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Pickles
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Location: Fredericksburg, Va

PostPosted: Thu Jan 10, 2008 9:32 pm    Post subject: A Character Profile Reply with quote

*I'm unsure of the proper spelling for the character's last name, if you could let me change it when I find out that would be wonderful*

- YOU -
Name Joshua O'Brien
Age 18 (Birthday February 7)
How did you find EC I used to be a member on the AG2 site, kinda got a little busy and lost track. Eva gave me the link to this one, so I hope I can get back into this again.

- CHARACTER -
Full Name Joshua Shane MacKeagan
Age 19
Gender Male
Element Name ???
Element Earth
Alliance Neutral
Love Interest None Presently

- APPEARANCE -
Height 5'8" | 68" | 173cm
Hair Colour Brown
Eye Colour Blue/Grey (They change a bit)

Description
Joshua is a lean, but built young man with short cut hair and a small beard on his chin. His posture is a strong one and his gaze is welcoming. A glance at his hands shows that they are calloused but soft and gentle, as if they had been through many hardships. He has many scars, though most are difficult to see and well healed, the main one being on his chest. Joshua's skin is a light tone, though not extremely pale, and he always seems well kept, his clothing usually casual.

- PERSONALITY -
Likes
Music
Computers
Outdoors
Blades (Knives & Swords, etc)

Dislikes/ Hates
Liars
Abusive People
Coffee
Sour Cream
Mayonnaise

Habits
Smoking
Physical Training
Learning

Description
Joshua is generally a very understanding person, trying to always understand someone else's point of view fully, even if he doesn't agree. He tries very hard to avoid altercations, and has very few real fears. He believes it's right to stand for what you believe in, if you do it properly. Joshua also has a bit of a bad side; His temper, though he can control it well, can be very bad, and he has a tendency to be sarcastic and cynical. Usually quiet, and not one to start conversations with strangers he is friendly and easy to talk to.

- HISTORY -
Family
Mom: Rhonda
Dad: Ernie
Sister: Cheyenne
Grandfather: John
Grandmother: Karen

History
Joshua grew up in Fredericksburg, Virginia with his grandparents and his sister. Growing up he had an explosive temper and didn't understand how to control it. He wasn't very social until his later years, more for fear of hurting those around him than that he didn't like people. He's grown up very quickly learning from his past and from others, trying to be a better person. At age 19 he joined the United States Marine Corps as an MP, leaving just under a year ago after finishing his four year contract on the rank of Sergeant. He is now work privately with the local police, and as a weapon-smith.

Pet(s):
Name: Kai
Species: Canine
Breed: Grey Wolf
Age: 1 Year

Kai looking calm.

Name: Kage
Species: Equine
Breed: Mustang
Age: 1 Year

Kage on his hind legs.

[I pretty much just want some feedback. Any spelling errors would also be appreciated. Good not good whatever works. History will be edited]

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Onic
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Joined: 17 Dec 2007
Posts: 95
Location: Virginia

PostPosted: Mon Jan 14, 2008 6:27 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Interesting. I didn't see any spelling issues right off. What is this profile for? A story to be written?
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Pickles
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 14, 2008 6:35 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Actually it's for a role-play site.
I may get permission from the owners to use the site as a base for a story.
It has a great storyline, and I find it's easier to write a story if you can role-play it first, because then you aren't the only working mind behind the characters, they're all individual minds.

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Pickles
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 21, 2008 3:10 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Updated. How's the history look to you guys?
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 22, 2008 2:34 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Not bad. Sounds like you pulled a lot of your player's info from your own experiences. That will contribute to a believable and easy to play character.
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Kelvin
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 13, 2008 9:08 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I like roleplaying my stories too, but since I'm alone, I have to roleplay all the characters at once, and that gets boring fast... Confused

So, any chance we'll get to read the story soon?

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Pickles
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PostPosted: Mon Jun 23, 2008 1:30 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Unfortunately no, the site failed to take off and thus there was nothing but a plot line idea with no actual characters.

It sucks.
Oh Well, Maybe next time.

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