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Kinsfire Site Owner
Joined: 01 Nov 2001 Posts: 380 Location: Roselle, NJ
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Posted: Fri Feb 14, 2003 9:16 am Post subject: |
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And a truly impressive beginning it is, too!
I await eagerly the upcoming chapters.
Kinsfire _________________ That which does not kill me probably hurt like a sonuvabitch. |
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anthony Site Owner
Joined: 12 Nov 2001 Posts: 1304 Location: Norway
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Posted: Fri Feb 14, 2003 9:46 am Post subject: |
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Yep, definitely a story to watch out for.
In other words, hurry up with the next chapter! _________________ "My name's Lion, Anthony Lion"
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TVDAVE Site Owner
Joined: 11 Feb 2002 Posts: 238 Location: RIYADH, SAUDI ARABIA
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Posted: Fri Feb 14, 2003 11:03 am Post subject: |
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Yes , for its the beginning of the end, killer stuff Ty, we are going to have to put this on Mutual Radio, this was fun,,,go make more, we await
Be good all _________________ Reporting live and transcribed from the
Saudi Desert this is TVDAVE reporting |
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Fishburne Administrator
Joined: 23 Jul 2002 Posts: 596 Location: Plano, Texas
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Posted: Fri Feb 14, 2003 11:45 am Post subject: |
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MORE MORE MORE!!!!
Great Start Man!!! _________________ "Do not Taunt Happy Fun God" -Cthulhu |
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Tygon Site Owner
Joined: 03 Apr 2001 Posts: 2497 Location: Isernhagen, Lowersaxony, Germany
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Posted: Fri Feb 14, 2003 2:19 pm Post subject: |
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Thanks for the comments, guys. I'm glad you like the story.
I promise to have the first chapter done doon.
BTW: for those who want to look into the time reference, I'm using the same Universal Calendar Date system Pflarrian does _________________ Tygon Panthera - name and species
www.planetfurry.com/~tygon/ |
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Nameless Site Owner
Joined: 06 Sep 2002 Posts: 1368 Location: Vienna, Austria
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Posted: Fri Feb 14, 2003 3:28 pm Post subject: |
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Interesting beginning. _________________ I'm a nut, but there are those who appreciate me for it. |
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Concolor Registered User
Joined: 19 Nov 2001 Posts: 832 Location: South Carolina
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Posted: Fri Feb 14, 2003 9:31 pm Post subject: |
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Can you say "Doomsday Weapon"?
Sure. I knew you could.
"It's a beautiful day in what's left of the neighborhood." . . . . . Okay, so I lie. The day sucks old gym socks. For the townspeople, anyway.
Non-canonical, huh? Does that mean, perhaps, that in this scenario, the Sword of Eternity DOESN'T get smashed? Wouldn't that be a hoot.
Nnnnnnnnext?!? _________________ Oddly enough, my life is based on a true story. (Ashleigh Brilliant) |
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Tygon Site Owner
Joined: 03 Apr 2001 Posts: 2497 Location: Isernhagen, Lowersaxony, Germany
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Posted: Fri Feb 14, 2003 10:19 pm Post subject: |
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Concolor wrote: | Can you say "Doomsday Weapon"?
Sure. I knew you could. |
One of my favorite words
Concolor wrote: | "It's a beautiful day in what's left of the neighborhood." . . . . . Okay, so I lie. The day sucks old gym socks. For the townspeople, anyway. |
Well, their problems are over...
Concolor wrote: | Non-canonical, huh? Does that mean, perhaps, that in this scenario, the Sword of Eternity DOESN'T get smashed? Wouldn't that be a hoot. |
I will keep it in canon as much as I can. However, no plan survives contact with the enemy and so I wanted to be on the save side by saying that there might be differences between Otherworlds and SOE. At the moment there are none planned though.
Concolor wrote: | Nnnnnnnnext?!? |
You'll have to wait and see _________________ Tygon Panthera - name and species
www.planetfurry.com/~tygon/ |
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Bearion Registered User
Joined: 01 Jun 2002 Posts: 278 Location: Bay Area, California
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Posted: Sat Feb 15, 2003 2:48 am Post subject: |
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Wow. She can crash my party...NOT!
An interesting start, Tygon. A doomsday weapon and a homicidal maniac to use it. What is her motive? We need more! |
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Nameless Site Owner
Joined: 06 Sep 2002 Posts: 1368 Location: Vienna, Austria
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Posted: Sun Mar 02, 2003 7:55 am Post subject: |
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Interesting... _________________ I'm a nut, but there are those who appreciate me for it. |
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Fishburne Administrator
Joined: 23 Jul 2002 Posts: 596 Location: Plano, Texas
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Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2003 10:33 am Post subject: |
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Well now!
Titanic, Titania, and Eternity...
You do realize that I fully expected to hear Tygon yell "King of the world!"
I for one enjoyed this. Was this their honeymoon?
Fish _________________ "Do not Taunt Happy Fun God" -Cthulhu |
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Tygon Site Owner
Joined: 03 Apr 2001 Posts: 2497 Location: Isernhagen, Lowersaxony, Germany
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Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2003 11:20 am Post subject: |
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I'm glad you like it, Fish, and you of course too, Nameless.
Fishburne wrote: | You do realize that I fully expected to hear Tygon yell "King of the world!" |
I was afraid that somebody would make some Titanic joke.
He would never yell such a thing. "King of the world"... why should he limit himself like that
Fishburne wrote: | I for one enjoyed this. Was this their honeymoon? |
That was only the beginning. _________________ Tygon Panthera - name and species
www.planetfurry.com/~tygon/ |
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Concolor Registered User
Joined: 19 Nov 2001 Posts: 832 Location: South Carolina
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Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2003 3:47 pm Post subject: |
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Very, very moving! You can feel the latent energy at his command, the careful restraint that the Spirit of Rage maintains over his power.
I'm very curious now: you mentioned Jirrigh in passing as 'immortal'. Was that status bestowed upon her by Lord Panthera? If she was immortal originally, how'd she end up as a harem girl? I need some backstory here!
Further curiosity: Given that he had never entertained the thought that he might fall in love, what would be Lord Panthera's reaction now if something . . . permanent . . . were to happen to Jirrigh?
I just have this feeling ........ _________________ Oddly enough, my life is based on a true story. (Ashleigh Brilliant) |
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Nameless Site Owner
Joined: 06 Sep 2002 Posts: 1368 Location: Vienna, Austria
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Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2003 3:55 pm Post subject: |
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Concolor wrote: | Further curiosity: Given that he had never entertained the thought that he might fall in love, what would be Lord Panthera's reaction now if something . . . permanent . . . were to happen to Jirrigh?
I just have this feeling ........ |
I guess we'd find out why he is called "The Spirit of Rage" _________________ I'm a nut, but there are those who appreciate me for it. |
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Tygon Site Owner
Joined: 03 Apr 2001 Posts: 2497 Location: Isernhagen, Lowersaxony, Germany
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Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2003 4:50 pm Post subject: |
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Concolor wrote: | Very, very moving! You can feel the latent energy at his command, the careful restraint that the Spirit of Rage maintains over his power. |
Well, he isn't called The Spirit of Rage just because it sounds good
Concolor wrote: | I'm very curious now: you mentioned Jirrigh in passing as 'immortal'. Was that status bestowed upon her by Lord Panthera? If she was immortal originally, how'd she end up as a harem girl? I need some backstory here! |
Hmmm... I forgot that not that many people know or remember the forum story these characters a based on. Okay, I'll try to work in some backstory to explain this. So much right now: Jirrigh is not Immortal by birth.
A few hints can also be found in the intro to chapter 30 of Otherworlds, since Pflarrian's diary entry there sums up the events from that forum story. There are not much hits though, since this summary focusses on Pflarrian and Mara.
Concolor wrote: | Further curiosity: Given that he had never entertained the thought that he might fall in love, what would be Lord Panthera's reaction now if something . . . permanent . . . were to happen to Jirrigh?
I just have this feeling ........ |
Hmmm... well, I can say that you do NOT want to be anywere near if that should happen. _________________ Tygon Panthera - name and species
www.planetfurry.com/~tygon/ |
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