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Dingo Fenris Registered User
Joined: 25 Nov 2005 Posts: 51 Location: The Sunburnt Land
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Posted: Thu Feb 02, 2006 2:47 am Post subject: Yay finally a worthy pic |
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Heh well this is my first furry pic that I thought was worth while, I don't draw all too often and CONSTRUCTIVE crit wanted
Oh and if any one could PhotoShop it for me, it would be greatly appreciated. _________________ World Dictator...in 2015
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Danny Banned From Internets
Joined: 02 Apr 2004 Posts: 337 Location: Itīs actually Veeīs basement.
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Posted: Thu Feb 02, 2006 10:18 am Post subject: |
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Ah, the obligatory assault rifle everyoneīs first drawings have to contain and a katana for good measure...
...bigger hands. |
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Dingo Fenris Registered User
Joined: 25 Nov 2005 Posts: 51 Location: The Sunburnt Land
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Posted: Thu Feb 02, 2006 11:01 pm Post subject: |
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Yes I concur that its not too origninal, but man I have a hard time on hands, I believe more practice is in order _________________ World Dictator...in 2015
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Danny Banned From Internets
Joined: 02 Apr 2004 Posts: 337 Location: Itīs actually Veeīs basement.
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Posted: Fri Feb 03, 2006 9:07 am Post subject: |
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I wasnīt complaining - itīs just that I drew the same stuff when I started,
only worse. I doubt I could do better. |
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Typhun Registered User
Joined: 01 Oct 2004 Posts: 684 Location: Somerset, England - The left armpit of the universe
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Posted: Fri Feb 03, 2006 1:16 pm Post subject: |
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i like it! s' well posed and an orginal style. as danny said, try making the hands a bit bigger, and define the lines a bit more (i.e. inking it) and i think youll be there.
good luck. _________________ tho' the pressure will drop, and it loses its prop
and the pilots inclined to resign,
ill rejoice till i die-that i learned how to fly,
in that old-fasioned Avro of mine! |
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Dingo Fenris Registered User
Joined: 25 Nov 2005 Posts: 51 Location: The Sunburnt Land
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Posted: Fri Feb 03, 2006 6:47 pm Post subject: |
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Inking is certainly on my agenda, and the female figur is too, I drew a few nights back but in my opinion she needs a more defined form _________________ World Dictator...in 2015
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Kalysto Registered User
Joined: 22 Nov 2005 Posts: 18 Location: El Paso, TX
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Posted: Sat Feb 18, 2006 6:27 pm Post subject: |
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Neat female, if u do really want 2 get a more female-ish look, u can fine online human anatomy books, it's a great way 2 learn the anatomy. & I will gladly help u if u want. Check out my art at http://kalystograph.sheezyart.com/
-Kalysto _________________ "Every time I look in u'r eyes, Every day I'm watching u die, all these toughts I see in you" |
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Wodan Registered User
Joined: 16 Apr 2006 Posts: 1 Location: The Netherlands
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Posted: Sun Apr 16, 2006 5:49 pm Post subject: |
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If you would set the katana a little more backwards and diagonal, that would create a better effect.
His body is great, although you might want to increase the size of his left upper arm and shoulder.
I dont really get it with the pants, is his fly open?
The head and face expression look great.
I always liked bigger tails, but thats only a matter of own choise.
The female looks good too, but I dont really like are her straigt shoulders, women usually have shoulders poining down.
Also her eyebrows seem a little too large.
Dispite these minor things, both furries look great! |
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Dingo Fenris Registered User
Joined: 25 Nov 2005 Posts: 51 Location: The Sunburnt Land
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Posted: Tue Sep 12, 2006 3:43 am Post subject: |
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Well been drawing a bit, these are two of my latest works, improving (or so I like to think). _________________ World Dictator...in 2015
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Kushaba Registered User
Joined: 19 Jul 2006 Posts: 23 Location: Spanaway,Wa
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Posted: Wed Oct 25, 2006 11:41 am Post subject: |
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i like the look of it. i'm not so good on action poses or front veiws or other stuff like that take a look at my deviant art and you will see. _________________ www.kushaba.deviantart.com Visit it and plz comment.
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