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Scifer Registered User
Joined: 01 Mar 2004 Posts: 1518 Location: Boringville, UK
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Posted: Thu Mar 11, 2004 5:27 am Post subject: Crimson Abyss - A Sci-Fur Fantasy |
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Guess what?
This is my first furry. I started the prologue a while back, and as soon as I can get out of college, I'll post the prologue and the first chapters. The old grey raccoon has read the first bit of it and he commented that the prologue 'starts of human and then gets furry'.
I'll post the first bit for y'all to evaluate as soon as I get home ... If my internet isn't completely buggered. _________________ -=Scifer. Badgerfox.
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Scifer Registered User
Joined: 01 Mar 2004 Posts: 1518 Location: Boringville, UK
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Posted: Fri Mar 12, 2004 10:15 am Post subject: |
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Phew. Sorry for the delay. Anyway, here's my story, broken down into chapters for easy consumption. _________________ -=Scifer. Badgerfox.
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Scifer Registered User
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Posted: Fri Mar 12, 2004 10:16 am Post subject: |
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Here's chapter one. _________________ -=Scifer. Badgerfox.
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Scifer Registered User
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Posted: Fri Mar 12, 2004 10:18 am Post subject: |
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And chapter 2. I haven't finished any more yet, but chapter three should be on it's way. There may well be some typos in this chapter, all the more stuff for me to put right. Just give me your opinion of what more needs doing.
_________________ -=Scifer. Badgerfox.
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Scifer Registered User
Joined: 01 Mar 2004 Posts: 1518 Location: Boringville, UK
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Posted: Wed Apr 14, 2004 2:03 pm Post subject: |
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Right. Done a few updates. Here's the latest version of my story.
And directly below it - is Scifer's story, which will soon become a chapter in the main one. _________________ -=Scifer. Badgerfox.
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Henry_Hound Registered User
Joined: 15 Apr 2004 Posts: 792 Location: Somewhereville, MO
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Posted: Wed Oct 13, 2004 2:16 pm Post subject: |
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Well I downloaded and saved both stories to my comp, but I don't have the time to read them right now, but I will and I'll post my opinion afterwards. _________________ I'm a serial killer, it's a bad habbit.
I killed tony, lucky charms, and the silly rabbit. |
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Henry_Hound Registered User
Joined: 15 Apr 2004 Posts: 792 Location: Somewhereville, MO
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Posted: Thu Oct 14, 2004 12:30 am Post subject: |
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I read both of them And I find them both very interesting. Crimson Abys is probably the most promising as it has me asking what's going to happen next. The plot is well thought out and well exocuted.
Escape From Reality also has me asking what's going to happen next and I would like to have that answered. We now the Timeslide disapeared but what happened to Scifer and where/when is he. The plot on this one is also well thought out and well executed.
I would like to see more of both stories. _________________ I'm a serial killer, it's a bad habbit.
I killed tony, lucky charms, and the silly rabbit. |
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Vee Are Are Schee Mini-Boss
Joined: 12 Oct 2003 Posts: 943 Location: sneaking in dark corners
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Posted: Wed Oct 20, 2004 1:11 pm Post subject: |
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Finally got time to read the first one, and I'm glad that I did. Well written with a good story, I quite liked it. Keep up the good work and all those complimenting phrases and what not. |
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racky raccoon Registered User
Joined: 24 Mar 2004 Posts: 619 Location: MASH H.Q. (Essex) England
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Posted: Wed Oct 20, 2004 3:53 pm Post subject: |
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WOO HOOO very nice my friend _________________ A Pro From Dover.
Crash Survivor 08/04
He who seeks knowledge is never a fool.
-Mike Regan-
I want a Lawyer, a Doctor... A CHEESE SANDWICH
-Harley Quinn-
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shadow Registered User
Joined: 09 May 2005 Posts: 9 Location: Worthing,England, planet earth
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Posted: Wed May 11, 2005 10:54 am Post subject: |
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Just read scifer's story- excellent job man! wanting to see more! *nodnod*
Gonna try and read crimson abyss soon! _________________ / \
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Kellan Meig'h Administrator
Joined: 01 Apr 2007 Posts: 2044 Location: Just East of Indianapolis, Indiana
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Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2007 12:28 am Post subject: |
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I saw that these had been up here for a while but I have downloaded and read Crimson Abyss so far.
I has great potential to me. When I get some time I will read An Escape From Reality.
Keep up the good work.
Kellan _________________ "Старый боевой конь, Кeллан" |
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Howellfan Registered User
Joined: 15 Dec 2007 Posts: 188
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Posted: Wed Jan 09, 2008 7:49 pm Post subject: |
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Okay, really dumb question probably, but...uhh, WHERE'RE THE DAMN STORIES SO I CAN CHECK THEM OUT???
Poked around his site and looked for attachments here;where dey at?
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Teric Registered User
Joined: 11 Dec 2006 Posts: 2566 Location: Southern California
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Posted: Wed Jan 09, 2008 8:14 pm Post subject: |
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Look at the 5th post from the top. _________________ Styx: "Oh sure like flaming a dragon going to do massive damage, brave challenge there Teric." |
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Howellfan Registered User
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Posted: Wed Jan 09, 2008 8:29 pm Post subject: |
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Ah yesssss...so it was a dumb question....
DOH! And thanks! .... |
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