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SiasfL - Stranger in a strangely familiar Land - Act 1
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PostPosted: Sun Jul 27, 2003 2:45 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Great chapter Nameless, so Sarah's parents are border line purists eh? *chuckles* they are really going to set new records in freaking when they finally meet Chris although I think Sarah will be able to bring them around they do after all seem to be more concerned for her happiness then her not being with another squirrel but I don't think they’d ever fully accept him. It appears that agent Mulder has got quit a large search radius on his hands so it may be a while before Sarah & Chris have any trouble from him. Is anyone else reminded of that element in Kinsfire's story Sarina where a criminal organization was trying to get a hold of the portal technology for their own uses when they read about the doctor and his crew or is it just me, could these experiments be the result of that organization’s successful acquisition of that technology?

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doo-DOO-doo-doo ... doo-DOO-doo-doo ... doo-DOO-doo-doo ... doo-DOO-doo-doo ...

Photographs! Moulder will have something to latch onto now!


Well only if the fur developing the film shares what he sees on the pics which I guess is almost certain. Confused

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PostPosted: Sun Jul 27, 2003 5:56 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Concolor wrote:
Shocked
Well, first off, if I were that "Doctor", I would be quite so sanguine about the surety of getting Chris away from Special Agent Moulder. That could get really, really messy.

Dittos to Cateagle's comment about plot complications. You've stirred the pot, but good!

I'm glad Chris has a couple more locals on his side. He'll be needing them, I fear. And I'm fearful for Sarah's well-being if anything truly bad should happen to Chris.

Lots to think about, m'friend. Good stuff.

I aree with the rest here. greath chapter as always. Very Happy
And add and -I- am also fearful for Chris well-being if anything truly bad should happen to Sarah.
Heh sudenly got picture of banner saying "Dont get me angry, you wuldent like me when i am angry", then transforms into hulk and chases a lot of furrys around, hmm another twist to the green alien. Wink Laughing
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PostPosted: Sun Jul 27, 2003 6:49 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Nameless wrote:
I added a bit. If you have already read the chapter, you don't have to do it again...

Whoa! Just a "little" omission? Very Happy

This changes what Chris may see when he comes down the from the hills a LOT, as some furs may be expecting something weird. Except for the neighbors of Martin and Alice who may freak when they see Chris in an apparently empty house... Twisted Evil

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PostPosted: Sat Aug 09, 2003 5:28 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Chapter 9 has been posted... Twisted Evil

Confused It's not nearly as well polished as I would like, but I've got to move the story along a little...

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PostPosted: Sun Aug 10, 2003 7:29 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Lot happening in this chapter, I enjoyed reading it great job nameless can't wait for the fireworks when Chris meets the parents.
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PostPosted: Sun Aug 10, 2003 7:47 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Styx wrote:
Lot happening in this chapter, I enjoyed reading it great job nameless can't wait for the fireworks when Chris meets the parents.


Fireworks and secret services and more beside... oh my, interesting times ahoy! 80

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PostPosted: Sun Aug 10, 2003 8:52 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

AH-HA!!

Surprised Shocked

AH-HA!!

Figured something like that would happen. With as much scrutiny as is being turned in Chris' direction, it was just a matter of time.

I really, really hope he can take care of himself. Confused

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PostPosted: Mon Aug 11, 2003 1:28 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I'll second my good friend Concolor. The next chapter or two are going to get real interesting. Another great read, Nameless.

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PostPosted: Mon Aug 11, 2003 1:52 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Twisted Evil Keep your eyes peeled. The next three chapters (probably) will have a surprise or two. Twisted Evil
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 11, 2003 5:37 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

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Twisted Evil Keep your eyes peeled. The next three chapters (probably) will have a surprise or two. Twisted Evil


Very Happy Definitely be waiting to see how you twist the story around. grins

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PostPosted: Thu Aug 21, 2003 2:34 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Chapter 10 is posted. Very Happy Twisted Evil

Anybody out here who does not recognize from which story I have "borrowed" a scene here? Rolling Eyes

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Nameless wrote:
Chapter 10 is posted. Very Happy Twisted Evil

Anybody out here who does not recognize from which story I have "borrowed" a scene here? Rolling Eyes


Very nice chapter indeed! The emotions ring quite true.

*Snickers* *wide-eyed look* Why, I have no idea where you "borrowed" a scene from. Laughing Laughing Laughing

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PostPosted: Thu Aug 21, 2003 4:10 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Cateagle wrote:
Why, I have no idea where you "borrowed" a scene from.

What a shame.... Wink

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PostPosted: Thu Aug 21, 2003 4:53 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

That was good! Quite satisfactory. Very believable. I can see that happening. (Oh, got your story spotted -- nice little cameo, that. Lee's not a bad role model in such a situation. Wink )

So Chris has now, what, a total of five furs more or less on his side? He's gonna need 'em! He will be meeting up with those ersatz authorities sooner or later. Probably sooner. Shocked He'll need to go public before they catch him, unless he wants to get up close and personal with a windowless cell for the duration of his stay in Sarah's world.

Thank you for another excellent installment.

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PostPosted: Thu Aug 21, 2003 5:17 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

*G* It should be "fascinating" when Chris does run into Lee and/or Debbye Evans.
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