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My story: Procyonidae

 
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Luxo
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 22, 2004 8:50 pm    Post subject: My story: Procyonidae Reply with quote

Heyo, I was wanting to spa...advertise this as I do in chat to get some comments about my story. It is in chapter 3 right now. And I wanted to know your opinnions.

http://www.procyonidae.tk

If you use IE. A BIG, FAT lycos frame will appear. Can someone tell me of a good hosting with no ads?
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Nite
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 22, 2004 11:48 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

For my site, I've been using Brinkster for hosting, but they're being retarded and have been putting random ads on my site lately. I've heard Freewebs isn't too bad, but for the long domain names I like using .tk as a redirection site like you have.
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Cirrel
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 23, 2004 1:40 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Tried your site on both IE amd mozilla, but cant seem to find the links to your chapters on the pages. Hmmm. Am I doing something wrong?

Cirrel

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Luxo
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 23, 2004 9:24 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

In the logo, you can click on Chapters to go to chapter 1. After that, in every chapter there's a link at the bottom of it. Sorry for not having ready the navigation system.

Remember: Just click Next...

Please note that I've only made 3 chapters. So, If you click next on chapter 3 it will give you a 404 error. If this story gets approval from you. I'll organize the site as it was intended to be. This is sort of a beta-test.
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 24, 2004 12:43 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Whoops! Found the problem. The privacy settings on my firewall blocked your cookies so I wasn't getting any logo to click on.

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Luxo
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 28, 2004 6:33 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Well, I uploaded chapter 4 (Like 4 days ago) and put a link to Chapter 1 that is text-based. You should not have any problems browsing hrough the chapters now.

I promise that I'll set a navigation system if I get opinnions about it. But, please. POST COMMENTS OR SOMETHING.
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PostPosted: Wed Feb 04, 2004 1:07 pm    Post subject: Procyonidae Reply with quote

Comments, OK -

First watch your english noun/verb conjugation - for example, I, You and They DO, while He, She and It DOES (or don't/doesn't) [...some people 'doesn't' know about...]

Second, hmmm, watch out when dropping a verb or noun in conversation mode (it may be more realistic, but not everyone will assume the same word is 'there')...


Third, you're off to a good start, keep up the good writing.
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PostPosted: Thu Feb 05, 2004 5:06 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks, I know I need to improve my english skills a bit. Sorry about that.
And it's very good that you like it. But, since I am in school again, I think I'll wait a little more to write more chapters.
Thanks for the feedback!
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