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so what do you think? relpy after reading. |
flabergasted at how awful it is |
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moderitly bad |
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ok but wouldn't read it again |
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mildly interesting |
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wow |
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GriffinX Registered User
Joined: 18 Jun 2007 Posts: 785 Location: SLC Utah
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Posted: Tue Sep 02, 2008 5:09 am Post subject: |
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I'm also trying to keep it consistent and moving in the right direction, witch i have found very difficult believe me I'm moving as fast as i can to get a good chapter out.
now the really hard part I've found about doing this is that I've really wanted to make it my own. but to do this you have make certain things up like planet names, names of objects and now that I'm getting in to the actual si-fi part i find myself slowing down to name these things. _________________ to each their own
"a riot is at bottom the language of the unheard." Dr. Martin Luther King Jr.
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Kelvin Registered User
Joined: 08 Apr 2008 Posts: 1022 Location: That is not important. Just don't turn around.
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Posted: Tue Sep 02, 2008 8:58 am Post subject: |
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I've been editing your story, and let me tell you, it's been no picnic! Really love the story, yeah. You just gotta be carefull with your grammar.
STOP! Grammar time! _________________ Telegram: kelvinshadewing
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Kasyl Registered User
Joined: 30 Mar 2008 Posts: 977 Location: Striking from Zerenth
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Posted: Tue Sep 02, 2008 5:03 pm Post subject: |
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Midi wrote: | STOP! Grammar time! |
Can't touch this! (Or else you may explode)
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