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caspian Registered User
Joined: 02 Jul 2002 Posts: 206 Location: Richmond, Virginia, USA
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Posted: Thu Jul 11, 2002 4:51 pm Post subject: Chapter 10 |
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Another great Job Chris and James
You did have to leave us with another cliff hanger though did you?!
The return of Windy nice touch I can see many of us are going to be heart broken and in tears again when the time change hits with Chris and Windy if they get back together to be ripped apart again.
Tabitha handled telling Sabrina who she was well. Excellet job all
Caspian _________________ Caspian
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Joined: 11 Feb 2002 Posts: 238 Location: RIYADH, SAUDI ARABIA
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Posted: Thu Jul 11, 2002 6:15 pm Post subject: |
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Show and Tell. Killer Chris and James, who would have thought Tab would just come right out and tell her, and chris running off to the singles bar, and who should he find , but Wendy, and it was crash and burn for the Margay, but now will Sabrina believe, and where is she running too,
Quick, Sweet , and to the point , ,and it was good to see Chris smile again , but you should have went back for a parting shot of Chris and Wendy , before the chapter end.
And this quick question ? Now Chris is almost 60 years old in this chapter
his son and and Tab have been poking at him to go out , and on his first try he finds Wendy , will they hook up, will it be Furagra time??
This was good , very good , well worth the wait
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Joined: 11 Feb 2002 Posts: 238 Location: RIYADH, SAUDI ARABIA
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Posted: Thu Jul 11, 2002 7:35 pm Post subject: |
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Oh and this Casp ! the story is not over yet, , but if Tab gets to tell Sabrina all, and gets her to belive, and get her to do a change on that fatefull day, every thing will have never happened to chris in chap 10 , Sabrina will be alive , and they will have grown old togather, and in the end only we will know , and Tabitha , and Chris will have never known the loss, or pain, but like I said, the story is not over yet, and there may be a long haul to go , so pull up a chair and have a shrimp, and lets watch _________________ Reporting live and transcribed from the
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caspian Registered User
Joined: 02 Jul 2002 Posts: 206 Location: Richmond, Virginia, USA
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Posted: Fri Jul 12, 2002 7:10 am Post subject: |
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TVDAVE wrote: | Oh and this Casp ! the story is not over yet, , but if Tab gets to tell Sabrina all, and gets her to belive, and get her to do a change on that fatefull day, every thing will have never happened to chris in chap 10 , Sabrina will be alive , and they will have grown old togather, and in the end only we will know , and Tabitha , and Chris will have never known the loss, or pain, but like I said, the story is not over yet, and there may be a long haul to go , so pull up a chair and have a shrimp, and lets watch |
True Dave but we will Know what might have been But i would prefurr to have Sabrina alive to grow old with Chris. I how ever have faith in Chris and James to make it a real heart rencher any way
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Posted: Fri Jul 12, 2002 10:12 pm Post subject: |
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Excellent job, gentlefurs! Tabitha handled the meeting very well . . . I love the cliffhanger ending!
Although . . . what are the odds that Chris would meet Wendy in the first single's bar he goes to?
Keep up the good work, guys! |
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caspian Registered User
Joined: 02 Jul 2002 Posts: 206 Location: Richmond, Virginia, USA
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Posted: Sat Jul 13, 2002 11:16 am Post subject: |
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Anonymous wrote: | Although . . . what are the odds that Chris would meet Wendy in the first single's bar he goes to?
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Considering this is the Sabrina vers i think the odds were in favor of it happening right off the bat
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Elfen_Furry Moderator
Joined: 18 Jun 2002 Posts: 2601 Location: NYC NY
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Posted: Sun Jul 14, 2002 10:05 pm Post subject: |
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I dont want to sound cynical but that was a long wait for such a short chapter. We've waited shorter for longer and more involved chapters in both stories.
Still a cliff-hanger, but I get a sense of something not right here. As if once the story gets up to speed, it runs out if gas.
Chris- Keep up the good work. I'll just contiune reading and commenting on them. |
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mfwhite Site Owner
Joined: 21 Feb 2002 Posts: 327 Location: Big land mass north of the USA
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Posted: Wed Jul 17, 2002 10:55 pm Post subject: Chapter 10 |
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Tres.....cool.....ye foxx........
Cheetaur like......
Interesting that she told her who she was .......that was an interesting twist.
She must have a reason to do so.........
I wonder why.....hmmm
Oh well......great work as always.......
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