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Pischk Registered User
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Posted: Sat Jan 17, 2004 2:57 pm Post subject: Just started reading IC |
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Act 1 Chapter 26 is about as far as I have gotten so far, and am immensly pleased with how the story is going, alot of work went into shaping this story, and I must give thanks to the author who made it possible for me to read this.
Thanks! _________________ Evil is not an abstract concept. It lives. It has a form. It stalks. It is too real...
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Joined: 20 Nov 2000 Posts: 1581 Location: Kansas City, KS, USA
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Posted: Sat Jan 17, 2004 3:37 pm Post subject: |
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You're welcome. I appologize for the quality of the writing, but that's way back when I was first learning.
I hope you enjoy the story. If you have any questions or comments, feel free to speak up.
Cheers _________________ Read my comic: http://www.ImperialGelf.com
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Pischk Registered User
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Posted: Sat Jan 17, 2004 9:01 pm Post subject: |
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Ah, I notice it improving each chapter, though, I find no flaws with how the story has been told so far.
Though, I didnt expect some of the scenes move some emotions in me, very few authors manage that.
Thus far it gets an A+ from me! _________________ Evil is not an abstract concept. It lives. It has a form. It stalks. It is too real...
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Aramis Dagaz Registered User
Joined: 02 Dec 2003 Posts: 174 Location: the City of Roses
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Posted: Mon Jan 19, 2004 11:19 pm Post subject: |
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Hikaru wrote: | I appologize for the quality of the writing, but that's way back when I was first learning. |
Hikaru, when I finished chapter three the story grew talons, grabbed my face, and made me read Act I in two sittings. It's that good. Quality of writing never crossed my mind, few stories can catch my interest that quickly.
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Joined: 25 Dec 2002 Posts: 3176 Location: West Covina, California
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Posted: Mon Jan 19, 2004 11:25 pm Post subject: |
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HERE! HERE! _________________ "Political Correctness is tyranny with manners." Charlton Heston
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hikaru Administrator
Joined: 20 Nov 2000 Posts: 1581 Location: Kansas City, KS, USA
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Pischk Registered User
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Posted: Tue Jan 20, 2004 2:29 am Post subject: |
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Quote: | Hikaru, when I finished chapter three the story grew talons, grabbed my face, and made me read Act I in two sittings. It's that good. Quality of writing never crossed my mind, few stories can catch my interest that quickly.
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Said everything I could not. Act 3 is coming to an end I fear and will the story finish or continue I wonder? _________________ Evil is not an abstract concept. It lives. It has a form. It stalks. It is too real...
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hikaru Administrator
Joined: 20 Nov 2000 Posts: 1581 Location: Kansas City, KS, USA
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Posted: Tue Jan 20, 2004 2:46 am Post subject: |
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I have an idea for a sequal, but have a different project I want to do before I go down that path. As much as I've enjoyed writing IC, I want to take a break and work on something else for a while. _________________ Read my comic: http://www.ImperialGelf.com
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Pischk Registered User
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Posted: Sat Apr 24, 2004 1:20 pm Post subject: |
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Well, I think its time I better catch myself up with the recent chapters of this story, I plan on rereading it from start to finish again....wish me luck...
*barricades his door...stocks up on food supplies, eyedrops and lots of caffienated beverages...* _________________ Evil is not an abstract concept. It lives. It has a form. It stalks. It is too real...
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webkilla Registered User
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Posted: Sun Apr 25, 2004 5:55 am Post subject: |
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Hikaru wrote: | I have an idea for a sequal, but have a different project I want to do before I go down that path. As much as I've enjoyed writing IC, I want to take a break and work on something else for a while. |
You could always finish the Yin's identity crisis story thingy?
but you've already said that the sequel will be about arden & sheila's kids... but we'll worship you anyway! _________________ My Deviant artpile
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hikaru Administrator
Joined: 20 Nov 2000 Posts: 1581 Location: Kansas City, KS, USA
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Posted: Sun Apr 25, 2004 6:50 pm Post subject: |
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Actually, I've decided to do an Act IV with Arden and Sheila... (and the rug rats).
Once I'm done with Act III (the chapter's at the editor) I'll be taking a break for a bit. I'll take a look at Yin's and see if I can finish it off. It's long over due for some work.
Cheers _________________ Read my comic: http://www.ImperialGelf.com
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Hortmage Registered User
Joined: 28 Oct 2001 Posts: 243 Location: Midwest
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Posted: Sun Apr 25, 2004 7:43 pm Post subject: |
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Hikaru wrote: | I have an idea for a sequal, but have a different project I want to do before I go down that path. As much as I've enjoyed writing IC, I want to take a break and work on something else for a while. |
Oh...
I was hoping to talk you into grabbing all the chapters, editing for continuity, binding them into a novel, and offering them for sale to your loyal minions...
Oh well... _________________ Hortmage, the Magic Gardener
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hikaru Administrator
Joined: 20 Nov 2000 Posts: 1581 Location: Kansas City, KS, USA
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Posted: Sun Apr 25, 2004 8:01 pm Post subject: |
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Hortmage wrote: | Oh...
I was hoping to talk you into grabbing all the chapters, editing for continuity, binding them into a novel, and offering them for sale to your loyal minions...
Oh well... |
Unfortunately there are too many copywritten characters involved. EWS has never officially given his blessing for the use of Sheila. Although Jack Chalker was nice enough to allow me to play around in the River of the Dancing Gods and use his characters, he's not going to release them for publication.
Alas, any printed versions of IC will have to be private.
Cheers _________________ Read my comic: http://www.ImperialGelf.com
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