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kcmack
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 14, 2009 10:19 pm    Post subject: Healing Hearts Reply with quote

Good to see your story up on the bookshelf Alexi. And I see you have chosen your title for the story. I am looking forward to reading the rest of the story.
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PostPosted: Sat Aug 15, 2009 8:53 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks, I've been wagging my tail since I got out of bed a couple of hours ago and saw it on the shelf. After a tense week over here, it really made my day.

Chapter three is done and at the editors. I should see it in a day or two. four is already written and will go to edits soon. Two is already in Mikes hands and awaiting his final look over. Now I just have to look at my notes and organize a few more events and I will be happily on track.

I'm glad you like it so far. I will try not to disappoint.
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PostPosted: Sat Aug 15, 2009 9:17 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

The Fly-Leaf sounded pretty awesome to me so I'll read it and post here. yay, new books to read!
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PostPosted: Sat Aug 15, 2009 9:36 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

k.. I read it and I thought it was great so far, no disappointment. I am looking forward to the next chapters being posted.
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PostPosted: Sat Aug 15, 2009 10:00 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Ch.2 will go up when mike is ready. Three, I'm waiting on from Nicolai.
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PostPosted: Sat Aug 15, 2009 10:03 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Excellent
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PostPosted: Sat Aug 15, 2009 10:49 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Good work Alexi. I enjoyed the read a lot.
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 17, 2009 7:51 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hrm .. reading it again .. very good story..

One thing strikes me : Kerosene Heater in parent's room ... carbon monoxide poisoning ... coupled with the cold in the house. Things don't look good for Molly's folks.

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PostPosted: Mon Aug 17, 2009 9:10 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Well... Chapter 2 is up in the writers guild. It will be up on the bookshelf as soon as Mike is done glancing it over for the final run. Three goes up as soon as Nicolai gets it back to me.

Hey Nic.

hint hint.
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 17, 2009 11:12 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Cool. Thank you oh master librarian.

I will call in fire su.. er I mean light Nicolai on fi.... er I mean lite a fire under Nicolai. Yeah, that's it.
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 21, 2009 10:56 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Alexi, I just finished reading chapter 2, the story seems to have a way to go, but is progressing very well. PTS can be a bear to deal with and I hope he works it out.

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PostPosted: Fri Aug 21, 2009 11:18 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yes it is.

Several parts of Frank's personality, the PTSD and a few other key parts are taken from someone I know quite well.

As with most writers, I have drawn off of things from my real life for parts of my stories.
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PostPosted: Sun Aug 23, 2009 3:42 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

And it shows I enjoyed chapter 2. Itīs hard what happened to Molly.
You realistically portrayed what a child does in such a situation.
Seek a guardian.
Well keep it up.

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 26, 2009 5:44 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I agree with tobi, chapter 2 was as excellent as the first, keep it up!
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PostPosted: Sat Aug 29, 2009 11:28 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Mike Regan wrote:
I have chapters 3 & 4.

3 will go up this next weekend and 4 the week after.

I look forward to reading them. ^_^

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