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Nameless Site Owner
Joined: 06 Sep 2002 Posts: 1368 Location: Vienna, Austria
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Posted: Wed Oct 19, 2005 7:29 am Post subject: |
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Hmmm...
The equines have hooves, wouldn't a moose have them as well? You wrote something about Mr. Moose wearing orthopedic shoes. Or were those orthopedic horseshooes (mooseshoes)?
I really hope that don't have to cover every hair. I guess that restriction doesn't apply to fur except for the headfur. Otherwise they might have a little problem... _________________ I'm a nut, but there are those who appreciate me for it. |
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Aslaug Site Owner
Joined: 04 Jan 2005 Posts: 1861 Location: Slagelse, Denmark
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Posted: Wed Oct 19, 2005 8:08 am Post subject: |
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If I remember right...a moose actually has split hooves. So he could wear shoes |
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James R. Lane Registered User
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Posted: Wed Oct 19, 2005 12:24 pm Post subject: |
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Aslaug wrote: | If I remember right...a moose actually has split hooves. So he could wear shoes |
Imagine how well they could tapdance---!
(Or maybe not...) _________________ James R. Lane
author of
"Redeeming Factors"
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Aslaug Site Owner
Joined: 04 Jan 2005 Posts: 1861 Location: Slagelse, Denmark
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Posted: Wed Oct 19, 2005 2:01 pm Post subject: |
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*laughs* Good one, Jim...
Well, next week is chapter 5...and then a pause...and I am telling you, you're going to hate me, but I'll let you find out about that for yourselves.
Anyway, I hope people do enjoy the opening phases. It's always a little strange at first, before the actual 'action' (whatever form it might take) starts in a story. Doing two stories at once naturally means I have two such opening phases to do.
Once things get underway, though, I very much hope you'll all enjoy what I have in store for you... |
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Folkert Registered User
Joined: 26 Jun 2005 Posts: 169 Location: Somewhere in The Northeast
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Posted: Wed Oct 19, 2005 6:59 pm Post subject: |
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Well I Finally caught up.
I like where this is going.
I just don't understand why I am going to hate you... I just don't see it happening. |
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James R. Lane Registered User
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Posted: Wed Oct 19, 2005 7:35 pm Post subject: |
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Folkert wrote: | ...I just don't understand why I am going to hate you... I just don't see it happening. |
Trust me. She has this talent.
Personally (as a writer) I'm looking forward to seeing how she accomplishes it--- _________________ James R. Lane
author of
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shadowjaguar Registered User
Joined: 25 Feb 2005 Posts: 184 Location: Georgia, USA
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Posted: Sun Oct 23, 2005 8:33 pm Post subject: |
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James R. Lane wrote: | Folkert wrote: | ...I just don't understand why I am going to hate you... I just don't see it happening. |
Trust me. She has this talent.
Personally (as a writer) I'm looking forward to seeing how she accomplishes it--- |
Oh..no denying that. She has a talent for doing any kind of emotion in a story...and makeing it affect us poor readers! _________________ "I'm not sure yet, but it'll involve a bucket of sour cream, three carrots, an architect lamp and a lump hammer. Possibly a fish." -Jean LeBrun, Transitions Chapter 22
You have to admit, that is funny....and puts soooo many pictures in your head. |
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D.F. Thompson Registered User
Joined: 25 Jan 2005 Posts: 430 Location: Back home in Jenks
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Posted: Mon Oct 24, 2005 12:50 am Post subject: |
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Well if she couldn't reach out and grab us by the scruff of the neck with her writing. Most of us wouldn't still be here now. Being able to write well is only part of it, the author also has to convey emotion thru their writing as well. With out emotions or feeling the story would be just so many words. M'Lady as far as I'm concerned I'll gladly stay on this emotional roller coaster. WHEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!! _________________ Beware the light at the end of the tunnel, just might be the headlights of my speeding truck. =0.0.=
http://www.furaffinity.net/user/dana/ |
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Valaina Registered User
Joined: 18 Aug 2005 Posts: 45 Location: West Yorkshire, England
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Posted: Mon Oct 24, 2005 11:18 am Post subject: |
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Well, no matter how much I personally grumble and grouse, the filly knows I don't mean a word of it (I hope...>.<) So, bring it on! _________________ A quote from my mother: "You know, over the past few years, you've -really- developed a prickly exterior..." |
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Wolf Starchaser Registered User
Joined: 18 Apr 2001 Posts: 89 Location: Northeast Oklahoma
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Posted: Tue Oct 25, 2005 4:48 am Post subject: |
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D.F. Thompson wrote: | Well if she couldn't reach out and grab us by the scruff of the neck with her writing. Most of us wouldn't still be here now. | And I certainly wouldn't have spent the better part of two weekends tearing through Trans1 like Taz through a softwood forest.
D.F. Thompson wrote: | M'Lady as far as I'm concerned I'll gladly stay on this emotional roller coaster. WHEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!! |
Ditto.
*pout* Why can't we have lesbians kissing in the street unmolested here?
Ave Scriptor! _________________ "For a man to help others with all his gifts and native strength: that is the noblest work." - Sophocles
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Aslaug Site Owner
Joined: 04 Jan 2005 Posts: 1861 Location: Slagelse, Denmark
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Posted: Tue Oct 25, 2005 7:04 am Post subject: |
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Probably a matter of difference of sexual morals, Mr. Starchaser?
Anyway, chapter 5 is posted and, like I said, I'm willing to wager that people will hate me. You see...four chapters of AVC are coming up...probably including a bonus chapter the week I turn 30.
So you'll have to wait with chapter 6 a while yet.
*finds her flak-jacket and steel-helmet and hides in her bomb-shelter* |
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Nameless Site Owner
Joined: 06 Sep 2002 Posts: 1368 Location: Vienna, Austria
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Posted: Tue Oct 25, 2005 10:53 am Post subject: |
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Now, it will be really interesting how you handle that.
And it is REALLY not nice to stop for a break right there... _________________ I'm a nut, but there are those who appreciate me for it. |
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Aslaug Site Owner
Joined: 04 Jan 2005 Posts: 1861 Location: Slagelse, Denmark
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Posted: Tue Oct 25, 2005 11:24 am Post subject: |
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*whistles innocently* Not nice? Me? Whatever do you mean?
I'm completely innocent. |
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Nameless Site Owner
Joined: 06 Sep 2002 Posts: 1368 Location: Vienna, Austria
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Posted: Tue Oct 25, 2005 11:53 am Post subject: |
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Oh, and I don't think it was any coincidence that Jean was talking about "Spin" just before IT happened. _________________ I'm a nut, but there are those who appreciate me for it. |
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AmigaDragon Registered User
Joined: 05 Dec 2004 Posts: 840 Location: Far Northern Minnesota
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Posted: Tue Oct 25, 2005 2:38 pm Post subject: |
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Nameless wrote: | And it is REALLY not nice to stop for a break right there... |
It's a downright evil place to stop the chapter. _________________ "Cogito, ergo es. I think, therefore you is." Ray D. Tutto (King of the Moon) to Baron Munschaussen |
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