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Cirrel Registered User
Joined: 29 Mar 2003 Posts: 265 Location: 400 miles north of everywhere
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Posted: Thu Dec 03, 2009 6:45 pm Post subject: Darien's Gap - A Nohni Wabanda Story. |
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My regular story posting forum is down temporarily, so this time, the PF crowd gets first look at chapter 15 of Darien's Gap. The entire Darien's Gap story so far - including the new chapter 15 at the bottom - can be found on my website at:
http://www.wilderhom.com/dariensgap/dariensgapFULL.html _________________
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Frazikar Registered User
Joined: 25 Jan 2008 Posts: 1181 Location: North Coast, USA
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Posted: Fri Dec 04, 2009 10:41 am Post subject: |
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Go golden jackel, keep'em jumping.... |
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tobi3B Registered User
Joined: 07 Jan 2008 Posts: 645 Location: Germany Siegen
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Posted: Fri Dec 04, 2009 2:00 pm Post subject: |
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I really begin to wonder when Nohni will beat Pedro into Puphood. _________________ Whether a black cat brings misfortune or not, depends on whether one is a fur or a mouse.
[br]Feed Me![br]Adopted from Valenth |
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Tigermark Site Owner
Joined: 18 Apr 2003 Posts: 855 Location: Hopkinsville, KY
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Posted: Fri Dec 04, 2009 11:35 pm Post subject: |
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*menacing grin* Pedro=dead Fur walking. (I think, I don't know any more that y'all about what's coming next.)
TM _________________ Tiger, tiger, burning bright...
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Mapper Registered User
Joined: 21 Jun 2003 Posts: 892 Location: East coast somewhere
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Posted: Sat Dec 05, 2009 10:32 am Post subject: |
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Oh yeah _________________
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Nicolai Borovskaya Registered User
Joined: 18 May 2006 Posts: 464 Location: Wherever the fictons carry me
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Posted: Sun Dec 06, 2009 2:46 am Post subject: |
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I'll just keep waiting for the next chapter. I've given up trying to predict what's gonna happen next. Although Pedro being beaten to a pulp is a definite possibility. _________________ Nicolai
When you talk about damage radius, even atomic weapons pale before that of an unfettered idiot in a position of power. |
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Frazikar Registered User
Joined: 25 Jan 2008 Posts: 1181 Location: North Coast, USA
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Posted: Sun Dec 06, 2009 9:04 am Post subject: |
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Pedro won't be surviving but will it be by a golden jackel or not is the question... |
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Cirrel Registered User
Joined: 29 Mar 2003 Posts: 265 Location: 400 miles north of everywhere
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Posted: Mon Dec 07, 2009 6:38 pm Post subject: |
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Chapter 16 of Darien's Gap is now up on my site. Heheh. This be a classic 'cliff-hanger'.
http://www.wilderhom.com/dariensgap/dariensgapFULL.html
Again, this file is the full story all the way up to the new chapter on the bottom.
Thanks everyone for your comments. _________________
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Benleopard Registered User
Joined: 28 Jan 2009 Posts: 390 Location: Finally free from D-land
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Posted: Mon Dec 07, 2009 10:11 pm Post subject: |
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hmmmm... wow, another cliffhanger. XP _________________ Fortune Cookie that I keep in my walet say's "Knowledge is the only good and Ignorance is the only evil."
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AmigaDragon Registered User
Joined: 05 Dec 2004 Posts: 840 Location: Far Northern Minnesota
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Posted: Tue Dec 08, 2009 1:29 am Post subject: |
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That's a pretty narrow (and somewhat 4-walled?) cliff.
As soon as the last lackey was being tossed, I had the idea that there may be a net or something a short distance down. We shall see when the story continues.
Quote: | "Please try to be more careful," said Pedro - the condescending tone in his voice quite evident. "The Goddess of Change needs you whole at our destination." |
"It's a little late for that." she said, holding up her mutilated hand. _________________ "Cogito, ergo es. I think, therefore you is." Ray D. Tutto (King of the Moon) to Baron Munschaussen |
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Frazikar Registered User
Joined: 25 Jan 2008 Posts: 1181 Location: North Coast, USA
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Posted: Tue Dec 08, 2009 10:40 am Post subject: |
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'Course it was a set-up, the question is just how long it's been waiting to be used...
BTW any bets the 'deceased' underling was in contact with DEA or something similar? |
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Mapper Registered User
Joined: 21 Jun 2003 Posts: 892 Location: East coast somewhere
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Posted: Tue Dec 08, 2009 11:34 am Post subject: |
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Wow, shiver in the end. _________________
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tobi3B Registered User
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Posted: Tue Dec 08, 2009 2:11 pm Post subject: |
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Intensive.
And my suspicion I PMed to you about who is the goddess is now hard as a diamond.
Looking forward to chapter 17 _________________ Whether a black cat brings misfortune or not, depends on whether one is a fur or a mouse.
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Cirrel Registered User
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Mapper Registered User
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Posted: Tue Dec 08, 2009 11:55 pm Post subject: |
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