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PostPosted: Thu Apr 08, 2004 9:18 am    Post subject: First Story Reply with quote

Well, Something happened to me while I was surfing the net a while ago. It was about the time I discovered furrydom. I read some stories and looked at character descriptions. I thought, "I need a character. I'll write a story for his backstory!"
This is the first story I've ever voluntarily written. It was quite a suprise when I thought that, because I don't like writing. At the very least, I don't like writing for school.
So, I'm now typing up the first part. I'll post it. soon.

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PostPosted: Thu Apr 08, 2004 10:11 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Well, I've got the first chapter typed up. I think it turned out pretty well for my first story. Please post some feedback!
PS The character named "Latham" is named after my friend Andrew Latham. I couldn't think of anything else for a name.

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 12, 2004 3:43 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Mike Regan wrote:
Interesting. Got a good start here. One thing a bit unclear at this point is what exactly is happening. It can be read one of two ways. He sees his paws changing to different paws. One type or multiple types?

Is he becoming one type of new creature or a shape shifter that can become many different creatures at will?

Be waiting for the next chapter.

Don't worry, everything will be clearer in the next chapter.Well, not everything, but, you get the idea.
BTW, before I finish the next chapter, I need a name for the lead character. PM me for a description.

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PostPosted: Thu Apr 22, 2004 10:50 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

If anyone is still interested, I'm working on Chapter 2. I hope to be done with it soon.
It takes me so long to write a chapter because I'm trying to keep it a secret from my 'rents and friends. I can't find a lot of time to write where my parents aren't around.
Anyways, I'm almost done with the rough draft. I'll be finished with the chapter in a week or two.

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PostPosted: Wed May 12, 2004 11:08 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Well, the rewrite is finally done. I'm gonna type it up now. I hope to have it up within the hour.
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PostPosted: Wed May 12, 2004 11:28 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Took me a good 20 minutes to type, but here it is. I'm pretty pleased at how it came out. If you post on the Crash Pad Cafe thread, you'll notice that this is my character, Rob.
Trivia: The hospital's name is Metroplex, which is where my mom worked in Texas.
I'll start Chapter 3 soon.

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PostPosted: Thu May 20, 2004 5:08 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Stupid freakin' writer's block. I have no idea what to do for chapter 3!
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