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PostPosted: Mon May 24, 2004 8:13 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Shadu wrote:
I think this is a vry good idea for people like me, new to writing and all. i really need the critisism. i know i have lots to work on but i sometimes can't find what exactly it is i need to improve. maby some of you can.


Try using capital 'I' here and there?
Also, it's 'maybe', not 'maby'...

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PostPosted: Mon May 24, 2004 2:20 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

yup those are some of my most common mistakes especially here. I'm kinda used to the auo capitalize of word
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PostPosted: Thu Oct 14, 2004 2:16 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Shadu wrote:
yup those are some of my most common mistakes especially here. I'm kinda used to the auo capitalize of word


You might do what I do. Write your post in word then cut & paste it over to the message board.

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PostPosted: Thu Oct 14, 2004 2:33 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I have posted a story in the feedback area and I was wondering. How I go about moving it here in this forum? Or do I have to post it again here? It's a story called Deverone Chronicles. I don't mean to cause any complications, i'm just asking.
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PostPosted: Thu Oct 14, 2004 8:39 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Your story has been moved.
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PostPosted: Thu Oct 14, 2004 8:47 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 07, 2007 11:34 pm    Post subject: Stories Reply with quote

I have a story in progress and the first chapters almost complete, it's based on my fursona(Alexius)and how F.U.R.R.S his acronymed demon hunting/military faction came to be, the first chapter starts about 1 1/2 years before he is born, the first chapter is confusing but in the end it will all make sense. I'm only going to post chapter by chapter as some of them can be quite long. Is there a certin format they must be typed in?
Lastly I'm going to be creating two versions edited and non edited, caause correct me if I'm wrong, but minors DO come to this website do they not? nothing serious in the story, just language issue's.

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PostPosted: Wed Oct 15, 2008 6:34 am    Post subject: Warnndog saying HI! Reply with quote

I just want to say Hi! I should be posting some stuff soon on this forum. I just want people to be honest with me about my work. Tell me what I am doing right or doing wrong. Thanks.
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 15, 2008 4:43 pm    Post subject: Re: Warnndog saying HI! Reply with quote

Warndog wrote:
I just want to say Hi! I should be posting some stuff soon on this forum. I just want people to be honest with me about my work. Tell me what I am doing right or doing wrong. Thanks.


Sure, sounds great! By the way, welcome to PlanetFurry!

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PostPosted: Thu Oct 16, 2008 12:18 pm    Post subject: Re: Warnndog saying HI! Reply with quote

Warndog wrote:
I just want to say Hi! I should be posting some stuff soon on this forum. I just want people to be honest with me about my work. Tell me what I am doing right or doing wrong. Thanks.


Oh, you're new huh? *points to the welcome board* Just go there when you're ready to subject yourself to our insanity. By the way, here's your muffin. *gives muffin*

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PostPosted: Thu Oct 16, 2008 1:33 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Um midi, you forgot to light the fus... er candle.
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