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Crimson Abyss - A Sci-Fur Fantasy

 
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Scifer
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PostPosted: Thu Mar 11, 2004 5:27 am    Post subject: Crimson Abyss - A Sci-Fur Fantasy Reply with quote

Very Happy Guess what? Very Happy

This is my first furry. I started the prologue a while back, and as soon as I can get out of college, I'll post the prologue and the first chapters. The old grey raccoon has read the first bit of it and he commented that the prologue 'starts of human and then gets furry'.

Laughing

I'll post the first bit for y'all to evaluate as soon as I get home ... If my internet isn't completely buggered. Confused

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PostPosted: Fri Mar 12, 2004 10:15 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Phew. Sorry for the delay. Anyway, here's my story, broken down into chapters for easy consumption. Wink
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 12, 2004 10:16 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Here's chapter one.
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 12, 2004 10:18 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

And chapter 2. I haven't finished any more yet, but chapter three should be on it's way. There may well be some typos in this chapter, all the more stuff for me to put right. Just give me your opinion of what more needs doing.

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PostPosted: Wed Apr 14, 2004 2:03 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Right. Done a few updates. Here's the latest version of my story.

And directly below it - is Scifer's story, which will soon become a chapter in the main one.

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PostPosted: Wed Oct 13, 2004 2:16 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Well I downloaded and saved both stories to my comp, but I don't have the time to read them right now, but I will and I'll post my opinion afterwards.
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PostPosted: Thu Oct 14, 2004 12:30 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I read both of them And I find them both very interesting. Crimson Abys is probably the most promising as it has me asking what's going to happen next. The plot is well thought out and well exocuted.
Escape From Reality also has me asking what's going to happen next and I would like to have that answered. We now the Timeslide disapeared but what happened to Scifer and where/when is he. The plot on this one is also well thought out and well executed.

I would like to see more of both stories.

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PostPosted: Wed Oct 20, 2004 1:11 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Finally got time to read the first one, and I'm glad that I did. Well written with a good story, I quite liked it. Keep up the good work and all those complimenting phrases and what not.
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 20, 2004 3:53 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

WOO HOOO very nice my friend
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PostPosted: Wed May 11, 2005 10:54 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Just read scifer's story- excellent job man! wanting to see more! *nodnod*
Gonna try and read crimson abyss soon!

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PostPosted: Wed Oct 10, 2007 12:28 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I saw that these had been up here for a while but I have downloaded and read Crimson Abyss so far.

I has great potential to me. When I get some time I will read An Escape From Reality.

Keep up the good work.

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PostPosted: Wed Jan 09, 2008 7:49 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Okay, really dumb question probably, but...uhh, WHERE'RE THE DAMN STORIES SO I CAN CHECK THEM OUT??? Embarassed

Poked around his site and looked for attachments here;where dey at? Confused

Thanks
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 09, 2008 8:14 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Look at the 5th post from the top.
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 09, 2008 8:29 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Ah yesssss...so it was a dumb question.... Brick wall

DOH! And thanks! Smile .... Embarassed Confused Smile
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