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Kathmandu Site Owner
Joined: 26 May 2002 Posts: 48 Location: Texarkana, Arkansas
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Posted: Sun Nov 16, 2003 4:15 pm Post subject: Comments for Jia-yun on PFAD |
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I have my latest story up on Planet Furry After Dark and if you wanted to comment on it , here is a place to do so. Thanks a bunch.
Jia-yun _________________ Kathmandu
Sculptor, artist and writer.
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Nameless Site Owner
Joined: 06 Sep 2002 Posts: 1368 Location: Vienna, Austria
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Posted: Wed Dec 03, 2003 2:40 am Post subject: |
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I enjoyed the story.
A few details at the end confuded me a little. I'm quite sure she was not talking about herself as an Orca, but still... The gills don't quite fit the picture. _________________ I'm a nut, but there are those who appreciate me for it. |
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Kathmandu Site Owner
Joined: 26 May 2002 Posts: 48 Location: Texarkana, Arkansas
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Posted: Wed Dec 03, 2003 7:30 am Post subject: |
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Quote: | A few details at the end confuded me a little. I'm quite sure she was not talking about herself as an Orca, but still... The gills don't quite fit the picture.
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Jia-yun was speaking:
“Besides, I want to try it in *your* orca form next time.”
or maybe I'm missing something... Matsu was the one who could take any form she wanted. This statement was a hint that her and Jia had been screwing like rabbits in some rather interesting ways.
Thank you for reading and glad you liked it. _________________ Kathmandu
Sculptor, artist and writer.
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Nameless Site Owner
Joined: 06 Sep 2002 Posts: 1368 Location: Vienna, Austria
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Posted: Wed Dec 03, 2003 8:15 am Post subject: |
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I was mostly wondering what Jia-yun was turning into. What kind of animal could reasonably screw an Orca? Or rather, what kind of fish? _________________ I'm a nut, but there are those who appreciate me for it. |
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Kathmandu Site Owner
Joined: 26 May 2002 Posts: 48 Location: Texarkana, Arkansas
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Posted: Wed Dec 03, 2003 7:42 pm Post subject: |
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Quote: | I was mostly wondering what Jia-yun was turning into. What kind of animal could reasonably screw an Orca? Or rather, what kind of fish?
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Jia is turning into a water breathing monster, no specific animal. The way I figure the magic to work is first to keep her alive and healthy underwater but over time the magic unravels. 10 minutes underwater and the magic doesn't have to do much other than prevent cellular damage but over 10 days and the magic has to make changes to how the body works to be able to survive underwater so it does things like grow gills, change the skin, eyes, hands and feet etc. Basically changes her to a "monster".
Matsu is a goddess and can assume any form she chooses, she can also change the size of certain aspects to make sex possible. Remember when she sported the oversized woody? Well, it can be sized smaller too.
Hmmm, I need to look at the story again and see if I can clear some of this up... _________________ Kathmandu
Sculptor, artist and writer.
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