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Aslaug Site Owner
Joined: 04 Jan 2005 Posts: 1861 Location: Slagelse, Denmark
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Posted: Fri Aug 20, 2010 4:04 am Post subject: |
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Shocker indeed! So get to work on chapter 15 in a hurry so we can see how it turns out |
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Frazikar Registered User
Joined: 25 Jan 2008 Posts: 1181 Location: North Coast, USA
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Posted: Fri Aug 20, 2010 10:14 am Post subject: |
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Shocking -- not really, considering....
Future visions can be such a pain... |
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Tigermark Site Owner
Joined: 18 Apr 2003 Posts: 855 Location: Hopkinsville, KY
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Posted: Sat Aug 21, 2010 4:58 pm Post subject: |
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Especially future visions inhabited and most likely fueled by one who is named the Father of Lies.
I'm just sayin'
TM _________________ Tiger, tiger, burning bright...
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Kellan Meig'h Administrator
Joined: 01 Apr 2007 Posts: 2045 Location: Just East of Indianapolis, Indiana
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Posted: Sat Aug 21, 2010 5:58 pm Post subject: Hmm . . . |
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Ah, we shall see how this pans out . . .
*maniacal laughing ensues*
Kel _________________ "Старый боевой конь, Кeллан" |
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Kellan Meig'h Administrator
Joined: 01 Apr 2007 Posts: 2045 Location: Just East of Indianapolis, Indiana
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Posted: Wed Sep 08, 2010 10:32 am Post subject: |
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Chapter 15 will be posted this evening. My web host is doing some upgrades so I'm unable to upload the PDF file at the moment.
Kel _________________ "Старый боевой конь, Кeллан" |
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Kellan Meig'h Administrator
Joined: 01 Apr 2007 Posts: 2045 Location: Just East of Indianapolis, Indiana
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Posted: Wed Sep 08, 2010 2:40 pm Post subject: New chapter up! |
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Hey All~
Chapter 15 of "End Game" has been posted.
This should clear up a few things and pose some new questions.
Enjoy!
Kel _________________ "Старый боевой конь, Кeллан" |
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Frazikar Registered User
Joined: 25 Jan 2008 Posts: 1181 Location: North Coast, USA
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Posted: Thu Sep 09, 2010 7:39 am Post subject: |
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Hmmm, a superimposed dream-state...
plus, why didn't Gary call for an exit before they left the target room?? (or just sent a 'scout' down to check?) |
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Kellan Meig'h Administrator
Joined: 01 Apr 2007 Posts: 2045 Location: Just East of Indianapolis, Indiana
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Posted: Thu Sep 09, 2010 9:56 am Post subject: |
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Frazikar wrote: | Hmmm, a superimposed dream-state...
plus, why didn't Gary call for an exit before they left the target room?? (or just sent a 'scout' down to check?) |
They weren't expecting that retinue of soldiers or the Magistrate's ulterior motives. Of course, Bradley being anxious to get his daughter out of there and Nancy's inexperience didn't help, either.
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Frazikar Registered User
Joined: 25 Jan 2008 Posts: 1181 Location: North Coast, USA
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Posted: Fri Sep 10, 2010 10:32 am Post subject: |
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Hmmm, just not cautious (or paranoid) enough...
but then again, I prefer quick exits (and a 'locked' room mystery) then leaving blood on the floor...['specially for an in-and-out misison, emphasis on the 'out'!] |
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Kellan Meig'h Administrator
Joined: 01 Apr 2007 Posts: 2045 Location: Just East of Indianapolis, Indiana
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Posted: Sun Sep 26, 2010 3:42 pm Post subject: |
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Well, for those of you that don't read my blog, I'm suffering from writer's block.I attribute this to my current heath issues. I'm trying to repair Chapter 16 but it's not easy. I might be able to post it this coming week. We'll see.
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Kellan Meig'h Administrator
Joined: 01 Apr 2007 Posts: 2045 Location: Just East of Indianapolis, Indiana
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Posted: Tue Sep 28, 2010 3:08 am Post subject: New chapter up! |
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this evening I have felt better so I managed to salvage Chapter 16 to some degree, so here it is.
Kel _________________ "Старый боевой конь, Кeллан" |
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Tigermark Site Owner
Joined: 18 Apr 2003 Posts: 855 Location: Hopkinsville, KY
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Posted: Tue Sep 28, 2010 4:07 am Post subject: |
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Kellan, if you had ablock, I certainly couldn't tell it. The end scene with Torvald...I could hear his anguish. very well done.
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Frazikar Registered User
Joined: 25 Jan 2008 Posts: 1181 Location: North Coast, USA
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Posted: Tue Sep 28, 2010 8:22 am Post subject: |
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Seems something was amiss in that courtroom...(but not knowing what those laws are...)
As for the ending - Daaaaammmn! |
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Kellan Meig'h Administrator
Joined: 01 Apr 2007 Posts: 2045 Location: Just East of Indianapolis, Indiana
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Posted: Wed Sep 29, 2010 11:01 pm Post subject: |
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Tigermark wrote: | Kellan, if you had ablock, I certainly couldn't tell it. The end scene with Torvald...I could hear his anguish. very well done.
TM |
Thanks, that block was brutal, too.
If you felt Tor's anguish, you haven't read nothing yet!
*maniacal laughing*
Kel _________________ "Старый боевой конь, Кeллан" |
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Kellan Meig'h Administrator
Joined: 01 Apr 2007 Posts: 2045 Location: Just East of Indianapolis, Indiana
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Posted: Tue Oct 05, 2010 3:15 pm Post subject: New chapter up! |
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Here is is, Chapter 17 of "End Game"
Kel _________________ "Старый боевой конь, Кeллан" |
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