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Frazikar Registered User
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Posted: Sat Oct 22, 2011 10:14 am Post subject: |
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Huh, wha...
(*hmmm, 2 chapters already?? wonder if he has anymore in the back*) |
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hikaru Administrator
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Posted: Sat Oct 22, 2011 6:31 pm Post subject: |
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I've got the basics for the next chapter pretty much down in my head. Now it's just a case of banging on the keyboard to get them down for the editors.
If all goes well, another chapter will be out next weekend.
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Posted: Mon Oct 24, 2011 7:55 am Post subject: Re: Chapter 29's up. |
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The high point of my day has just been reached. |
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Sieobahn Registered User
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Posted: Sat Oct 29, 2011 5:02 am Post subject: |
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2 more chapters! Thanks for picking the story back up, I can't wait for more! |
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hikaru Administrator
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Posted: Sun Oct 30, 2011 12:13 am Post subject: |
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Sieobahn wrote: | 2 more chapters! Thanks for picking the story back up, I can't wait for more! |
You're welcome.
I've been busy this week, so only got about 2/3 of the next chapter done. It'll probably go up sometime in the middle of the week.
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Frazikar Registered User
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Posted: Sun Oct 30, 2011 8:57 am Post subject: |
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Arggh, I'm hearing that refrain of 'Promises, promises ' running around again... |
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dsquare1111 Registered User
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Posted: Wed Nov 02, 2011 2:51 pm Post subject: |
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[quote="hikaru"] Sieobahn wrote: | I've been busy this week, so only got about 2/3 of the next chapter done. It'll probably go up sometime in the middle of the week.
Cheers!! |
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Sieobahn Registered User
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Posted: Sun Nov 06, 2011 7:05 pm Post subject: |
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I am assuming Michelle is Sheila’s sister she believes is dead. I don’t remember any reason given why Tammy is being hunted down, so I suspect the sisters are needed for a ceremony to summon Arden back into the world.
Michelle’s coma could be a result of the bad guys trying to put her out of the picture, or maybe the good guys to put her on a path to intersect her sisters.
The FBI agent watching over her was very absent from the drama around Sheila’s relapse. While he may have been asleep for the initial incident, how could he miss Tomas getting run over? There is a good chance Amanda probably knows about him, but if he developed any contacts with the staff he may be able to find out some of what happened, especially if she has changed her pattern to hide the closet all day.
Tiny’s business dealings have been targeted, presumably by the same bad guys behind some of ZZ Studios problems. Has SCS been targeted as well? Zig Zag’s relationship with James shouldn’t be that hard to uncover, especially after they go to air on a TV special. Unless whoever is behind it is just after a cascade effect, destroy ZZ Studio’s first, and then SCS when Zig turns to James for support.
What happened to the cop Michael from the first act? Did he also ‘disappear’ after Arden left? Is there still the evidence he collected and saved online still floating out there? |
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hikaru Administrator
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Posted: Wed Nov 09, 2011 9:35 pm Post subject: |
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Sieobahn wrote: | I am assuming Michelle is Sheila’s sister she believes is dead. I don’t remember any reason given why Tammy is being hunted down, so I suspect the sisters are needed for a ceremony to summon Arden back into the world. |
Hecate is looking for Tammy because all of Sheila's stuff is in her storage. Also, Thomas wants to make sure Tammy knows Sheila's alive. I had intended to put that in back when he sent her running off on the mission, but I was a space case.
Sieobahn wrote: | Michelle’s coma could be a result of the bad guys trying to put her out of the picture, or maybe the good guys to put her on a path to intersect her sisters. |
It'll be mentioned later that she was in a car accident. That's not a huge spoiler.
Sieobahn wrote: | The FBI agent watching over her was very absent from the drama around Sheila’s relapse. While he may have been asleep for the initial incident, how could he miss Tomas getting run over? There is a good chance Amanda probably knows about him, but if he developed any contacts with the staff he may be able to find out some of what happened, especially if she has changed her pattern to hide the closet all day. |
Actually, there's been so much going on that I just hadn't really had time to write them into the story. Remember, this thing sat on the shelf for a couple of years. I'm still not back on track with all of the characters. ^.^
Sieobahn wrote: | Tiny’s business dealings have been targeted, presumably by the same bad guys behind some of ZZ Studios problems. Has SCS been targeted as well? Zig Zag’s relationship with James shouldn’t be that hard to uncover, especially after they go to air on a TV special. Unless whoever is behind it is just after a cascade effect, destroy ZZ Studio’s first, and then SCS when Zig turns to James for support. |
I believe this would call for a "BUWAHAHAHahahahahahahaha!"
Sieobahn wrote: | What happened to the cop Michael from the first act? Did he also ‘disappear’ after Arden left? Is there still the evidence he collected and saved online still floating out there? |
That's for later in the plot. ^.^
Thx for reading.
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webkilla Registered User
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Posted: Sun Feb 12, 2012 11:22 am Post subject: |
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Oh wow
last time i checked up on this place was... in 2009 I think
damn, makes me feel old
but reading up on the last couple chapters - hmmm... nice to see things moving forward a little bit
if anything, I feel that there are just too many sidestories going on.
...but that could just as well be me not having read the story for almost half a decade, making the ongoings on the supporting cast feel somewhat vague in memory
that said, the 'summary' at the end of chapter 29 felt very appropriate - I mean, finally, after 29 chapters, I understand what is going on _________________ My Deviant artpile
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dsquare1111 Registered User
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Posted: Wed Apr 18, 2012 10:14 am Post subject: |
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hikaru wrote: |
I believe this would call for a "BUWAHAHAHahahahahahahaha!"
Cheers!! |
Evil laugh aside, there is a lot of ground to cover. i just hope it happens while we are still alive to read it.
No pressure though.
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hikaru Administrator
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Posted: Thu Apr 19, 2012 3:44 pm Post subject: |
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My muse has abandoned me again... I really should finish up the current chapter, but the motivation's gone.
Being unemployed again with about $10K medical bills hanging over my head isn't really helping.
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