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Nameless · Posted: Fri Sep 12, 2003 3:17 am Post subject:

Dark clouds on the horizon. Confused

Well, they've been there for some time, but they seem to get darker and darker...

Why do I have the feeling that whatever that Bronston is going to talk that other fur into will also affect the Clinic. Mad

Hmmm, she is not quite ready to, but I guess Carmen is going to drop out of the race... Wink

Two small nags:

Concolor · Posted: Fri Sep 12, 2003 11:29 am Post subject:

Kelly McAllen · Posted: Sat Sep 13, 2003 11:19 am Post subject:

I'm not so sure that they would attack the clinic. My feeling is that they want to remove Khan himself. They have enough high level members, it wouldn't be to hard to place someone they trust, or controle in his place. Keep it clean as the put it, no dirty halfbreads.

As for Carmen.... Well you might guess how I hope she handles it... Wink

Shirh Khan · Posted: Mon Sep 15, 2003 4:51 pm Post subject:

Nameless · Posted: Mon Sep 15, 2003 11:26 pm Post subject:

I think that especially the police lieutenant will underestimate Khan. After all, he arrested him without any problems.
(Hmmm, why do I always have to think of a certain action movie actor when I read his name? Confused

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mfwhite · Posted: Sat Oct 11, 2003 4:16 pm Post subject: Damn fell asleep reading agains..

Gotta go back and read again......sigh....oh love your stuff wooooo ur stuff rocks.. Smile

Cheetaur

Shirh Khan · Posted: Tue Oct 14, 2003 9:56 pm Post subject: Hey!!

First, a brief announcement.
As it seems that the last three or four chapters have been anything but "on time", I'm temporarily suspending the "post by deadline" method I'd been using. This *is* temporary, but it's also until you get further notice from me. RL seems to be finally catching up to me, and I can't always seem to post by the deadlines I set for myself.

Yes, I know- all seven of my faithful readers will continue to read, anyway- I'm not saying that I want ya to be sad for me- I'm just letting ya know what's up.

Now, having said that....
Chapter 44 is finally done! It is in the paws of my esteemed editors, and as soon as I get it back, and do the final edits to make it right, I'll post it to the site! Look for the chapter to post sometime in the next 72 hrs, the Creator willing!

Q'plah!

Styx · Posted: Tue Oct 14, 2003 11:44 pm Post subject:

Hey now I may not post something with every chapter but rest asured I do read FtDttH faithfully and have greatly enjoyed it you have yet to write something I didn't like reading even though some of them were hard to get through Crying or Very sad

anyway take your time quality like your's is worth waiting for.

Shirh Khan · Posted: Sun Oct 19, 2003 10:07 am Post subject: Thank You!

To Styx:
Thanks, man- I'm glad to have ya as one of my seven faithful readers. You're a part of why I write my story, and post it on the internet.

To everyone:
Chapter 44 has now been posted!
I won't even give ya hints about this one- just go read! Twisted Evil

-Shirh Khan

Nameless · Posted: Sun Oct 19, 2003 1:28 pm Post subject:

Hmmm, I think you have more than seven readers, but I think that several stories here get way too little response.

Surprised

Good chapter.

Things are looking up for several furs. Very Happy

I'm really happy for Beka. And Simon seems to have at least come to the point where he can begin to heal.

Hmmm, when will EK really realize that he hurts a lot of furs by keeping them locked out and by not trying to face his problems. But I think the new walls he built around his heart will crumble before long anyway. Tony was quite close, I think.

Now if it was not for the dark clouds on the horizon... Twisted Evil

Concolor · Posted: Sun Oct 19, 2003 6:03 pm Post subject:

Cateagle · Posted: Sun Oct 19, 2003 6:49 pm Post subject:

::Chuckle:: Sk, you got my feedback when I sent the edits back. This is going to get even more "interesting".

Cateagle

Kelly McAllen · Posted: Sun Oct 19, 2003 6:54 pm Post subject:

Its been a while since a chapter has been like this. Good feelings are being spread around. Smile

For a moment I thought Lupe's male lover was going to be hurt, and was really feeling for him. Toni how ever I'm afraid is setting her self up for a fall. Certenly Khan is interested but with her age I think its more list on her part. Maybe even on his.

All in all a great chapter Khan. I feel with what has been going on, Khan is being forced to face his fears, and start healing. I dought anyone can resist the amount of love he has been reseaving lately.

Now I sit waiting for the next instalment.

Pat The Fox · Posted: Sun Oct 19, 2003 11:01 pm Post subject:

An interesting chapter. Certaily does stir the pot more, giving it a nice swirl while adding more spice and contents.

Xaqtly · Posted: Mon Oct 20, 2003 5:51 am Post subject:

Khan, you're a master storyteller. Your words paint such vivid pictures and bring forth such real emotion. If I ever grow up, I want to be able to write like you do.