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The Tale of Telfarian

 
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Lucius_Vane
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 11, 2008 3:58 pm    Post subject: The Tale of Telfarian Reply with quote

Two chapters and an interlude are up, and I'd like to hear what you think. Fantastic? Utter crap? Do you like cookies? Post it here. Very Happy

I want to know what you think, of the characters, of the plot or anything else you want to comment on.

Thanks for the feedback.

-Lucius

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Teric
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 11, 2008 4:17 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Is chapter two supposed to be cut off?

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...charging only for alcohol. No one who was open refused a hungry soul or tried to make a profi

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Lucius_Vane
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 11, 2008 4:25 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Whoops, thanks Teric. Embarassed Smile

Not quite sure why it did that.

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Lucius_Vane
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PostPosted: Fri Sep 12, 2008 4:21 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Chapter 4 is now posted! Enjoy.

-LV

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PostPosted: Wed Oct 29, 2008 1:04 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

An interlude, this is the last one featuring this character for a while. I think Concolor will be able to appreciate that... Razz

Feedback would be a great help!

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Kellan Meig'h
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 29, 2008 3:42 am    Post subject: Information, please! Reply with quote

Letting you know I bookmarked your site, Lucius.

I'll sit down and do some reading this week and I'll be sure to give you some feedback when I do. I did a quick read of the first few paragraphs fo chapter 1 and I like what I see so far.

Kellan

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