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PostPosted: Fri Aug 20, 2010 4:04 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Shocker indeed! So get to work on chapter 15 in a hurry so we can see how it turns out Wink
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 20, 2010 10:14 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Shocking -- not really, considering....

Future visions can be such a pain...
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PostPosted: Sat Aug 21, 2010 4:58 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Especially future visions inhabited and most likely fueled by one who is named the Father of Lies.

I'm just sayin'

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PostPosted: Sat Aug 21, 2010 5:58 pm    Post subject: Hmm . . . Reply with quote

Ah, we shall see how this pans out . . .

*maniacal laughing ensues*

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PostPosted: Wed Sep 08, 2010 10:32 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Chapter 15 will be posted this evening. My web host is doing some upgrades so I'm unable to upload the PDF file at the moment.

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PostPosted: Wed Sep 08, 2010 2:40 pm    Post subject: New chapter up! Reply with quote

Hey All~

Chapter 15 of "End Game" has been posted.

This should clear up a few things and pose some new questions.

Enjoy!

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PostPosted: Thu Sep 09, 2010 7:39 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hmmm, a superimposed dream-state...

plus, why didn't Gary call for an exit before they left the target room?? (or just sent a 'scout' down to check?)
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 09, 2010 9:56 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Frazikar wrote:
Hmmm, a superimposed dream-state...

plus, why didn't Gary call for an exit before they left the target room?? (or just sent a 'scout' down to check?)


They weren't expecting that retinue of soldiers or the Magistrate's ulterior motives. Of course, Bradley being anxious to get his daughter out of there and Nancy's inexperience didn't help, either.

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PostPosted: Fri Sep 10, 2010 10:32 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hmmm, just not cautious (or paranoid) enough...

but then again, I prefer quick exits (and a 'locked' room mystery) then leaving blood on the floor...['specially for an in-and-out misison, emphasis on the 'out'!]
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PostPosted: Sun Sep 26, 2010 3:42 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Well, for those of you that don't read my blog, I'm suffering from writer's block.I attribute this to my current heath issues. I'm trying to repair Chapter 16 but it's not easy. I might be able to post it this coming week. We'll see.

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PostPosted: Tue Sep 28, 2010 3:08 am    Post subject: New chapter up! Reply with quote

this evening I have felt better so I managed to salvage Chapter 16 to some degree, so here it is.

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PostPosted: Tue Sep 28, 2010 4:07 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Kellan, if you had ablock, I certainly couldn't tell it. The end scene with Torvald...I could hear his anguish. very well done.



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PostPosted: Tue Sep 28, 2010 8:22 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Seems something was amiss in that courtroom...(but not knowing what those laws are...)

As for the ending - Daaaaammmn!
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 29, 2010 11:01 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Tigermark wrote:
Kellan, if you had ablock, I certainly couldn't tell it. The end scene with Torvald...I could hear his anguish. very well done.



TM


Thanks, that block was brutal, too.

If you felt Tor's anguish, you haven't read nothing yet!

*maniacal laughing*

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PostPosted: Tue Oct 05, 2010 3:15 pm    Post subject: New chapter up! Reply with quote

Here is is, Chapter 17 of "End Game"

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