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Karou WindStalker Registered User
Joined: 17 Nov 2006 Posts: 631 Location: Highland lakes, NJ, USA
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Posted: Sat Jun 27, 2009 11:11 pm Post subject: Everything in its Own Season.. |
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Here's Chapter One
Good reading. ^_^ _________________ Independent Business Owner ... Ask me, if interested in learning more.
Everything in its Own Season <- Current Story! |
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kcmack Registered User
Joined: 07 Apr 2007 Posts: 142 Location: S.W. Missouri, US
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Posted: Sat Jun 27, 2009 11:55 pm Post subject: |
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Nice start Karou, keep the chapters coming! _________________ "'Do you know, I always thought Unicorns were fabulous monsters, too? I never saw one alive before!'
'Well, now that we have seen each other,' said the Unicorn, 'if you believe in me, I'll believe in you.'"
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Tigermark Site Owner
Joined: 18 Apr 2003 Posts: 855 Location: Hopkinsville, KY
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Posted: Sun Jun 28, 2009 2:02 am Post subject: |
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Very well done, Karou! Wonderful start, and interesting characters. You handle the Coona clan characters very true as well. I'm looking forward to more of this.
TM _________________ Tiger, tiger, burning bright...
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Frazikar Registered User
Joined: 25 Jan 2008 Posts: 1181 Location: North Coast, USA
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Posted: Sun Jun 28, 2009 7:49 am Post subject: |
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Hmmm, somehow, I still hear ... wha' deviltry can I get into now ... somewhere in the background.... |
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anthony Site Owner
Joined: 12 Nov 2001 Posts: 1304 Location: Norway
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Posted: Sun Jun 28, 2009 12:06 pm Post subject: |
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The first few paragraphs felt a bit forced to me, but the rest felt good.
I can only say 'Let the good times roll'...
_________________ "My name's Lion, Anthony Lion"
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Nicolai Borovskaya Registered User
Joined: 18 May 2006 Posts: 464 Location: Wherever the fictons carry me
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Posted: Sun Jun 28, 2009 3:25 pm Post subject: |
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Well done, and keep it up! _________________ Nicolai
When you talk about damage radius, even atomic weapons pale before that of an unfettered idiot in a position of power. |
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Karou WindStalker Registered User
Joined: 17 Nov 2006 Posts: 631 Location: Highland lakes, NJ, USA
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Posted: Wed Jul 01, 2009 12:21 am Post subject: |
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Is it bad when your vision includes snapshots in your mind of 'Chapter 30' ... >.> _________________ Independent Business Owner ... Ask me, if interested in learning more.
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Frazikar Registered User
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Posted: Wed Jul 01, 2009 7:03 am Post subject: |
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Quote: | Is it bad when your vision includes snapshots in your mind of 'Chapter 30' ... >.> |
Depends on which (or who's) chapter 30, doesn't it... |
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Karou WindStalker Registered User
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Posted: Wed Jul 01, 2009 8:37 am Post subject: |
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Frazikar wrote: | Quote: | Is it bad when your vision includes snapshots in your mind of 'Chapter 30' ... >.> |
Depends on which (or who's) chapter 30, doesn't it... |
Seeing as it's _me_ doing the writing... _________________ Independent Business Owner ... Ask me, if interested in learning more.
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Nicolai Borovskaya Registered User
Joined: 18 May 2006 Posts: 464 Location: Wherever the fictons carry me
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Posted: Wed Jul 01, 2009 1:04 pm Post subject: |
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Karou WindStalker wrote: | Frazikar wrote: | Quote: | Is it bad when your vision includes snapshots in your mind of 'Chapter 30' ... >.> |
Depends on which (or who's) chapter 30, doesn't it... |
Seeing as it's _me_ doing the writing... |
I did warn you ... The Coona clan will camp out in your house and your head. Then again, I'm looking forward to reading Chapter 30! _________________ Nicolai
When you talk about damage radius, even atomic weapons pale before that of an unfettered idiot in a position of power. |
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anthony Site Owner
Joined: 12 Nov 2001 Posts: 1304 Location: Norway
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Posted: Wed Jul 01, 2009 3:39 pm Post subject: |
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Only 30 chapters?
Darn...
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Karou WindStalker Registered User
Joined: 17 Nov 2006 Posts: 631 Location: Highland lakes, NJ, USA
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Posted: Wed Jul 01, 2009 3:58 pm Post subject: |
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anthony wrote: | Only 30 chapters?
Darn...
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Never know which book that might be in.. _________________ Independent Business Owner ... Ask me, if interested in learning more.
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Frazikar Registered User
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Posted: Thu Jul 02, 2009 7:46 am Post subject: |
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Quote: | anthony wrote:
Only 30 chapters?
Darn... |
translation - it's not 'max of' but 'at least', right? (or should be, hehehe)
Quote: | Seeing as it's _me_ doing the writing... |
And this precludes other chapter 30s how?? |
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Karou WindStalker Registered User
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Posted: Thu Jul 30, 2009 10:35 am Post subject: |
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Well, Chapter two is now in Mike's paws for posting when he gets the time. ^_^
Yes, the Coona clan has taken up residence in my head .. and the visions that I have been gifted with have made for some interesting times. ^_^ _________________ Independent Business Owner ... Ask me, if interested in learning more.
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Karou WindStalker Registered User
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Posted: Fri Jul 31, 2009 10:12 pm Post subject: |
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Chapter 2 is up. ^_^ _________________ Independent Business Owner ... Ask me, if interested in learning more.
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