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Aramis Dagaz
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 15, 2004 11:12 pm    Post subject: Chapter 45 Reply with quote

After all of the crud our heroes had to put up with for the past forty-odd chapters (and that's just in this Act), it's refreshing to see everyone enjoying some R&R. Well, perhaps with the possible exception or Arden, though compared to some of his earlier (mis)adventures, this shouldn't be all that bad (maybe. What would a young male like me know of such things? Rolling Eyes ). Seems that Nanuk's statement of Arden having to know what it is like to be female is still in effect.

However, our heroes are not out of the woods yet. Makes me very curious as to what Lakash is up to, but whatever it is, it's bound to be nasty.

Great work Hikaru! I can't wait to see what happens next!

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PostPosted: Wed Mar 17, 2004 2:08 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Glad you liked it.

I've got a seminar that runs Fri-Sun, so I'm going to do my BEST to get the next chapter done tomorrow...(playing hookie from work).

Hopefully I'll have it ready to go up Sat night/Sun morning.

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PostPosted: Wed Mar 17, 2004 2:44 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

There's something I don't really get at all. Why is Sha'Kull's body so damaged? Arden did it as a measure to ensure that no damage was done to Ruddygore?
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 17, 2004 10:36 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Luxo wrote:
There's something I don't really get at all. Why is Sha'Kull's body so damaged? Arden did it as a measure to ensure that no damage was done to Ruddygore?


Remember when Arden was fighting the other dragons? Took a dive into the river? A tentacle came out and snagged him by a leg and dragged him back down... He'd already been chewed up some by the fight with the lesser dragon, but then got sucked under by some unknown horror...

Chapter 19 if you need a reference. Smile

The ruined left eye was compliments of his duel with Hecate when she was being controlled by the armor.

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PostPosted: Wed Mar 17, 2004 1:47 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

One of the dangers of becoming a prominent player in the game is that soon everyone wants to nail your tail to the wall. Right now it seems that Arden has enemies not only in Heaven and Hell, but also with his former "employer" (for lack of a better term). Considering that he also has to deal with minor (and some not-so-minor) fourth party factions as well, it's amazing that he hasn't finally snapped and gone on a rampage to lay waste to the planes in order to destroy all enemies (and let's face it, he has no shortage of them). Even his relationship with Sheila is sketchy at best. It seems that his only refuge where he can trust anyone is back at ZZ Studios, and if Act I was any indication, he isn't safe there either. Arden is one extraordinarily strong-willed person just for getting through all this so far with some measure (as small as it may be) of sanity.
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 19, 2004 2:38 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hikaru wrote:
Luxo wrote:
There's something I don't really get at all. Why is Sha'Kull's body so damaged? Arden did it as a measure to ensure that no damage was done to Ruddygore?


Remember when Arden was fighting the other dragons? Took a dive into the river? A tentacle came out and snagged him by a leg and dragged him back down... He'd already been chewed up some by the fight with the lesser dragon, but then got sucked under by some unknown horror...

Chapter 19 if you need a reference. Smile

The ruined left eye was compliments of his duel with Hecate when she was being controlled by the armor.

Cheers.


Hey, you're right, I forgot that.
Thanks for clearing my questions.
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 20, 2004 7:41 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Great chapter Hikaru!

But what is Lacrunch up to? I dun like himm tampering with that tanto... Shocked

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PostPosted: Mon Mar 22, 2004 3:57 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Haha, Lacrunch. Well Hikaru, that certainly does explain a few things. I'm also waiting with bated breath on what Lakash did to the tanto. Definitely not good, although it was good to see Sheila was aware that it had been moved, even if she dismissed it.

And when do we get to find out what that orb is all about? Smile

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PostPosted: Mon Mar 22, 2004 7:45 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Xaqtly wrote:
And when do we get to find out what that orb is all about? Smile


Never.

*laughs*

Actually, its purpose was supposed to be inferred by the fact that Ruddygore A) imprissoned the dragon origionally and B) was taking the orb along just in case. I was hoping folks would get A+B=C) the orb has something to do with imprisoning the dragon....

It was actually just a plot device to give me something to bable about as I started the chapter. Often, I'm at a loss for where to start in a chapter, so I either start yapping about the setting (Gotta love them sunrises and sunsets, eh?) or what someone's doing and go from there.

Hardest part is getting the first sentance down. After that, you can just go with the flow and if you don't like the results, back up and start all over.

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PostPosted: Mon Mar 22, 2004 10:37 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yeah, I figured it had something to do with imprisoning the dragon - I mean obviously Arden knew what the orb was, and that it was something that could actually do something to him/her, I can only assume the dragon was scared of it, hence Arden asking Ruddy not to being the orb next time. I just didn't know exactly what it was or what it did, but it had me wondering. Smile Nice smooth chapter yet again, by the way.
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 23, 2004 1:43 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks. Next one is about 30% of the way done. I'll have it out before the end of the weekend unless something goes horribly wrong. Razz
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 24, 2004 4:01 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Goody!

Well it was nice to get that orb buisness cleared up.


Now if you could just get that next chapter posted b4 friday cuzz on saturday I'm leaving for Rome untill the next thursday...

AND I WANT MY IC-STORY!!!

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PostPosted: Wed Mar 24, 2004 11:59 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Sorry... Wish I could, but unfortunately my current programming workload doesn't allow for it. As it is, I shouldn't be taking Saturday's off to write, but I am anyway.

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PostPosted: Thu Mar 25, 2004 6:50 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Nooooooo!

*dies #Crazy

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PostPosted: Thu Mar 25, 2004 3:24 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Well, consider this for a consolation prize. The current chapter is at 8 pages and it's barely 50% of the way there..... It's gonna be a monster. Smile
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