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Frazikar Registered User
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Posted: Fri Nov 27, 2009 12:59 pm Post subject: |
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Hmmmm, are the kin immortal or merely long-lived (when the time scale goes from 100 to 1000, there's not much difference in the first couple of centuries, but at half a millenia...) |
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Benleopard Registered User
Joined: 28 Jan 2009 Posts: 390 Location: Finally free from D-land
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Posted: Fri Nov 27, 2009 6:40 pm Post subject: |
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now this is getting a bit comical... they hang up one towel sort of speak to fink a full rack for them to pick up. _________________ Fortune Cookie that I keep in my walet say's "Knowledge is the only good and Ignorance is the only evil."
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Kellan Meig'h Administrator
Joined: 01 Apr 2007 Posts: 2045 Location: Just East of Indianapolis, Indiana
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Posted: Sat Nov 28, 2009 1:03 am Post subject: What? Not happy with the story? |
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Benleopard wrote: | now this is getting a bit comical... they hang up one towel sort of speak to fink a full rack for them to pick up. |
Was there a limit on how many chapters? Missed that one. There are a few left to wrap up this story. What's happening right now is the very reason no fur wants to be immortal. Particularly Torvald at this moment in the story.
Remember: it isn't over until Victoria says it's over.
Some of what's going on is a setup for future stories, BTW. I'm not telling which things are which, though. You have all met (or will meet shortly) the players for the next storyline.
Kel _________________ "Старый боевой конь, Кeллан" |
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Benleopard Registered User
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Posted: Sat Nov 28, 2009 2:19 am Post subject: |
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still a great chapter just a few pieces in my fuzzy little mind falling into place can be very funny when certian things click. XP _________________ Fortune Cookie that I keep in my walet say's "Knowledge is the only good and Ignorance is the only evil."
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Kellan Meig'h Administrator
Joined: 01 Apr 2007 Posts: 2045 Location: Just East of Indianapolis, Indiana
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Posted: Tue Jan 05, 2010 5:14 am Post subject: Latest chapter |
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Chapter 36 is up.
Kel _________________ "Старый боевой конь, Кeллан" |
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Frazikar Registered User
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Posted: Tue Jan 05, 2010 10:36 am Post subject: |
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Aaahhhhh..... |
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Kellan Meig'h Administrator
Joined: 01 Apr 2007 Posts: 2045 Location: Just East of Indianapolis, Indiana
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Posted: Mon Jan 18, 2010 2:13 am Post subject: The epilogue |
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Well, here it is. The Epilogue has been posted for your reading pleasure.
This marks the end of "A Loss Of Rights" but it is not the last of the stories for The Immortal Couple. The next story, "End Game" will be starting in a few weeks. I hope that you all have enjoyed the ride so far and I hope you will stay for the next story.
My deepest thanks to all of you that have read the story. My thanks and gratitude also go out to my special guests that helped to add spice to the mix. Alsaug, Teric and SC, thank you all.
Kellan, the old warhorse _________________ "Старый боевой конь, Кeллан" |
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Benleopard Registered User
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Posted: Mon Jan 18, 2010 4:47 am Post subject: |
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very nice ending Kellan... but still I sence the hint of deception in the air, just a little faint smell of it. XP _________________ Fortune Cookie that I keep in my walet say's "Knowledge is the only good and Ignorance is the only evil."
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Kellan Meig'h Administrator
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Posted: Mon Jan 18, 2010 1:59 pm Post subject: |
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Benleopard wrote: | very nice ending Kellan... but still I sense the hint of deception in the air, just a little faint smell of it. XP |
Deception? Maybe, maybe not. Now if you had hinted at subterfuge ...
Kellan _________________ "Старый боевой конь, Кeллан" |
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Benleopard Registered User
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Posted: Mon Jan 18, 2010 3:27 pm Post subject: |
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true, but you have left numerous possibilities with not giving a means to a end with the consortium police (cant remember what they are but I know they are a force outside the god's to catch and punish others they deem enemies). So I have a good feeling something is a foul going on and Victoira and Tor are going to be in the center of it again. XP _________________ Fortune Cookie that I keep in my walet say's "Knowledge is the only good and Ignorance is the only evil."
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Kellan Meig'h Administrator
Joined: 01 Apr 2007 Posts: 2045 Location: Just East of Indianapolis, Indiana
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Posted: Mon Jan 18, 2010 5:53 pm Post subject: explanation |
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Benleopard wrote: | true, but you have left numerous possibilities with not giving a means to a end with the consortium police (cant remember what they are but I know they are a force outside the god's to catch and punish others they deem enemies). So I have a good feeling something is a foul going on and Victoria and Tor are going to be in the center of it again. XP |
Just to clarify things, Mitchell Gallegos (guy-yay-gose), David Klepper and Reme Ronsoco work for the Celestial Police. They have a pretty dim view of the Gods, the Demons (particularly Surt) and the Consortium. They do have respect for Eyr because she's a healer.
At any rate, do you really think Torvald and Victoria can just say "We Quit" and walk away from all of that fun? Aslaug did it but I'm not so sure the Immortal Couple can pull it off too. We shall see.
Stay tuned,
Kel _________________ "Старый боевой конь, Кeллан" |
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Frazikar Registered User
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Posted: Mon Jan 18, 2010 8:16 pm Post subject: |
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That mongoose is going to get such a pinch from Victoria.... |
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Benleopard Registered User
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Posted: Mon Jan 18, 2010 8:21 pm Post subject: |
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lol... that is just a funny image come to mind. Victoria chasing that mongoose through out Surts real, using whatever she can get her hands on while Surt, and the gods just sit back and laugh as it going on. _________________ Fortune Cookie that I keep in my walet say's "Knowledge is the only good and Ignorance is the only evil."
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Kellan Meig'h Administrator
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Posted: Mon Jan 18, 2010 11:16 pm Post subject: |
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Benleopard wrote: | lol... that is just a funny image come to mind. Victoria chasing that mongoose through out Surts real, using whatever she can get her hands on while Surt, and the gods just sit back and laugh as it going on. |
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