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hikaru Administrator
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Pat The Fox Moderator
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Posted: Fri Nov 08, 2002 12:30 am Post subject: |
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A nice chapter in my own opinion. It developed the plot quite nicely. _________________ Pat The Fox
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swiftfoxhound Registered User
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Posted: Fri Nov 08, 2002 2:23 am Post subject: |
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I agree it certainly made my day. _________________ If you don't root for your team then get the hell out of the stadium! |
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Nameless Site Owner
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Posted: Fri Nov 08, 2002 2:45 am Post subject: |
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Interesting Chapter.
I wonder who that Mori character is.
Would not surprise me if he was actually Arden. _________________ I'm a nut, but there are those who appreciate me for it. |
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anthony Site Owner
Joined: 12 Nov 2001 Posts: 1304 Location: Norway
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Posted: Fri Nov 08, 2002 10:55 am Post subject: |
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Nope...
Arden WAS in the chapter, but it wasn't Mori...
(Much too polite, for one thing)
If you study the big dragon fight scene, and what happens afterwards, I think you'll agree with me...
But I'm still waiting for a fox named Fish to reappear... _________________ "My name's Lion, Anthony Lion"
A fur with a license to purr...
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Nameless Site Owner
Joined: 06 Sep 2002 Posts: 1368 Location: Vienna, Austria
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Posted: Fri Nov 08, 2002 12:21 pm Post subject: |
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Either Mori is Arden or he was not in the chapter.
The dwarf at the end is the Necromancer.
Read the chapter again, all the things Mori says, does and knows fit with him being Arden
He knows a lot about the armor, much more than he could get from a cursory examination.
He knows how to properly dry her.
He is not particularly interested in her (or how unusual she is) because he knows her very well.
Read all the things he says, they fit with the things Arden has done and knows. (No furs where he comes from, but has met them in his travels. Knows Ruddygore by reputation. He has made mistakes that he is trying to undo by helping her.)
He is not that polite, but it is possible that he is "wearing the Mask" with the goal of protecting her / taking her to Ruddygore. _________________ I'm a nut, but there are those who appreciate me for it. |
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Fishburne Administrator
Joined: 23 Jul 2002 Posts: 596 Location: Plano, Texas
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Posted: Fri Nov 08, 2002 1:55 pm Post subject: |
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anthony wrote: | Nope...
Arden WAS in the chapter, but it wasn't Mori...
(Much too polite, for one thing)
If you study the big dragon fight scene, and what happens afterwards, I think you'll agree with me...
But I'm still waiting for a fox named Fish to reappear... |
Yup
Agreed
Not Arden...but he was there.
As for a fox named Fish... _________________ "Do not Taunt Happy Fun God" -Cthulhu |
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swiftfoxhound Registered User
Joined: 10 Oct 2002 Posts: 13 Location: Texas
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Posted: Fri Nov 08, 2002 2:10 pm Post subject: fish |
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Was he not supposed to be broght back to life by takeing somones unihabited body? If I remember the previous owner's soul was destroyed. _________________ If you don't root for your team then get the hell out of the stadium! |
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Nameless Site Owner
Joined: 06 Sep 2002 Posts: 1368 Location: Vienna, Austria
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Posted: Fri Nov 08, 2002 2:36 pm Post subject: |
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Would either of you please tell me who you think Arden was ?
And why you think so ?
I've read the last few chapters again, and everything I read points to him being Mori. _________________ I'm a nut, but there are those who appreciate me for it. |
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Bearion Registered User
Joined: 01 Jun 2002 Posts: 278 Location: Bay Area, California
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Posted: Sat Nov 09, 2002 2:30 am Post subject: |
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Nameless wrote: | Would either of you please tell me who you think Arden was ?
And why you think so ? |
Check the last three paragraphs of Chapter 20. Our fine author is making us guess.
For myself, if Mori is NOT Arden, then who is he? I'm stumped.
Another great Chapter, BTW. |
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Nameless Site Owner
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Posted: Sat Nov 09, 2002 5:10 am Post subject: |
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Bearion wrote: | Nameless wrote: | Would either of you please tell me who you think Arden was ?
And why you think so ? |
Check the last three paragraphs of Chapter 20. Our fine author is making us guess. |
Yes, I did. He says very clearly that the dwarf is (possesed by) Rathsmon, the Necromancer. _________________ I'm a nut, but there are those who appreciate me for it. |
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hikaru Administrator
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James R. Lane Registered User
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Posted: Sun Nov 10, 2002 12:36 am Post subject: |
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Hikaru wrote: | As for Mori, I can't comment on that or it would spoil the plot. |
Spoiling the plot is something you do NOT want to do, or your esteemed editor might possibly make your mangy HIDE into a RUG---
_________________ James R. Lane
author of
"Redeeming Factors"
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SkunkFox Registered User
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*Considers Hikaru the luckiest bugger on the planet now!!*
SkunkFox *grumbling enviously to himself now:evil:....wait a sec! I'm published too!* _________________ Insane and loving it!
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Nameless Site Owner
Joined: 06 Sep 2002 Posts: 1368 Location: Vienna, Austria
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Posted: Sun Nov 10, 2002 5:10 am Post subject: |
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A little more food for thought about Mori:
Read Chapter 18, the scene where Wendy (Teyah's sister) leaves the farm.
The man could of course be a summoned creature, but he could just as well be a projection of Arden or he might have shape-shifted. _________________ I'm a nut, but there are those who appreciate me for it. |
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