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Posted: Sun Nov 09, 2003 5:09 am Post subject: |
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Elfen_Furry wrote: | Mike Regan wrote: | Well I finally got Chapter 17 posted to the Bookshelf.
One question I have though is, the note was pinned to the doll's paw. Why didn't Sabrina feel that? |
Opps...
Well...
The spell did not take effect until after she removed the pin...(???)
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It was pinned to the sleeve and not the paw...
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How about, Sabrina needed to read the PS to complete the spell (yeah that's the ticket) _________________ "Political Correctness is tyranny with manners." Charlton Heston
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Joined: 21 Jun 2003 Posts: 892 Location: East coast somewhere
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Posted: Mon Dec 29, 2003 7:26 pm Post subject: |
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Damn Elfen Dandilions is your story? Heck I've been sitting and waiting for the next installment I really do enjoy this story. most memerable moment was the roof top at the studio when Sabby lost her glasses and she saw with her ears. Very well done. _________________
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Joined: 18 Jun 2002 Posts: 2601 Location: NYC NY
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Posted: Wed Dec 31, 2003 12:49 am Post subject: |
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I'm on temporary hiatus... but I'll return on 1/15. With new chapters in all of my 3 stories.
Until then, I must keep such thought of killing everyone off in a single stroke down to a minimum...
Keep reading, there is more to the story than meats the eye. _________________ SHARKS In The Gene Pool South of Kosovo!
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Joined: 25 Dec 2002 Posts: 3176 Location: West Covina, California
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Posted: Sat Jan 31, 2004 11:55 pm Post subject: |
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Well I the last chapter and I'm still confused on Repteal's behavior, she says she needs to get to the prince and that's why she is tailing Sabby but he was at the park why the heck didn't she just tell her to bring him with her when she went to meet her (Repteal)? Although I'm a bit fuzzy on what's going on I liked the chapter nicely done EF. _________________ "Political Correctness is tyranny with manners." Charlton Heston
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Mapper Registered User
Joined: 21 Jun 2003 Posts: 892 Location: East coast somewhere
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Posted: Tue Feb 03, 2004 11:23 pm Post subject: |
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Im not sure how long Chap 18's been up but it was great reading. interesting the doll. _________________
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Joined: 18 Jun 2002 Posts: 2601 Location: NYC NY
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Posted: Wed Feb 04, 2004 1:18 am Post subject: |
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Dandilions' Chapter 18 has been up since 1/27.
Just reread the title and the last sentence... or remember it.
Had to cut it short, cause I almost lost it, so its divided up in 2 (maybe more) parts. Chapter 18B will be up in 2 weeks, maybe less.
Care to do a 3d table of dolls and have a Sabrina doll leaning against a lion prince doll?
On a lighter note:
Skip's Chapter 11 has been up since 1/31.
Dandilion's chapter 18B sneak=peek:
Repteal moves onto somebody else. Question is: Who?
She also kills again...
Again: Who. Even more important: Why?
May introduce 2 new characters: Sister Dicso and Acid Queen...
Anything else?
Not really...
[Place Evil Laughter Here] _________________ SHARKS In The Gene Pool South of Kosovo!
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Mapper Registered User
Joined: 21 Jun 2003 Posts: 892 Location: East coast somewhere
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Posted: Wed Feb 04, 2004 2:51 am Post subject: |
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what was the lion wearing
sneak peek youre evil now wants 18b now LOL _________________
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Joined: 18 Jun 2002 Posts: 2601 Location: NYC NY
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Posted: Wed Feb 04, 2004 4:03 pm Post subject: |
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What was the lion wearing?
Well... if we bring up the old 007 dolls of the 70's... Yeah, that sounds about right... A Roger Moore-like Lion Doll in a 2 or 3 piece suit that makes him look reagal. We can make do without the martini glass and the Walther PPK. Too bad they did not bu the Aston Martin convertable doll car...
As for Chapter 18B- in time....
But for its title, its, 'The End Comes To Those Who Seek It'
If you been keeping up with the story- you can make some good educated guesses. _________________ SHARKS In The Gene Pool South of Kosovo!
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Elfen_Furry Moderator
Joined: 18 Jun 2002 Posts: 2601 Location: NYC NY
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Posted: Wed Feb 04, 2004 5:44 pm Post subject: |
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Oh yeah- thats perfect...
Uhm... make the eyes glazed over so they know its a doll and not a fur. _________________ SHARKS In The Gene Pool South of Kosovo!
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Joined: 18 Jun 2002 Posts: 2601 Location: NYC NY
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Posted: Sat Feb 07, 2004 6:38 pm Post subject: |
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Just in case you did not read the Site Progress Update Thread; Dandilion's Roar chapter 18b was posted yesterday (about 9pm). Chapter 18c has been started... "Love Conquers All, Except a 2X4"
If you follow the Act & Chapter Titles with the story line... you'll see that Act 6 will not be finished for a long time; perhaps another 3 more chapters, or until somebody gets a royal ass whipping.
Anyone down for some crunchy frog legs?
[Place Evil Laughter Here] _________________ SHARKS In The Gene Pool South of Kosovo!
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Joined: 25 Dec 2002 Posts: 3176 Location: West Covina, California
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Posted: Sun Feb 08, 2004 1:51 am Post subject: |
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Oooookaaaay, So Jameeka is safe and Repteal finally has the Prince, you know it seems to me like this should be the end of the adventure for our friends now that the Prince has left their company however I doubt they are going to get off that easy. As always EF good work an enjoyable read. _________________ "Political Correctness is tyranny with manners." Charlton Heston
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Joined: 21 Jun 2003 Posts: 892 Location: East coast somewhere
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Posted: Sun Feb 08, 2004 8:12 am Post subject: |
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Huh its posted?!?! oh boy get to read when i get up in about 6 hours. work was a pain too tired but OH YEAH definently going to read today. _________________
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Posted: Fri Feb 13, 2004 12:35 am Post subject: |
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ok finally got to read 18c. Nice!! more mystery to the prince and the otherside. heheh next chapter seems self explanitory. _________________
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Posted: Fri Feb 13, 2004 1:36 pm Post subject: |
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Which time machine are you accessing?
Tabtha's unit at Kiesha Corp or Hepzedah's at 3IO?
Either way, Chapter 18c is not up yet...
And BTW... SSSSSHHHHHHH!!!!!! _________________ SHARKS In The Gene Pool South of Kosovo!
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