
I find the old buck a little bit deceitful ( hope that is the right word for it)
He donīt tell Frank that he ask the community to help him and Molly.
And Frank is a very personal character as I see it. Things can turn ugly after a while. Hope both have a long talk about these things. But I wait for the next chapter. _________________ Whether a black cat brings misfortune or not, depends on whether one is a fur or a mouse.
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Hawke Registered User
Joined: 17 Jun 2009 Posts: 175 Location: Hickory Hills, IL (Near Chicago)
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Posted: Sat Sep 05, 2009 8:49 pm Post subject: |
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Anyone else having trouble accessing the PDF? Firefox keep locking up on me when I try to open it and IEx wont load it either.....help? _________________ "It's kind of like if you combined The Wizard of Oz and Reign of Fire...and Jonathan Livingston Seagull."
"^HuK'D aWN FoNYCs WuRKD 4 MEEEEEE!!!!" |
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Karou WindStalker Registered User
Joined: 17 Nov 2006 Posts: 631 Location: Highland lakes, NJ, USA
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Posted: Sat Sep 05, 2009 8:52 pm Post subject: |
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No problems for me .. but I'm on Safari. _________________ Independent Business Owner ... Ask me, if interested in learning more.
Everything in its Own Season <- Current Story! |
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Hawke Registered User
Joined: 17 Jun 2009 Posts: 175 Location: Hickory Hills, IL (Near Chicago)
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Posted: Sat Sep 05, 2009 9:45 pm Post subject: |
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Thanks Mike,
the link you posted worked just fine but this one,
http://www.raccoons-bookshelf.com/Site/Stories/Alexi/Healing%20Hearts.pdf
still doesnt work. Its the one that I'm connected through from the bookshelf...
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Never mind, it works just fine now, thank you very much for your help! _________________ "It's kind of like if you combined The Wizard of Oz and Reign of Fire...and Jonathan Livingston Seagull."
"^HuK'D aWN FoNYCs WuRKD 4 MEEEEEE!!!!" |
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Hawke Registered User
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Posted: Sat Sep 05, 2009 10:09 pm Post subject: |
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Oh, I was not aware. Thanks for the info! _________________ "It's kind of like if you combined The Wizard of Oz and Reign of Fire...and Jonathan Livingston Seagull."
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Wolfshead Registered User
Joined: 25 Jun 2009 Posts: 49 Location: St. louis, MO USA
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Posted: Sun Sep 06, 2009 2:17 am Post subject: |
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I was wondering how Frank was going to stay involved. My guess was Molly had no relatives so when they mentioned Grandparents I wasn't sure where it was going. Very nicely worked out. Looking forward to ch. 4. |
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