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The Galaxy Hero, chapters one - three
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so what do you think? relpy after reading.
flabergasted at how awful it is
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moderitly bad
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ok but wouldn't read it again
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mildly interesting
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wow
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GriffinX
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PostPosted: Tue Sep 02, 2008 5:09 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
I'm also trying to keep it consistent and moving in the right direction, witch i have found very difficult believe me I'm moving as fast as i can to get a good chapter out.

now the really hard part I've found about doing this is that I've really wanted to make it my own. but to do this you have make certain things up like planet names, names of objects and now that I'm getting in to the actual si-fi part i find myself slowing down to name these things.
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PostPosted: Tue Sep 02, 2008 8:58 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
I've been editing your story, and let me tell you, it's been no picnic! Really love the story, yeah. You just gotta be carefull with your grammar.

STOP! Grammar time!
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PostPosted: Tue Sep 02, 2008 5:03 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Midi wrote:
STOP! Grammar time!


Can't touch this! (Or else you may explode)


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