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Posted: Tue Jul 13, 2004 1:32 pm Post subject: Catfood |
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No, I'm not talking about the stuff you get at the supermarket.
It's the name of a new adult story for which I have just posted the first episode on the adult part of my site.
I know I should finish one of the gazillion of stories I have started, but I find it too difficult to argue with my muse, especially if I am happy to be able to write anything.
Anyway, comments and speculation is welcome as always. _________________ I'm a nut, but there are those who appreciate me for it. |
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Posted: Tue Jul 13, 2004 2:22 pm Post subject: |
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Well it is an interesting start I wonder what the doctor has in mind. _________________ "Political Correctness is tyranny with manners." Charlton Heston
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Posted: Wed Jul 14, 2004 11:17 pm Post subject: |
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I hate to be stupid, but where is it? I've gone all over your website. It's not listed as an update...I don't see it under Runic Carvings, and I don't see it under Specimen collections. _________________ Hortmage, the Magic Gardener
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Posted: Thu Jul 15, 2004 1:01 am Post subject: |
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I know I should update the instructions on how to reach the adult part of my site, but...
Anyway, it is not reachable from the main part, the link can be found on PFAD or by contacting me. _________________ I'm a nut, but there are those who appreciate me for it. |
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Posted: Wed Aug 11, 2004 11:15 am Post subject: |
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Chapter 2 has been posted. _________________ I'm a nut, but there are those who appreciate me for it. |
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Posted: Mon Sep 20, 2004 2:27 pm Post subject: |
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What the heck, screw the schedule.
Chapter 3 has been posted. _________________ I'm a nut, but there are those who appreciate me for it. |
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Posted: Mon Sep 20, 2004 5:52 pm Post subject: |
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Truely a compelling piece. not sure I like the way it is going, but compelling nonetheless. Being a a person with a rare disease myself, I can truely understand what Lydia is going through. Ok, perhaps not anywhere near the degree, but the dificulties nontheless. It is obvious which way the story is turning, but not what will actually happen to her. How does one measure the worth of life into dollers per year of servitude? How 'nice' will the 'masters' be? We can only wait to find out. I know I'm waiting with 'baited' breath!
Keep up the great work ![Razz](images/smiles/icon_razz.gif) _________________ Even during our darkest times,
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Posted: Mon Sep 20, 2004 9:55 pm Post subject: |
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Man i feel fore her.
I just want to gather her upp and hugg her... :'(
Oh well, another great story chapter.
Let see what happens in this one. ![Smile](images/smiles/icon_smile.gif) _________________ My spelling sux.
But i dont. ![Wink](images/smiles/icon_wink.gif) |
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Posted: Sat Sep 25, 2004 2:29 pm Post subject: |
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I need a little help:
I don't think I'm giving anything away if I say that Lydia will choose to serve as a "slave". Now the problem:
Her first master does not use the slave's normal names, but gives them a "slave name".
As to his choice of names, if he had a feline as a slave, he would call her "Kitten" or "Kitty" or something like that.
What would he call Lydia (she is a Desert Kangaroo Rat)?
All I could come up with is "Squeak" or "Mousie", but I'm not really satisfied with either... _________________ I'm a nut, but there are those who appreciate me for it. |
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Posted: Sat Sep 25, 2004 3:46 pm Post subject: |
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Depending on just how sick you decide to make this 'master' out to be,
He may like the sound of part of her surname "Bait". Perhaps something corny like "gelfling". Ok that was just silly, but I had to toss it in. Perhaps something denoting her haritage like "Roo". Depending on what her new 'master' see in her eyes he may use a name about those. Likely something like "Brighteyes" or something equally demeaning.
Hope I helped, but likely not. Anyway, good luck comming up with something appropreate. (go for the eyes!) ![Shocked](images/smiles/icon_eek.gif) _________________ Even during our darkest times,
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Posted: Sat Sep 25, 2004 4:11 pm Post subject: |
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Kangaroo rat huh? how about Jumper or Pounce as in the cat treat _________________ "Political Correctness is tyranny with manners." Charlton Heston
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Posted: Sat Sep 25, 2004 5:27 pm Post subject: |
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(I apologise fore my spelling before hand)
"Jumpy"
As in being jumpy twitchy and the like.
Then there are:
Mousy
Mice
Toy(i know, ower used)
Small bite
Fast Food. (short FF)
Snack
Tender (as in tender meat)
Rat (i know, but its a bit deemening when she isent one)
Smelly (the rat thing again)
Teath
Chewwy
Gnawer
Rodent
Hamster (same as rat)
Tiny
Grey
Skin tail (or naked tail) (maby a short form: St/Nt)
Pet (same as Toy, a bit ower used but still good)
Cheeser
Chease
Holer
Famus chese name of some sort...
Pest
Hmm....
Runner
Scurry
Tight
(I almost sugest "No holes barrd", as rodents are notorius to get into anny small tight spaces... but realy dont know how to turn it to a name... exept fore Nohb, Well noob is close to it.....)
Sqeeler
Pipsqeak
sqeak
Sqeeker _________________ My spelling sux.
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Posted: Sun Sep 26, 2004 3:50 am Post subject: |
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Thanks for the help and inspiration.
"Bait" was pretty good as were a few others.
I think I'll use "Dessy". ![Wink](images/smiles/icon_wink.gif) _________________ I'm a nut, but there are those who appreciate me for it. |
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Posted: Fri Oct 01, 2004 10:11 am Post subject: |
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Chapter 4 has been posted. _________________ I'm a nut, but there are those who appreciate me for it. |
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Posted: Sun Oct 03, 2004 12:25 am Post subject: |
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Nameless,
I've noticed you seem to favor stories that feature slavery.
This latest story (Catbait) is quite interesting. Especially the thought of a furson voluntarily selling themselves into slavery for a period of years.
I'm not sure which would be harder for someone to handle: being kidnapped/taken prisoner and made into a slave and being abused...or voluntarily signing your name on the dotted line for the same thing? I suppose with the economic and medical "safeguards" that Ms. Catbait is being guaranteed (none of which exist in your other stories), it probably couldn't be THAT bad...at least, she knows she's got a better than even chance of getting out of this alive. _________________ Hortmage, the Magic Gardener
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