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Nameless
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Hmmm...
The equines have hooves, wouldn't a moose have them as well? You wrote something about Mr. Moose wearing orthopedic shoes. Or were those orthopedic horseshooes (mooseshoes)?
I really hope that don't have to cover every hair. I guess that restriction doesn't apply to fur except for the headfur. Otherwise they might have a little problem... 
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Aslaug
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If I remember right...a moose actually has split hooves. So he could wear shoes  |
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James R. Lane
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| Aslaug wrote: | | If I remember right...a moose actually has split hooves. So he could wear shoes |
Imagine how well they could tapdance---! 
(Or maybe not...) 
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Aslaug
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*laughs* Good one, Jim... 
Well, next week is chapter 5...and then a pause...and I am telling you, you're going to hate me, but I'll let you find out about that for yourselves.
Anyway, I hope people do enjoy the opening phases. It's always a little strange at first, before the actual 'action' (whatever form it might take) starts in a story. Doing two stories at once naturally means I have two such opening phases to do.
Once things get underway, though, I very much hope you'll all enjoy what I have in store for you... |
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Folkert
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Well I Finally caught up.
I like where this is going.
I just don't understand why I am going to hate you... I just don't see it happening. |
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James R. Lane
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| Folkert wrote: | | ...I just don't understand why I am going to hate you... I just don't see it happening. |
Trust me. She has this talent. 
Personally (as a writer) I'm looking forward to seeing how she accomplishes it--- 
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shadowjaguar
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| Posted: Sun Oct 23, 2005 8:33 pm Post subject: |
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| James R. Lane wrote: | | Folkert wrote: | | ...I just don't understand why I am going to hate you... I just don't see it happening. |
Trust me. She has this talent.
Personally (as a writer) I'm looking forward to seeing how she accomplishes it--- |
Oh..no denying that. She has a talent for doing any kind of emotion in a story...and makeing it affect us poor readers!
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D.F. Thompson
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Well if she couldn't reach out and grab us by the scruff of the neck with her writing. Most of us wouldn't still be here now. Being able to write well is only part of it, the author also has to convey emotion thru their writing as well. With out emotions or feeling the story would be just so many words. M'Lady as far as I'm concerned I'll gladly stay on this emotional roller coaster. WHEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!! 
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Valaina
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Well, no matter how much I personally grumble and grouse, the filly knows I don't mean a word of it (I hope...>.<) So, bring it on!
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Wolf Starchaser
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| D.F. Thompson wrote: | | Well if she couldn't reach out and grab us by the scruff of the neck with her writing. Most of us wouldn't still be here now. |
And I certainly wouldn't have spent the better part of two weekends tearing through Trans1 like Taz through a softwood forest.
| D.F. Thompson wrote: | | M'Lady as far as I'm concerned I'll gladly stay on this emotional roller coaster. WHEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!! |
Ditto.
*pout* Why can't we have lesbians kissing in the street unmolested here?
Ave Scriptor! 
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Aslaug
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Probably a matter of difference of sexual morals, Mr. Starchaser?
Anyway, chapter 5 is posted and, like I said, I'm willing to wager that people will hate me. You see...four chapters of AVC are coming up...probably including a bonus chapter the week I turn 30.
So you'll have to wait with chapter 6 a while yet.
*finds her flak-jacket and steel-helmet and hides in her bomb-shelter* |
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Nameless
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Now, it will be really interesting how you handle that.
And it is REALLY not nice to stop for a break right there...
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Aslaug
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*whistles innocently* Not nice? Me? Whatever do you mean?
I'm completely innocent. |
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Nameless
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Oh, and I don't think it was any coincidence that Jean was talking about "Spin" just before IT happened.
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AmigaDragon
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| Nameless wrote: | | And it is REALLY not nice to stop for a break right there... |
It's a downright evil place to stop the chapter. 
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